Papers of Legendary Author Jack Vance Now at The University of Texas at Tyler



Papers of Legendary Author Jack Vance Now at The University of Texas at Tyler

Billy Cryer

In late April of 1967, Ursula K. Le Guin sent off a handwritten note to 6383 Valley View Road in Oakland, California. “Dear Mr. Vance,” began Le Guin in her unmistakable compact, graceful pen strokes. “This is a fan letter—an unmitigated fan letter. I have read all your books & stories with the greatest pleasure, and then after a while re-read them with greater pleasure. There are some lovely imaginations at work in s.f. now, but the work itself is so often botched or sketched or compromised; yours never; you are competent, an artist. Write more books, write more books. Yours gratefully, Ursula K. Le Guin.”

This letter—together with a substantial archive of author papers—now resides at The University of Texas at Tyler as the Jack Vance Collection. One of the most acclaimed and influential American science fiction and fantasy authors of the twentieth century, Jack Vance (1916-2013) remains one of the most obscure and least studied literary figures. Winner of multiple Hugo Awards, a Nebula Award, and two World Fantasy Awards—as well as the Edgar Award for mystery fiction and the Science Fiction and Fantasy Writers of America Grand Master honor—Vance authored more than sixty novels and well over a hundred short stories over a period of seven decades. Since the appearance of “The World-Thinker” in 1945 in Thrilling Wonder Stories, Vance’s richly imagined worlds, vivid prose style, and mesmerizing narratives have inspired generations of writers. Vance shaped contemporary genre fiction in ways that academic scholarship has yet to fully explore.

The Jack Vance Collection comprises more than 60 boxes of materials spanning the full breadth of Vance’s life and career. The collection includes handwritten and typescript copies of dozens of manuscripts; juvenilia and other unpublished works; extensive correspondence with editors, publishers, fellow authors, and readers; notebooks, personal diaries, and travel journals; numerous photographs; and an array of realia—including Vance’s musical instruments. Materials produced by the author date from approximately the 1940s through the early 2000s. Several of Vance’s early manuscripts are in the hands of individual collectors, and a small collection of Vance papers are housed at Boston University’s Howard Gotlieb Archival Research Center. However, the majority of the author’s manuscripts and nearly all the other personal papers are now located at UT Tyler’s Robert R. Muntz Library.

The manuscripts of Vance’s published works are particularly comprehensive. They represent nearly all of Vance’s major works, including those that comprise his most celebrated series, such as The Dying Earth, Lyonesse, and Demon Princes. Vance wrote initial drafts of novels and stories by hand, then made extensive revisions on typescript manuscripts prepared by his wife Norma Vance. “Norma was strongly supportive of my writing from the start, and we began working as a team,” wrote Vance in his 2009 autobiography. “I cannot emphasize enough how hard Norma worked over the course of my career—certainly as hard as I have, if not more” (86). The manuscripts are a testament to the magnitude of Norma Vance’s contributions to her husband’s success.

Also among these early materials are a handful of Vance’s college English and journalism papers while at University of California, Berkeley during the late 1930s and early 1940s. These papers glimmer with Vance’s trademark sardonic wit. For one English essay assignment, the student was tasked with an analysis of Henry David Thoreau’s Walden. In a discussion on the chapter “Solitude,” Vance argues that the author enjoyed a “compromising kind of solitude,” that, in fact, Thoreau was at best a “parlor hermit”: “He could have achieved a real solitude by moving to Wyoming or Montana,” observes Vance. “But there would also have been Apaches eager to remove Thoreau’s scalp. He may have thought of this and decided that Concord was far enough.” Vance concludes his essay on a note of frustration about the restrictive nature of prescriptive writing topics, as a general practice: 

However, all of this theorizing to the side, what is there to say? I dislike the idea of writing with any seriousness in so admittedly mechanical a vehicle as a weekly theme, classically scribbled during the hour preceding class. I could very easily comment, with considerable feeling, upon Death Valley in the moonlight, and speculatively, speak of frangipani blossoms and white sails bellying to the trade winds, and even more speculatively tell of the unimaginable grandeur and empty black vastness of interplanetary space.

The Jack Vance Collection was acquired through the efforts of Dr. Billy Cryer, who is curating the collection—and who for several years made regular trips to the Vance residence in Oakland to begin organizing the late author’s papers. Special acknowledgement goes to the Vance estate, as well as UT Tyler archivist Rachel Motes, who has facilitated the transition of the collection to its new repository. A finding aid is currently in preparation and will be made available, along with the collection, once it has been fully organized. For inquiries about the Jack Vance Collection, please contact Billy Cryer at bcryer@uttyler.edu.


WORKS CITED

Silverberg, Robert. “The Eyes of the Overworld and The Dying Earth.” Writers of the 21st Century: Jack Vance, edited by Tim Underwood and Chuck Miller, Taplinger Publishing Company, 1980, pp. 117-129.

Vance, Jack. This is Me, Jack Vance! (Or, More Properly, This is “I”). Subterranean Press, 2009.


Africanfuturism and Francophone Fiction: Science, Spiritualism, and Speculation



Africanfuturism and Francophone Fiction: Science, Spiritualism, and Speculation

Isaac Joslin

Differences in worldviews are the result of culturally specific language, which when examined more closely, often reveals an underlying commonality between human societies. A line from Nnedi Okorafor’s novel, Noor (2021) highlights the examination of science and spiritualism within Africanfuturist francophone fiction. In Okorafor’s story, a stranger named DNA who accompanies AO, the protagonist explains: “‘Science is mostly witchcraft… See what it has done to humanity, and the more science there is, the more there is to see. You are a spirit.’” (Okorafor, 2021 46). Although AO is a hybrid machine-human cyborg, DNA’s assertion that she is above all, a spirit, which is something beyond the scope of scientific rationalism, is a clear acknowledgment of its limits. This personal recognition of the spiritual quality of a human body whose life is nonetheless intertwined with the science of supporting cybernetic technologies serves to further reinforce his equation of science to witchcraft, indicating the presence of two distinct yet functionally similar systems of engaging the world. The implications of the above quotation, therefore, are that science has expanded to the point that it has enveloped humanity, which must be reminded that it is not merely material, but also spiritual. From a postcolonial African perspective, the application of “scientific” knowledge, reason, and rationality, were the premises upon which European colonial projects posited their objectives to discover and “civilize” other cultures around the globe. Through theorizations of African cultures and spiritual traditions in the writings of John Mbiti, Felwine Sarr, and Achille Mbembe, this article will explore indigenous African conceptions of temporality and existence through an Africanfuturist reading of select Francophone African texts by Boubacar Boris Diop and Jean-Marie Adiaffi.

“Every Mukamba is a story-teller,” writes the late John Mbiti (1983, 3) in the introduction to his collection of Akamba Stories, a Bantu indigenous people group inhabiting the Kenyan and Tanzanian borderlands. This perception of human beings as fundamentally narrative in nature resonates with the theoretical concept of ecolinguistics, which Arran Stibbe (2015) defines as such: “The stories are important because they influence how individuals think, and if they are spread widely across a culture then they can become stories-we-live-by and influence prevailing modes of thought in the whole society” (16). The stories that comprise the worldviews of many indigenous African cultures, like the Akamba depict a world that is infused with spiritual significance, as Mbiti further clarifies: “To speak of Akamba religion is almost misleading, since religious beliefs and practices are interwoven in the whole of life and do not constitute a department of their own.” (1983, 14). In his essay on “African traditional religion,” Kofi Asare Opoku (1993) expounds on this worldview while also invoking Yoruba and Akan spiritual traditions from West Africa, saying that “[e]verything begins with God” (71). Opoku argues that “God created man and placed him at the centre of the cosmos, not as its master but as a caretaker in a dependent role, and man is expected to remain in harmony with the universe since he is part of it” (73). The key point in this religious worldview that infuses all aspects of life is that of connection and relationship, such that Opoku continues by proposing that “[t]o be human means to belong to a family or community [… and] community is not restricted to relations with human beings along. There is community with nature since man is part of nature and is expected to cooperate with it” (1993, 76-77). One can therefore read in the stories of many indigenous African cultures, a worldview in which humans participate in the natural and spiritual world, both of which are intertwined through a divine presence-in-absence that animates the existential fabrics of the natural and spiritual worlds together. The kind of spiritualism embodied by traditional African cultures has strong implications for understanding temporality, science, and human subjectivity in ways that contrast starkly with predominantly Eurocentric modes of thought. These notions are explored further in this essay by a concerted readings of fictional African texts—stories—analyzed through the theoretical lens of Africanfuturism.

Africanfururism is distinct from Afrofuturism, although the two share many salient features. Ytasha Womack describes Afrofuturist mixing of science-fiction and fantasy as a means of “imagining possible futures through a black cultural lens” (2013, 9). Reynaldo Anderson articulates Afrofuturism 2.0 as a project for “humanity that is not bound up with the ideals of white Enlightenment universalism, critical theory, science, or technology” (2016, 231). Interestingly, however, Afrofuturism operates through a fundamentally diasporic lens in that its constructions of science-fiction and fantasy remain entrenched within a particularly Western, if not uniquely African American perspective. For this reason, Nnedi Okorafor (2019) coined the term, “Africanfuturism,” which like Afrofuturism is an artistic movement that challenges dominant narratives about Africa, though from an explicitly non-Western perspective, emphasizing the centrality of the African continent and its diverse indigenous cultures. Africanfuturism, as such, promotes visions of, “a technologically advanced Africa that has overcome many of its currently daunting challenges and is enjoying the benefits of socio-economic and political development…” (Oku 2021, 76). Kimberly Cleveland’s recent book (2024), Africanfuturism, highlights many interesting works of art, although predominantly from anglophone Africa. This essay will apply Africanfuturism as a framework for investigating francophone African stories, as well as the manners in which they are told, in order to articulate alternative constructs of time, spirits, and science from an open plurality of cultural perspectives steeped in indigenous African practices, philosophies, and cosmographies.

Although anglophone fiction has typically dominated the field of Afrofuturist discourse—for example the recent anthology edited by Sheree Renée Thomas, Oghenechovwe Donald Ekpeki, and Zelda Knight, Africa Risen: A New Era of Speculative Fiction (2022)—the globalization and popularity of the genre and its constitutive sub-genres, as well as the evolution of the theoretical perspectives outlined above, have led to the emergence of a discourse on francophone Afrofuturist artworks. For example, in the introduction to a special issue of the journal, Oeuvres et Critiques dedicated to French language science fiction, editors Paul Scott and Antje Ziethen (2019) explore the concepts of futurist fiction and Afrofuturism in francophone textual traditions, including an invitation to “apprehend science-fiction from a particularly African perspective” (Scott and Ziethen 2019, 12).1 This notion, alluded to in the differentiation of Africanfuturism, takes its theoretical and cultural distance from European enlightenment ideal of linear time, singular narratives, and mechanization as the ultimate form of technological progress. More recently, still, the journal, Études Littéraires Africaines published a special issue on “Futurs africains: utopies et dystopies” [African futures: utopias and dystopias] in which works by francophone authors, including Thierno Monénembo, Léonora Miano, Abdelaziz Belkhodja, and Sony Labou Tansi are analyzed as representative examples of what Ninon Chavoz and Anthnoy Mangeon, author of L’Afrique au future: le renversement des mondes (2022), articulate the particularities of francophone Africanfuturist fiction vis-à-vis the dominant anglophone productions within the genre. They argue that because of French assimilationist policies throughout the African continent, francophone writers are invariably more concerned with, “la thématique de l’inversion et du renversement des mondes” [a thematic of inversion and reversal of worlds] (Chavoz and Mangeon 2022, 14). Not only has Afrofuturism gained traction in francophone literary and critical discourse, the popular French publication, Usbek&Rica released its 38th issue in print in January of 2023,2 which includes a 40-page dossier on Afrofuturism and a reference to the book, Afrofuturisms: Ecology, Humanity, and Francophone Cultural Expressions (Kloetzli 2023, 158). The uptick in academic and popular publications on Afrofuturist francophone productions signals an important moment to investigate further the themes of progress and technology, as well as the languages and temporalities employed in the articulation of such concepts, from a critical postcolonial perspective.

In a particularly salient article on the early theatre of Sony Labou Tansi, Céline Gahungu explains some of the particularities of francophone Africanfuturist fiction by marking a distinction between science-fiction and political-fiction (2022). Her analysis of four plays from the early 1970’s, all of which are set at the fin-de-siècle of the late 1990’s, illuminates not only the differences between these two anticipatory forms of storytelling, but also some striking commonalities. Political-fiction poses the futurist hypothesis with regard to “the polemic and political question of ‘development’” and its concomitant values of “personal enrichment, productivity, and global competitiveness” constitute the fundamental axes of a worldview hinging upon disaster (Gahungu 2022, 65). The significant difference between this perspective and that of science-fiction is that the projected societal or planetary cataclysm is predicated upon the slow and steady accumulation of toxicities resulting from the unfettered continuation of globalist extractive development practices rather than the result of some advanced technological weapon or of “a scientific discourse gone crazy” (Gahungu 2022, 67). In both cases, the science and politics of societal and planetary decomposition in Sony Labou Tansi’s works depict a future in which the dehumanizing logics inherent in colonialism and in its postcolonial reconfigurations that continue to prioritize profit margins above any other forms of perceived progress, are called into question through the revelation of their ultimately destructive consequences.3 These logics that dominate global discourses of development described by Senegalese political economist Felwine Sarr in his book, Afrotopia, through an ecolinguistic configuration. Sarr points out that “[k]ey words such as development, economic emergence, growth, and struggles against poverty are, for some, the principal concepts of the dominant episteme of the era.” (2019, xiii). Sarr concludes that contemporary global society operates according to predetermined rules and that “[p]rogress, reason, growth, order—these will become the keywords of the episteme of modernity in the West” (2019, 6). By contrast, one can posit alternative notions of progress and development through the telling of future stories in which alternative political, scientific, and epistemological orientations enter into the realm of possibility through the speculative turn.

Boubacar Boris Diop’s novel, Le Temps de Tamango, first published in 1981, constitutes one such narrative example of futurist francophone political-fiction. The fracturing of time and narrative identities are multiplied in ways that defy the singular and linear logics that define commonly accepted notions of time and subjectivity. In this novel, which refuses to be a novel, the main character, N’Dongo Thiam, is an engineer educated in Germany who, having returned to Senegal, also dabbles in the literary arts as well as subversive political activities. N’Dongo’s identity is intertwined with Tamango, an alias devised by the dissident political group M.A.R.S. for the person whose intended task was to carry out an assassination plot on the State’s military counselor, the Frenchman, François Navarro.4 Interestingly, Tamango is also the name of the fictional slave rebel invented by Prosper Mérimée in the 1929 novella by that name but modeled on an actual historical figure. When a bullet strikes Mamba, the fictional leader of the general strike of 1968 in Dakar, the protest errs aimlessly through the streets before petering out, much like the aftermath of Tamango’s rebellion, as N’Dongo reflects on the tragic irony: “After the revolt and the victory he must have had to let the ship float about at random. That’s what got him lost. He did not know how to steer a ship. Nice topic for a novel” (Diop 2010, 42).5 A piece of literary deconstruction, the text mixes facts and fictions with pasts and futures and can be likened to a meta-narrative of the detective genre of “polar,” as an intellectual is interested in uncovering what the informed reader can interpret to be the fictionalized events that transpired around the actual popular uprisings of May 1968 in Dakar. The resultant text of Diop’s novel is what this anonymous researcher has uncovered in the projected future of 2063, one hundred and three years after Senegalese national independence in 1960. His narrative, which is broken up into three parts, each one supplanted with a section of “notes” compiled by the Narrator6 in his efforts to reconstruct the time and space of Dakar in 1968, which has seemingly vanished from memory after a successful socialist revolution that is to have taken place in 2015 and drastically altered the national landscape (Diop 2010, 60). In particular, the narrator is interested in uncovering the story of N’Dongo Thiam whose implication in the events remains sufficiently occult and ambiguous.

Taken as an example of a futuristic “Afrotopian” imaginary, Boubacar Boris Diop’s novel Le Temps de Tamango is particularly salient for its time-traveling temporal distortions. Although the specific setting is the 1968 Dakar demonstrations,7 which the Narrator portrays in his descriptions of the protesters and the revolutionary group M.A.R.S. The protagonist, N’Dongo Thiam, is an integral member of this group. Over the course of his reconstruction of events, the Narrator who had previously known and had some correspondence with N’Dongo while the latter was studying in Germany, reencounters N’Dongo at a Christmas party after many years. He recalls that in one of his letters to N’Dongo he had spoken of Samba Diallo, the protagonist of Cheikh Hamidou Kane’s L’Aventure ambiguë (1961), and how he had remained unchanged, true to his origins, even when in France. (Diop 2010, 69) Unlike Samba Diallo, however, N’Dongo had never replied to his letter. In some ways, one can read N’Dongo as a specific type: the European-educated African intellectual who has taken up the novelistic project as means to express longing and homesickness while simultaneously composing a discourse critical of Franco-African relations. N’Dongo’s particular project was entitled Les Fenêtres de Lauchammer, which he describes thusly: “So you sat down by your window and you described Africa from the other side of Lauchammer. And after ten years you realized you were telling stories to fall asleep to” (Diop 2010, 70, my translation). N’Dongo describes how he tore up the manuscript and threw it to the fire, an act that recalls how Rimbaud would have done the same with his Une saison en enfer, wherein the narrator wishes to express to N’Dongo how his having thrown the manuscript in the fire may very well have been his very own way of writing his Windows of Lauchammer. Destruction and production are conflated in the creative act. A narrator refusing to be a novelist and an impossible novel are only the first layer of estrangement. N’Dongo as a reprisal of Tamango and perhaps also as a double of Kane’s fictional protagonist, Samba Diallo. Furthermore, there is an alternate narrator whose story is reconstructed through the commentary of the Narrator’s “notes” and who is revealed at the very end of the story to be N’Dongo’s friend Kader (Diop 2010, 162). The multilayered identities and temporalities in Diop’s novel are indicative of an Africanfuturist worldview that articulates numerous possibilities for what can be.

In essence, the novel’s fractured and refabricated narrative threads create the effect of a literary time machine, demonstrating how past, present, and future, are all related and relative to one another. This notion of interrelated temporalities corresponds to what John Biti argues in terms of time, explaining how for the Akamba “time is divided into two main sections: Tene (the Past), and Mituki (the immediate Present). Everything moves back into the Tene period, and past events constitute Time” (Mbiti 1983, 17). Although there is a great geographical distance between Kenya and Senegal, the temporal vision presented in Boubacar Boris Diop’s novel reflects a similar understanding of the present time feeding into the past. Writing about the 1960’s during the 1980’s, but projecting another 80 years into the future, as Diop does, reveals the ways in which past histories are reconstructed through present perspectives, and also that present perspectives will become those reconstructed histories of yet-to-be-realized future perspectives. To this point, Sarr defines the concept of Afro-contemporaneity as “[t]o name one’s own contemporaneity is to inscribe it within a project: to give it meaning, indicating the values it must accomplish, and to create a space and an environment where these values can be accomplished. Afro-contemporaneity is this present time, this psychological continuum of the lived experience of Africans…” (2019, 22). The project of making one’s own time and giving it meaning is inherently linked to the notion of occupying time, which implies the articulation of activity in the world of individual and collective agency. This very notion of temporal agency, or being in time within a particularly African worldview will be explored further through an examination of culturally determined thought processes and worldviews in relation to specific cultural ideologies—spiritual or scientific—that are in turn informed by a unique cultural orientation toward existence.

A scientific understanding of time, agency, and the world rests at the base of human cultures, as it precipitates a common understanding of narratological identity construction, the capacity to envision and engage in useful and beneficial activities, and to do so in a manner that corresponds with the environmental orderliness of a given population. In her book, Yurugu: An Afrikan-Centered Critique of European Thought and Behavior, Marimba Ani employs the concept of utamawazo, which is like the concept of a worldview, but differs in that as it “places more emphasis on conscious mental operations and refers to the way in which both speculative and nonspeculative thought is structured by ideology and bio-cultural experience” (Ani 1994, 15). Furthermore, Ani argues that the thought processes of a culture are dependent upon what she terms the asili or “the germinal principle of the being of a culture, its essence (Ani 1994, 12). Accordingly, there is a certain worldview or conglomerate of thought processes resulting from a cultural essence, which indicate how the world is thought and experienced. Furthermore, she delineates the collective affect of a culture’s asili, which she defines as concept of utamahoro, which is “the vitality of a culture . . . a force made powerful through its collectiveness” (Ani 1994, 16-17). The central question for our analysis here is what precisely constitutes the cultural essence of a culture —African or European—and how does this essence manifest itself in thought, worldview, and vitality, paying particular attention to the concepts of science and spirituality within a temporal framework.

In terms of time and temporality, Ivoirian poet, philosopher and novelist Jean-Marie Adé Adiaffi’s novel La carte d’identité, translated as The Identity Card (1983), provides us with an example of the ways in which a linear temporality is insufficient for characterizing the “continuum of lived experience of Africans” that Sarr alludes to above.8 This alternate conception of time, as well as a corresponding vision of the world and human agency resides at the core of Adiaffi’s novel, which traces the surreal journey of the protagonist Mélédouman, a name that paradoxically means “‘I have no name’ or more precisely, ‘they falsified my name’” (Adiaffi 1983, 1), as he seeks to uncover his missing identity card for the colonial authorities. However, the novel subverts the conventions of space, time and subjectivity, suspending reality within the time of a sacred week, at the end of which he discovers an embodied identity with cultural and spiritual significance far beyond the facts and statistics of the material circumstances of one’s birth, parents, given name, and so forth. Mélédouman’s journey to discover himself in relation to the world and its “deep time” of a continuous present retreating into an infinite past tense is punctuated by a transcendent spiritualism that infuses the world with significance.

It is important to note, first and foremost, that Adiaffi’s text defies the conventional rules of novelistic forms, combining theatrical dialogue, poetic interludes, and prose in a fashion that seeks to embody the orality of storytelling that is fundamental to many indigenous African cultures. Adiaffi refers to his writing style as n’zassa, or “genre without genre,” and by privileging multiple modes of expression, the text itself undermines the primacy of written documentation, which undergirds all of Western imperialism. Whether in the form of maps, identification cards, land deeds or contracts, all of which operate to divide and differentiate the totality of the world and humanity, singularity and documentation are the modus operandi of global rationalist capitalist civilization. This fact is further reinforced by Mélédouman’s blindness in the text, which is the result of his imprisonment and torture by colonial authorities. Beginning his journey the sacred week, Mélédouman demands to be taught “your science, the knowledge of primeval, original time” (Adiaffi 1983, 49). There is an expressed desire to understand the past, the (Tene) into which all presents (Mituki) flow, beyond the linear, written histories of Western European superpowers. This task to uncover the past or “play the Sherlock Holmes of history” (Adiaffi 1983, 49) marks a thematic link between Adiaffi and Diop’s work, although the latter is more focused on the time of twentieth-century political histories from that present’s future, whereas the former looks to the deep past of indigenous knowledge systems and traditions from the present’s past. 

Jean-Marie Adiaffi was a descendent of indigenous Agni ruling elite (his father) as well as an animist priestesses (his grandmother) and following his philosophical studies at the Sorbonne in Paris during the late 1960’s, he returned to Côte d’Ivoire intent upon expositing the indigenous philosophies and religions of his people while working to fight against primitivist prejudices, thereby proposing Bossonism as a modern indigenous African religion. Véronique Duchesne (2000) describes Adiaffi’s project as such:

“Le Bossonisme affirme l’existence, dans la conception africaine, d’un dieu unique créateur du monde et des hommes. […] Ce Dieu suprême se tient loin des hommes avec lesquels il n’a aucune relation. Il a créé des puissances intermédiaires, envoyées comme des messagers, les Bossons.” (Duchesne 2000, 304)

[Bossonism affirms the existence, within African conceptuality, of a god which is the sole creator of the world and of humanity … This supreme being is distanced from humanity and has no relation with it, and so created intermediary powers which are sent as messengers, the Bossons.]

Much like the Aimu, which is the name given to the spirits that inhabit the world of the Akamba (Mbiti 1983, 15), Bossons are, like the orisha in the Yoruba spiritual tradition (Opoku 1993, 71), distinct divinities that inhabit the earth and animate existence through their presence. Between the Agni, Yoruba, and Akamba religious traditions, we see a striking similarity in the role that intermediary spiritual entities play in relation to an absent creator God and the existential functioning of human societies across the African continent. The resultant worldview as it pertains to the natural environment is one in which the material and the metaphysical intermingle, where the juxtaposition between the spiritual and the scientific is harmonically intertwined through a temporality that continually re-presents the past. Birago Diop’s poem “Souffles” [“Breaths”], articulates this vision through the imperative: “Listen more often / to things than to beings / the voice of the fire / the water that speaks / the voice of the wind / the bush that weeps / this is the ancestor’s breathing” (Diop 1960). The voices of the wind, the fire, the water, the flora are all infused with the breath of the ancestors, animating the world with their past-time, breathing the significance of deep time into the objects that make up the world, animating them with spirit and significance.

Scientifically speaking, linear economic humanism marks the current societal understanding of these elemental forces, in that human nature constitutes the dominant environmental component of the Anthropocene. The active and animating power that provides the framework for human and non-human activity on a planetary scale is that which operates according to the laws and logics of economics, all of which rests upon the premise that seconds, minutes, hours, days, months, and years accumulate according to a steady and constant fixed progression. This worldview is limited by a culturally specific set of logics encoded in language, as Sarr proposes that “[i]n this context, economic discourse functions as a language that ensures the establishment of a common symbolic code through which the group’s ability to name, think, and experience the real develops” (2019, 49). If the human experience of reality is governed by laws of economics, constituting the cultural essence or asili of a globalized Western European culture, then the worldview (utamawazo) and vitality (utamahoro) will be a reflection of those particular cultural values. The condition of being confronted with antagonistic cultural values inherent in (post)colonial societies is what drives Mélédouman to seek to reconstruct his own cultural identification in order to better apprehend ways in which to interact with the world around him. He declares: “Forgotten science of our forefathers, science of power and strength” (Adiaffi 1983, 99). Mélédouman is not concerned with the science of West, but with a different science, one which seeks not only to “stud[y] nature […] to penetrate its laws in order to own it and master it,” but also “to understand the laws of the supernatural, in order to own and master it too” (Adiaffi 1983, 100). The recognition of a supernatural reality that is superimposed upon and infuses itself in and through the natural order of things yields an alternative understanding of human relationships with these worlds, resulting in a different ethos and affective modality of existence. He goes on to articulate this vision further:

“The science of nature is still too young to face such a new challenge. The question has to be put scientifically. If we consider science according to its results and not its methods, it certainly has gone beyond the wildest magician’s dreams. Its results can indeed be seen as more magical than magic itself – but a different kind of magic, a magic which can prove, explain. That is the major difference. Who knows whether all unexplained facts are not simply the results of unknown methods, methods we have yet to discover from their very results?” (Adiaffi 1983, 100)

Recalling the quotation from Nnedi Okorafor from the beginning of the essay, once again, one observes that magic and science operate to serve a similar function, which is to explain unexplainable phenomena. Within indigenous African imaginaries, time and matter are infused with spiritual significance, unlike the purely scientific rationalism of a global economic system that operates primarily through the destruction and exploitation of people, their time, and their material environments. While science is the logic that vehicles such a system, Mélédouman’s observation insinuates that the scientific worldview is itself more magical than magic; its realities often times border on the realms of the impossible within human imagination and experience. Furthermore, he seems to imply that a magical worldview may be equally valid as a way to approach nature, a notion that is echoed by Sarr who argues that “[t]he legitimacy of this method, which consists of attempting to grasp the African real or reality [le réel Africain] through the tool we call science, has not been called into question” (Sarr 2019, 81). Since scientific inquiry has been the privileged method of knowledge production in most societies, one must wonder if knowledge and experience could be enriched by considering the value of different methods of inquiry, including but not limited to the spiritual and the speculative.  

If, for example, science, or magic as it were, explained temporality differently, like those conceptions explored earlier in Diop’s novel, then one can begin to articulate alternative models to linear progress. For example, in their article, “Inviting a decolonial practice of future imaginaries of nature: Introducing the Entangled Time Tree,” Terry and her co-authors describe multiple alternative formulations of time, “including perspectives that are not linear in their conceptualization of time and that connect to the multi-layered place-based futures found in African storytelling” (2024, 3). Rather than avaricious competition against the notion of time running out, or what is often referred to as “apocalyptic time,” one might imagine that alternative modes of engagement with time and space can foster more inclusive relationships between humans and nature, as Terry et al. suggest: “[African speculative] fiction embodies animist folktales, and highlights the moral value placed on multi-species interactions and reciprocity […] as a way to re-emphasize the human-nature-culture interdependencies that disciplinary science turned away from during the Enlightenment” (7). Accordingly, the entangled temporalities of animism-infused storytelling might also yield an understanding of nature that consists of the entirety of beings, both human and non-human, both living and non-living that occupy the terrestrial, cosmic, and psychic spaces of experience. Just as entangled temporalities foreground the relation between human and non-human communicative agencies that allow for humanity and its constituent relationships to appear and function according to different sets of ideological and practical principles.

Interestingly, the same kind of animist logic that informs the entanglement of human and natural forces within time, can also be applied to contemporary capitalist society, as Achille Mbembe writes in Necropolitics, “the Afrofuturist critique of humanism can only be deepened by combining it with an equivalent critique of capitalism” (2019, 177). He further expounds upon this notion, stating, “capitalism is establishing itself in the modality of an animist religion” (178). In the complex nexus of competing worldviews, such as those that persist in postcolonial contexts, one sees nonetheless some underlying similarities. In the indigenous and Africanfuturist perspective, time moves steadily into the past as do the spirits of the ancestors, animating the world with invisible forces, which in turn precipitate actions and reactions among human and non-human beings in the material sphere. Similarly, one might build upon Mbembe’s Afrofuturist critique of the global capitalist perspective, which depicts time as an accumulating forward momentum containing the traces of past transactions and exchanges, the invisible forces of which animate the material world through designations of value, precipitating conscious orientations and actions within human societies. Understanding that languages, logics and beliefs are culturally contingent affords the opportunity to critique the nature of the real, as the narrator in Diop’s novel states: “I really feel like asking myself if reality exists. Since it never is what it is, it ends up inspiring doubt in even the best intentioned of minds” (2010, 123). This observation reveals that reality is always subject to narration; it is always interpreted through human and non-human frameworks, and therefore never perceived in its absolute totality. The question that remains is which stories we choose to tell as societies in order to ascertain what reality is. Is it pure economic abstraction, linear temporality, and technological development? Or, are there other stories to tell about reality, such as those that reveal a transcendent spiritual realm that imbues the natural world with power and significance within a perpetually receding past-time made up of infinite presents? Okorafor exemplifies the importance of storytelling when she admonishes the younger generations that have, “lost the art of the proverb, the gift of wordplay, the science of fiction, the jujuism of the African’” (2021, 100-101). Telling stories that create and disseminate new, improvised meanings for the world beyond the purely logical constraints of rationalism constitutes a valuable contribution of oral cultures for imagining alternative worldviews for human cultural development.

Let us therefore presume that there are infinite possibilities for developing through storytelling, new magical and scientific conceptions of time, animating forces, and nature which will determine the qualities and characters of human and non-human cultures. One can immediately perceive the consequences of scientific rationalism that promotes a singular worldview and corresponding value system, as Okorafor notes, again through the character, DNA:

“We let them convince us that we had nothing and our lands were useless. If it cannot make money, then it is worthless. That is not our culture, that is capitalism. Yet we still listened. We saw their big cities, we wanted all their nonsense things, we respected their big talk. We learned to prize money over things far more valuable.” (2021, 61)


[1] Translations of French texts are my own: “apprehender la science-fiction d’une perspective proprement africaine.”

[2] Also published online at : https://usbeketrica.com/fr/article/mort-afrofuturisme-biopiraterie-decouvrez-le-sommaire-du-nouveau-numero-d-usbek-rica

[3] See also, Joslin (2018). “Sony Labou Tansi: Une écocritique équatoriale égalitaire,” Nouvelles Études Francophones 33:1, pp. 210-225.

[4] For more on N’Dongo and Tamango, see the “notes” from the third part of Diop’s novel, specifically, p. 178.

[5] This passage is also reminiscent of Rimbaud’s celebrated poem, Le bâteau îvre, or “The drunken boat.”

[6] He insists, “Je ne suis pas un romancier, moi. Je ne suis qu’un Narrateur” (Diop 125) [I am not a novelist, myself. I am only a Narrator].

[7] Abdoulaye Bathily describes these events in his study, Mai 1968 à Dakar ou la révolte universitaire et la démocratie (Chaka, 1992).

[8] For more on Adiaffi’s novel, see also, Joslin (2019). “Futurité en francosphère: enjeux du fantastic et de la science-fiction.” Oeuvres & Critiques 44:2, pp. 101-118.


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Isaac Joslin holds a PhD from the University of Minnesota in Francophone Studies. Currently Associate Professor of Francophone Studies and Global Futures Scholar at Arizona State University, he has travelled extensively for research in Francophone Africa in Côte d’Ivoire, Senegal, Cameroon, Togo, Burkina Faso, Rwanda, and Burundi. His research interests include Postcolonial Francophone African literatures and cinemas, aesthetics and theories of representation, theories of cultural hybridity, ecocriticism, Afrofuturism and Africanfuturism, as well as pedagogical approaches for teaching African literatures and cultures. He has published scholarly articles on African literature and culture in the International Journal of Francophone Studies, Contemporary French and Francophone Studies, African Literature Today, The French Review, Critical African Studies, Nouvelles Études Francophones, Œuvres et Critiques, and others. His first monograph from Ohio University Press (2023) is entitled, Afrofuturisms: Ecology, Humanity, and Francophone Cultural Expressions.


The Picture Is Right, the Scale Is Wrong: Scalar Calibration in Katherine MacLean’s “Pictures Don’t Lie”



The Picture Is Right, the Scale Is Wrong: Scalar Calibration in Katherine MacLean’s “Pictures Don’t Lie”

George Kaldis

The Picture Is Right

Katherine MacLean’s “Pictures Don’t Lie” begins from an apparent triumph of first contact. A terrestrial scientist receives extraterrestrial broadcasts, reconstructs them into intelligible images, identifies humanlike bodies, recognizes gestures and emotional expression, and eventually establishes two-way communication. The alien visitors are not mute, unknowable, or resistant to interpretation. Their signals can be decoded; their appearance can be seen; their intentions can be inferred; their arrival can be coordinated. Yet the encounter ends catastrophically. MacLean’s story stages an unusually precise failure. The problem is not that the alien cannot be understood, but that successful understanding has omitted one relation necessary for material contact. The humans know what the visitors look like, what they intend, where they believe themselves to be, and when they have landed. What they do not know is the scale at which any of that information becomes physically commensurable with their own world.

Brian Stableford already identifies “Pictures Don’t Lie” as one of the exemplary puzzle structures of MacLean’s early fiction. He describes her method as embedding a striking idea within a problem whose solution the protagonists must discover, calling “Pictures Don’t Lie” a classic instance and noting that the scientists’ otherwise successful analysis depends upon an “entirely understandable but ultimately disastrous assumption.” Stableford correctly identifies the story’s architecture, but his phrase “entirely understandable but ultimately disastrous assumption” names rather than theorizes the mechanism (Stableford 489). The assumption itself deserves greater precision. The fatal error is not simply a mistaken guess about the aliens’ bodily dimensions. It is the tacit conversion of representational resemblance into material commensurability: because the visitors look human, move intelligibly, use recognizable technology, and communicate successfully, human magnitude silently becomes the standard against which their physical existence is interpreted. The story’s puzzle is not that the aliens are unexpectedly small; it is that no one recognizes scale as something requiring calibration until every other interpretive procedure has already succeeded.

That concern is consistent with what Jane Donawerth identifies as the structural role of scientific knowledge in MacLean’s fiction. Donawerth notes both the relative critical neglect of MacLean’s scientifically grounded fiction and the structural force of its science: scientific information organizes the problem-and-solution logic rather than merely decorating it (“Katherine MacLean” 53–54, 58). Her account of women in Golden Age SF likewise situates MacLean within a magazine culture whose conventions women writers appropriated and revised; here, the familiar technoscientific first-contact scenario becomes the very machinery of miscalibration (“Women” 232). “Pictures Don’t Lie” makes calibration perform precisely this structural function. The story repeatedly foregrounds technical adjustments (signal speed, scanning, color, sound, motion, ratios) before the final revelation makes clear that magnitude has escaped the same scrutiny. MacLean thus distributes the eventual error throughout the process by which the alien becomes visible and intelligible. The ending does not suddenly introduce scale into an otherwise unrelated narrative. It reveals that scale has been the unexamined condition under which every prior act of interpretation has taken place.

I use scalar calibration to name that missing operation: the establishment of a relation through which represented magnitude becomes materially commensurable with an observer’s frame of reference. Scale names the relation; calibration names the epistemic procedure by which that relation is established across representational systems. Miscalibration names the failure of that procedure: not a missing measurement but a misapplied one, a scale imported from elsewhere and treated as given. As a critical term, scalar calibration identifies not measurement alone but the transfer of scale across representational systems. It marks the point at which internally coherent relations are converted into assumptions about material commensurability.

In “Pictures Don’t Lie,” first contact succeeds at familiar first-contact coordinates (signal reception, visual reconstruction, recognition of intelligence, linguistic exchange) and fails at the point where those successful representations must be translated into shared physical space. MacLean’s human observers repeatedly confront the need to calibrate the information they receive, but they mistake the relational consistency of their reconstructed alien world for evidence that this world already shares their own material scale. The story’s title is more exact than its twist initially suggests. The pictures do not need to deceive anyone. Their observers need only treat what the pictures preserve as though it included what they never establish. The failure of first contact occurs not because alien difference remains inaccessible, but because similarity conceals the ruler by which difference has already been measured.

Relations Without Scale

Nathen’s confidence in the universality of pictures is immediately complicated by the labor required to make the alien transmission visible at all. The image does not arrive as an image. It must be extracted from a signal whose scanning rhythm has to be discovered, synchronized, and converted into a display; even after this procedure succeeds, the colors on the screen are assignments rather than recovered properties. MacLean therefore places a technical contradiction beneath Nathen’s claim that pictures are “understandable in any language” (MacLean 105). The visual field that appears to escape translation is itself the product of translation-like operations. Ronald Giere’s account of scientific observation clarifies the point without reducing it to skepticism: an instrument responds selectively to its input, and its output depends upon both the phenomenon and the configuration through which that phenomenon is detected. As Giere puts it, “no instrument is perfectly transparent,” and careful calibration can reduce but never eliminate the instrument’s contribution to its output (13–14). Calibration can constrain mediation; it cannot turn technologically produced observation into an unmediated copy of the world. MacLean dramatizes that danger when the laboriously reconstructed display comes to function as an apparently immediate “window,” making the distant figures seem present and readable (107–09). Nathen’s screen is reliable because it has been calibrated, not because mediation has disappeared.

Donna Haraway sharpens this distinction through technologically extended vision. Scientific images do not become objective by escaping apparatus: technological “eyes” build “translations and specific ways of seeing,” not an “unmediated photograph” (Haraway 583). MacLean’s receiver literalizes that problem. Its reconstructed pictures remain usable even though scanning speed, color, and sound are technically imposed. The issue is therefore not whether mediation falsifies the image, but which relations survive mediation and which properties remain uncalibrated. Nathen’s confidence also recalls the historical authority Daston and Galison associate with mechanically produced scientific images: mechanical objectivity made the minimization of human intervention central to evidentiary authority even though artifacts, incidental oddities, and atypical specimens could remain (41–44). Their account functions here as an analogue rather than a genealogy of MacLean’s fictional apparatus.

Jacob exposes that mistake most clearly when he asks Nathen how the colors were established. Nathen has not decoded an alien equivalent of terrestrial color; he has selected values that make the image look plausible. Yet this does not render the display arbitrary. The dependable information lies in the relations among the values: gradations, contrasts, and similarities persist even when the absolute color assigned to any one band remains uncertain. Jacob immediately recognizes that sound may pose the same problem. The pitch produced by the receiver can preserve differences within the signal without establishing the pitch at which an alien would hear or produce it. MacLean has separated two epistemic achievements that Nathen initially treats as one. A representation may preserve an ordered system of differences while failing to establish how that system maps onto an external standard. The distinction is crucial because it makes the later error about size continuous with, rather than exceptional to, the story’s earlier scientific work. Color and pitch already teach the scientists that internally coherent relations do not automatically determine absolute values.

Bas van Fraassen supplies a precise vocabulary for this distinction. Pictorial representation is selective: a picture can represent an object successfully with respect to some features without determining every property of what it depicts. Accuracy in one respect therefore does not imply exhaustive specification. That principle matters in “Pictures Don’t Lie” because the alien image preserves enough structure to sustain recognition. Bodily proportions remain coherent; figures occupy stable positions relative to one another; gestures can be followed; visual contrasts persist. None of those achievements requires the screen to establish the absolute magnitude of the bodies represented on it. The error is consequently not that Nathen trusts an inaccurate image. It is that he treats accuracy with respect to preserved relations as though it also supplied a conversion between the image and human material scale. What the screen gives him is relationally adequate representation. What he silently adds is commensurability. Van Fraassen’s later account of scaling makes the point still sharper: what can remain significant across a scale transformation is precisely what is invariant under rescaling (160–61). MacLean’s image preserves relations well enough to support recognition while leaving the conversion to absolute magnitude unspecified.

MacLean makes the omission harder to dismiss as accidental by placing ratio explicitly inside the scientists’ conceptual world. Their discussion turns to “universal constants as ratio” (MacLean 111), a formulation that foregrounds the very logic necessary to recognize the problem. Ratios permit relations to remain stable across changes in absolute value; they make comparison possible without requiring identity of magnitude. The scientists possess the conceptual machinery needed to distinguish relational regularity from absolute equivalence. They apply that machinery to the signal, to color, to sound, and to physical behavior. What they do not ask is which ratio would connect the represented alien body to a terrestrial standard of length. Perspective identifies a position from which something is represented; scalar calibration establishes how represented quantities become commensurable with an external standard. MacLean’s scientists repeatedly correct the former while leaving the latter implicit.

The story begins applying pressure to that omission before the landing. Jacob notices that something is wrong with the visitors’ “weight-to-speed-to-momentum ratio” (MacLean 112), while Nathen experiments with playback rate. Neither faster nor slower reproduction restores the expected physical coherence. MacLean is not simply withholding the one fact needed for a surprise ending. By this point the story has already taught Nathen that Earth-likeness is true only “in relative terms” (103), that color and pitch can preserve relations without fixing absolute values (110–11), and that ratio itself is a universal comparative form (111). After scan rate, color, pitch, playback speed, and ratio have all been tested or revised, magnitude remains the conspicuous variable that never enters the calibration sequence. The failure is not a refusal to revise (Nathen revises repeatedly) but a failure to recognize the human body as part of the measuring system, a standard so familiar that it remains invisible while everything around it is adjusted. The final revelation does not introduce scale as the solution to the puzzle; it identifies scale as the variable the story has taught its observers to test everywhere else.

“Very Human”

The scalar assumption that survives these repeated recalibrations has already been installed before Nathen begins testing the transmission. When the first stable image appears, the judgment is immediate: “Very human” (MacLean 102). Yet MacLean almost immediately qualifies the apparent Earth-likeness as true “only in relative terms” (103), planting relationality before its scalar consequence can be recognized. Read retrospectively, “Very human” does more than register morphological resemblance. It begins a chain of mutually reinforcing inferences through which bodily similarity, recognizable gesture, technological activity, terrestrial-looking surroundings, and the expectation of a “huge spaceship” become mutually confirming signs of a shared material world (103). None of these observations establishe the visitors’ magnitude. Yet together they make such a measurement seem unnecessary. Human appearance does not logically entail equivalent magnitude, but MacLean arranges the representational field so that the distinction never initially presents itself as a problem. The force of “Very human” lies precisely in this compression: likeness supplies a familiar body, while terrestrial landscape, gesture, motion, and technological expectation make that familiarity scalar.

Zachary Horton’s account of scale clarifies why that inference can remain unnoticed. Scale is not merely another measurable property attached to an otherwise stable object; it emerges through relations among bodies, environments, and the mediating systems through which they become knowable. Horton argues that knowledge practices stabilize domains around the “unmarked scale of the human” (7), while scalar mediation can itself obscure the seams between distinct scalar milieus. The importance of the unmarked standard is that it does not ordinarily appear as a standard at all. Nathen never explicitly decides that the figures on his screen must possess terrestrial human dimensions. Had he done so, magnitude would become a hypothesis and therefore something available for testing. Instead, human scale enters as the default against which the rest of the representation becomes intelligible. MacLean’s puzzle depends on that asymmetry. Signal speed, color, pitch, and motion appear as variables because their mediation is perceptible; the human body does not, because its magnitude has been naturalized as the background from which those variables are judged.

Timothy Clark makes the consequences of that naturalization more explicit. Clark defines “scale critique” as attention to how a situation alters with the scale at which it is considered; norms that seem coherent may operate only under “usually unexamined assumptions about their scale” (40–41). He later stresses the “contingency of the scale that seems ‘natural’ to human beings” (51). MacLean turns that principle into narrative procedure. The mistake in “Pictures Don’t Lie” is not adequately described by saying that the aliens are smaller than expected, as though size were simply one concealed attribute among others. Changing their magnitude changes the significance of the relations surrounding them. Velocity no longer means what Nathen expects it to mean; atmosphere presents different resistance; terrestrial vegetation acquires different dimensions; a puddle can constitute a major body of water. Size names a property of an object. Scale names the relational frame within which that property reorganizes an environment. What the observers have assumed is not a bodily dimension but a whole field of material commensurability.

This is why successful recognition intensifies rather than corrects the error. The visitors do not merely resemble human silhouettes. Their gestures can be interpreted as gestures; their behavior appears purposeful; their technological activity is recognizable; communication confirms intelligence and intention. Each success makes the reconstructed world more coherent within the frame already established by “Very human.” Malmgren’s account of alien encounter helps expose the reversal. If alien difference becomes intelligible against a human background, greater resemblance might ordinarily seem to reduce the interpretive difficulty of contact. MacLean makes it increase a different difficulty. The visitors become progressively easier to recognize as subjects at exactly the moment their material difference becomes harder to perceive. Recognition and calibration move in opposite directions: every additional sign of humanlike intelligibility strengthens the assumption that the bodies being recognized inhabit the same scalar order as their observers.

The resulting anthropocentrism is more specific than simple projection. Nathen does not imagine that the aliens share human values, psychology, or culture merely because they look familiar, nor does the story depend upon their remaining radically unknowable. The crucial projection is metrological: the body functions as an implicit measuring instrument, converting morphological resemblance into an expectation of dimensional equivalence without announcing that conversion as an interpretive act. That is why the error can survive increasingly conspicuous anomalies. A visible instrument can be recalibrated; an explicit hypothesis can be revised. An unmarked standard is more difficult to correct because it organizes what counts as an anomaly in the first place. Until the visitors attempt to occupy the same physical environment as their observers, human magnitude remains the ruler that measures everything while escaping measurement itself. The landing does not introduce the problem of scale. It forces the standard that has governed the encounter from the beginning to become visible.

Earth at the Wrong Scale

The consequences of that unmarked standard become material when the visitors announce that they have landed. Until this point, discrepancies can still be treated as problems internal to transmission or representation. The landing removes that refuge. Communication continues to function: the visitors report their progress, Nathen understands their statements, and the receiving equipment places the source of the transmission at the airfield. Yet when the message “We’ve landed” arrives, the expected spacecraft is nowhere to be seen (MacLean 117). The landing severs two processes conventionally bundled together as successful contact. Linguistic contact has succeeded, and spatial coordination has succeeded, but the bodies supposedly coordinated within that shared space remain mutually inaccessible. The empty field is not evidence that the visitors have lied or that their message has been mistranslated. It is evidence that the same location can fail to constitute the same environment when observers occupy radically different scalar relations to it.

The visitors’ descriptions initially seem to make their claim even less credible. Their planet of arrival is dark and murky; its atmosphere appears oppressively dense, “thick as glue,” while its gravity and surrounding physical conditions do not match the Earth Nathen believes he is observing (MacLean 117). Read from terrestrial human scale, these reports sound like contradictions. Read from the visitors’ scale, they become observations whose apparent impossibility is produced by the frame through which Nathen evaluates them. MacLean does not solve the contradiction by revealing that one party has been describing a different planet. Both the radio fix and the landing site remain correct; what changes is the relation between the bodies making the observations and the material features they encounter. Environmental description thus becomes evidence of scale, since the same physical world generates different practical conditions once the magnitude of the perceiving and moving body changes. That explanatory economy is formal rather than physically exhaustive, retrospectively coordinating observations that had appeared mutually incompatible.

The “lake” makes this transformation especially clear. Nothing in the terrestrial landscape needs to become physically larger for a puddle to function as a substantial body of water to the visitors. Nor is the alien description simply a mistaken name imposed upon an objectively tiny feature. The relevant relation is environmental rather than lexical. A body of water that is negligible to a human observer can obstruct movement, dominate a field of vision, and organize surrounding terrain for an organism many orders of magnitude smaller. Horton’s insistence that changes of scale alter an entity’s perspective on and relationship to its environment gives the episode its conceptual force. MacLean is not asking the reader to choose between a true human description and a false alien one. “Puddle” and “lake” register different relations between bodies and the same material feature. The eventual revelation corrects the human assumption of commensurability without invalidating the visitors’ report.

Scalar relation likewise reorganizes the rest of the airfield. Grass and ordinary vegetation become enormous growths; commonplace terrestrial organisms acquire monstrous proportions; atmospheric resistance and surface conditions take on consequences invisible at human magnitude. Clark’s account of scale critique is useful here because the change does not merely enlarge or diminish an otherwise stable scene. A shift in scale alters which relations become salient and which material processes determine experience. MacLean’s Earth is consequently made alien without being spatially displaced. The visitors have reached the correct planet and the correct location, yet the world disclosed by their descriptions initially seems incompatible with Earth because the humans assume that spatial coincidence guarantees environmental equivalence. It does not. Shared coordinates establish where bodies are; they do not establish the scalar relations through which those bodies inhabit what is there. The story’s alien landscape is thus produced from ordinary terrestrial matter by changing the bodily standard against which that matter becomes an environment.

The earlier problem of motion now acquires the same explanation. Nathen has treated the apparent speed of the visitors and the rate of their transmissions as variables introduced by broadcasting. He can therefore experiment with playback speed while leaving the represented bodies themselves unchanged. The final realization, “They don’t speed up their broadcasts” (MacLean 120), reverses that procedure. What appeared to be a technical acceleration belongs instead to the physical relations generated by the visitors’ magnitude. MacLean does not require an extended lesson in miniature physics for the narrative point to register. Temporal and kinetic expectations have been calibrated against bodies assumed to occupy a human scalar order. Once that assumption changes, the anomalous “weight-to-speed-to-momentum ratio” encountered earlier no longer stands apart from the environmental contradictions (MacLean 112). It becomes retrospective evidence that the wrong variable had been held constant. The scientists kept adjusting the representation because they never considered recalibrating the body to which the representation referred.

John Rieder’s account of science fiction as a recurrent movement between disorientation and explanation helps distinguish what MacLean accomplishes here from a more general encounter with radical alterity. Rieder identifies a genre pattern in which apparently impossible facts disrupt an existing interpretive order and demand incorporation into a new explanatory frame (89). MacLean follows that movement but makes its resolution unusually exact. Nothing essential about the visitors’ intelligence, language, intentions, or subjective interiority must finally be decoded to explain the impossible airfield. The decisive new information concerns a relation of magnitude. Once that relation changes, observations previously classified as mutually incompatible become mutually supporting. The alien does not retreat into unknowability; the human model becomes revisable. MacLean thereby locates the difficulty of encounter not in an irreducible otherness beyond representation but in the observer’s failure to identify which apparently neutral feature of the representational frame has been supplied from home. Suvin’s definition of SF as “cognitive estrangement” helps name the operation, but MacLean makes it unusually literal: ordinary Earth becomes strange when cognition must revise the scalar relation through which the familiar world had been organized (Suvin 4).

The magnifying glass at the story’s end makes that correction materially visible. It identifies what the receiver could not establish and what the observers never thought to ask: the conversion between the dimensions represented on the screen and the dimensions of the bodies occupying the airfield. The revelation retrospectively reorganizes the evidence without requiring most of it to become false. The visitors did land, and the directional fix did locate them. Their strange terrain is simply the terrain surrounding the station. Their apparent lake, gigantic vegetation, oppressive atmosphere, and extraordinary creatures belong to Earth as encountered through a radically different bodily magnitude. Even the transmission anomaly participates in the same scalar system. The final discovery does more than disclose that the visitors are tiny. It demonstrates why a long sequence of successful observations could converge on a materially disastrous conclusion. The humans possessed enough information to establish relations within the alien world, but not the calibration required to place that world beside their own. When the missing relation is finally supplied, the alien planet does not disappear. It becomes Earth seen from a scale the human observers had never recognized as absent. The remaining question is why the reader, who has access to MacLean’s narration rather than Nathen’s apparatus, has made the same omission.

The Reader’s Missing Ruler

The scalar error exposed at the airfield does not belong only to Nathen and his colleagues. MacLean has withheld the same measurement from the reader while surrounding its absence with information that makes the represented world appear dimensionally complete. The opening image offers bodies that are “Very human,” an Earth-like landscape, recognizable weather, grass, puddles, an airfield, and the anticipation of a “huge spaceship” (MacLean 102–03). These descriptions establish relations of appearance and environment, but none fixes the visitors’ magnitude. The omission is easy to overlook because the narration does not present magnitude as missing data. Human likeness, familiar terrestrial reference points, and the conventional vocabulary of first contact make the scene feel already scaled. MacLean does something more exact than concealing the size of the aliens until the final pages. She supplies enough conventional information that the absence of measurement does not register as an absence.

Marie-Laure Ryan’s principle of minimal departure explains how such an omission can nevertheless generate a determinate storyworld (52). Because fictional texts cannot specify every property of the worlds they evoke, readers ordinarily supplement what is stated with assumptions derived from their knowledge of the actual world unless the text gives them reason to depart from those assumptions. In MacLean’s story, no explicit measurement initially forces such a departure. A body described as humanlike is positioned to inherit the dimensional expectations attached to ordinary human bodies rather than remain radically indeterminate in magnitude. The crucial point is that this inference does not feel like an inference. Human scale enters as default information precisely because the narration has not marked it as information requiring construction. Ryan’s account thus identifies the readerly analogue of Nathen’s scientific error: both systems complete an incomplete representation by importing a familiar relation that subsequently becomes difficult to distinguish from what was given. Minimal departure does not simply explain why readers tolerate unspecified details; it explains why the missing measurement arrives already filled. The default is powerful because it is not experienced as an interpretive choice.

Science-fictional competence intensifies that process. Brian Attebery argues that SF readers fill textual gaps from both scientific and generic megatexts; “the less explicit the information, the more need for the reader to be immersed in the genre itself” (8). MacLean can consequently write “spaceship” without rebuilding the concept from first principles. “Huge” appears to supply scale, but it names only a relation whose reference standard remains unstated. Huge compared to what? Alien transmission, landing, airfield, and humanlike visitor similarly belong to an established first-contact vocabulary whose familiarity accelerates world construction. The story turns that competence against the reader. Genre knowledge makes the sparse description efficient, but efficiency has a cost. The reader imports a scalar model along with the icon. The very protocols that make the fictional world rapidly intelligible help conceal which of its properties have been supplied by convention rather than established by the text. Attebery’s discussion of Gary Wolfe’s icon concept sharpens the trap: familiar SF icons such as spaceships and aliens carry inherited information while leaving much unstated, so familiarity accelerates inference (9).

The parallel between Nathen and the reader is structural rather than psychological: narrative representation reproduces the same incompleteness already established in Nathen’s technical representation. Nathen receives an incomplete technologically mediated representation and supplies human scale; MacLean places the reader within narrative conditions that solicit the same completion. MacLean thus makes the reader perform the very miscalibration the plot diagnoses. In each case, the resulting model is coherent enough to absorb contradictory evidence: Nathen treats anomalous motion and environmental description as local technical problems, while the reader treats those anomalies as mysteries within a human-scaled first-contact scenario. The final revelation does not simply disclose withheld information. It exposes what both interpretive systems added to the information they possessed.

This formal symmetry returns the title to the center of the argument. To read “Pictures Don’t Lie” as straightforwardly ironic would imply that visual evidence has betrayed its observers; to read it as a defense of transparent pictorial truth would ignore the layers of scanning, assignment, playback, and inference through which the images become legible. MacLean sustains a more difficult position. Representations can preserve truthful relations without specifying every condition necessary for their material interpretation. The visitors’ bodily proportions, gestures, surroundings, and relative differences can remain intelligible even while absolute color, pitch, temporal rate, and magnitude require further calibration. The picture need not lie for the observer to be wrong. Error enters when the absence of a represented relation is mistaken for evidence that the relation has already been established.

MacLean’s first contact fails not at recognition or communication but at the conversion of successful representation into a supposedly shared material frame. That unmarked magnitude governs the conversion, organizing expectations about bodies, motion, atmosphere, landscape, and technology while escaping the calibrations applied elsewhere. By making the reader reproduce the same mistake, “Pictures Don’t Lie” turns scalar assumption into narrative form. The story suggests that first contact may fail not where difference becomes too radical to understand, but where similarity makes one consequential difference disappear. Scalar calibration names that prior problem: whether observers can identify the human measures already structuring what counts as intelligible contact.


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Fontaine Lien received her Ph.D. in comparative literature from the University of California, Riverside and has taught language, literature, and culture across many institutions. Currently, she is assistant professor of Chinese in the Department of Languages and Cultures at the U.S. Naval Academy. She is the author of Reading Chinese Science Fiction in the Age of Techno-Nationalism (2025, Liverpool University Press). Her research interests include speculative fiction, film and media studies, and the scholarship of teaching and learning. The views expressed in this article are those of the author and do not reflect the official policy or position of the U.S. Naval Academy, Department of the Navy, the Department of War, or the U.S. Government.


Banality, Absurdity, and Liang Qingsan’s Science-Fictional Counter-Narratives



Banality, Absurdity, and Liang Qingsan’s Science-Fictional Counter-Narratives

Fontaine Lien

Although the genre has advanced far beyond its pulp days, much of science fiction and speculative fiction has retained elements of escapism and wish fulfillment—it is just that the precise desires have changed along with cultural norms and societal circumstances. To list just one example, whereas past adventures might have imagined heroic and handsome men conquering Mars and rescuing alien princesses (A Princess of Mars) as an obvious replacement for colonialist adventures, recent fiction is more likely to depict a marginalized outcast surviving the apocalypse using their unique gifts. Examples of more relatable protagonists abound in contemporary Chinese science fiction (SF) as well, perhaps because many Chinese SF writers also hold professional day jobs that do not allow them to commit wholesale to imagining fantastical worlds. Few, however, have incorporated the banal and the everyday as Liang Qingsan (né Liang Hua) has, and to great effect.

Liang Qingsan’s two distinctive types of SF writing can be described on the one hand as fantastical steampunk techno-orientalism, and on the other as a genre that mobilizes banality and humorous absurdity, as opposed to novelty and graveness, that forcefully confront us with our quotidian realities. While other scholars have highlighted the serious sociological and environmental concerns of authors such as Liu Cixin, Xia Jia, and Chen Qiufan, I argue that their contemporary Liang’s “minor” science fiction better reflects a particular subset of attitudes within his generational cohort, those who choose to “lie flat” over pursuing wealth or career accomplishments as with previous generations. On the surface writing about trivial situations, Liang’s SF nonetheless utilizes scientific nova in a noteworthy and interesting way, and is an important voice that has heretofore been missing in the consideration of contemporary Chinese SF. Recognizing this voice forces a re-consideration of Chinese SF as world literature: it does not necessarily “speak for the subaltern” (Spivak) or represent any kind of national allegory (Jameson). It can, as Liang’s work demonstrates, speak to the humor and exasperation that pervades everyday life in an era of absurd technological saturation, a problem shared across much of the world.

Liang Qingsan’s Unique Brand of Millennial Science Fiction

Like many of his generational cohort, Liang is an SF writer but also somewhat of a hobbyist SF scholar. Though his primary field of study is in the STEM disciplines, he is an amateur researcher of Qing dynasty history and culture and has taken classes on late-Qing science fiction with the prominent Chinese SF scholar, Wu Yan (Liang, “Boredom” 3). Although he modestly claims to not be able to make a living from writing SF, he is a contracted author with a Shanghai publishing company. A recent book jacket blurb enumerates his hobbies as research, reading manhwa, playing video games, and daydreaming (Liang, Mechanical Wonders). This testimony is representative of the humble self-effacing impression Liang usually gives in his publicity interviews, a good indication of the approachable “ordinariness” of some of his SF.

There is room for debate when it comes to considering Liang’s work as SF. While many of his stories are typically futuristic in either their setting (outer space) or theme (introduction of new technology), Liang’s interest in scholarly research into the late-Qing era means that on the other hand, he is also dedicated to writing about technology and wonder in the steampunk mode, set in the late 19th century, and what role these elements played in the issues that China faced at the time. While the prototypical SF written during the late Qing is characterized as utopian and self-justifying (Wang 39), as well as ambivalent with respect to science and technology (Isaacson 2–3), more than a hundred years later, why would a contemporary SF writer be interested in exploring the role of science in that historical setting? At least based on my own personal consumption of Chinese and sinophone SF, his interest in writing SF-adjacent stories set in that time period makes him a minority among contemporary writers.

A relevant critical term here may be Ken Liu’s “silkpunk,” which he very explicitly defines as “not ‘Asian-flavored steampunk’” and “not ‘Asian-influenced fantasy.’” Instead, in his own work, silkpunk is an emphasis technology that “relies on materials of historical importance to the people of East Asia and the Pacific islands: bamboo, shells, coral, paper, silk, feathers, sinew.” He also takes pains to highlight the “punk” aspect of his novels, which are about “rebellion, resistance, re-appropriation and rejuvenation of tradition, and defiance of authority” (Liu). Peng Chao (a scholar as well as fellow SF writer) mentions that readers have likened Liang’s work to silkpunk but does not elaborate on specifics (28). In my view, Liang’s Qing dynasty fiction does contain a healthy dose of rebellious spirit, which not only provides his usually marginalized cast characters with an excuse for adventure, but also speaks to prevailing sentiments of deprivation and turmoil experienced by many citizens at the time.

Peng has also described Liang’s work in this category as “history-based sci-fi” (28), with a unique aesthetic style that is a combination of nostalgia and technology. If I grasp Peng’s argument correctly, he is saying that the ways in which these works re-imagine the process of technological development in China both represents a nostalgia for that period in history and a way to instill a newfound sense of national pride and cultural confidence.

The second category within Liang’s work, SF based on contemporary settings, is more closely related (though not as much so compared to other writers, as we shall see) to science-fictional realism. Wei Lu points out that the term “sci-fi realism” (kehuan xianshi zhuyi) was largely coined by Chinese SF writers and scholars who needed to find some way to use sci-fi to describe their daily realities. According to Lu and others, because of China’s dramatically accelerated technological development timeline since the late-20th century, there was an urgent need for fiction to address the possible dangers of technology (Lu 706–09). Happily, realism and social realism have long been the privileged literary genres in China, so “the combination of [SF and realism] proves to be surprisingly successful in the complicated Chinese social context” (Lu 707). In this critical formulation, Chinese SF is largely reactive, written in response to dramatic societal changes wrought by technological pursuits undertaken in competition with the West. The scenarios described in these SF stories also tend to be dramatically larger than life: be they the cyborg adventures of Chen Qiufan, an entire folding city in Hao Jingfang’s Folding Beijing, alien invasion in Liu Cixin’s Three-Body Problem, or the apocalyptic scenarios precipitated by modern transportation in Han Song’s various works.

So how can we categorize Liang’s unique brand of “mundane” SF, and how does it cohere with his more dramatic re-imagining of late imperial China? With respect to mobilizing the concept of quotidian reality in the analysis of science fiction, we have as precedent Sunyoung Ahn’s “The Everyday Life of Artificial Intelligence” and Jonathan Hay’s “Quotidian Science Fiction: Posthuman Dreams of Emancipation.” Citing theorists such as Henri Lefebvre and Raymond Williams, Ahn points out the “inherently utopian quality to thinking about the everyday” (73) which Ted Chiang uses to great effect in The Lifecycle of Software Objects (2010), a novella that critiques the dehumanizing forces of market and technology through “objects” that have infiltrated the everyday lives of characters in the novella: digients, or virtual pets. The humans in the story develop affection for these “pets” through sustained everyday interaction with them on a digital platform, but eventually realize just how much the digients’ existence–and by extension their lives which are affectionately bonded to the digients–depend on the whims of capitalist logic that sustain the digital platform. Though the digients of the story are “things,” their thing-ness falls by the wayside as humans come to see them as important entities in their own right. Ultimately, the characters in this story come to appreciate what is essentially another life form, but also gain an understanding of the precarity of their shared existence, specifically due to sustained interaction through everyday life.

Hay analyzes SF texts that are more optimistic about positive and productive change, arguing that certain texts use the mundanity of everyday life to help readers imagine and accept possible posthuman realities. Through the depiction of banal and repetitive fictional lives, these texts help us imagine gradual social progress, alternatives to capitalism, and posthuman ecosystems, respectively, all of which would be more difficult to accept as possible and relatable without the grounding of mundane reality (Hay 43–44).

In Anthropocene Unseen: A Lexicon, Eli Elinoff and Tyson Vaughan also discuss how the quotidian can be a powerful way to make aspects of the Anthropocene relevant to regular people, who may not be familiar with the concept. The quotidian—in other words, the everyday experiences of regular people—can offer a way to understand “statistical” and overwhelming concepts such as climate change and space for individual action and agency (Elinoff and Vaughan 371–72). It can be a “grounding antidote to the apocalyptic” (Elinoff and Vaughan 371). While Liang’s science fiction does not primarily focus on apocalyptic scenarios, its primary subject matter does fall into two categories: contemplating the roles of scientific and Western influence during a cataclysmic time in Chinese history, i.e. the latter days of the Qing dynasty, and contemplating the role of technology in our lives today. In contrast to his exciting, adventurous work depicting a Steampunk-oriented Qing dynasty, the banality and normality of his work on contemporary lives is fascinating in comparison, and this article seeks to locate the shared concerns of these two sectors of Liang’s interest.

In Anthropocene Unseen: A Lexicon, Eli Elinoff and Tyson Vaughan also discuss how the quotidian can be a powerful way to make aspects of the Anthropocene relevant to regular people, who may not be familiar with the concept. The quotidian—in other words, the everyday experiences of regular people—can offer a way to understand “statistical” and overwhelming concepts such as climate change and space for individual action and agency (Elinoff and Vaughan 371–72). It can be a “grounding antidote to the apocalyptic” (Elinoff and Vaughan 371). While Liang’s science fiction does not primarily focus on apocalyptic scenarios, its primary subject matter does fall into two categories: contemplating the roles of scientific and Western influence during a cataclysmic time in Chinese history, i.e. the latter days of the Qing dynasty, and contemplating the role of technology in our lives today. In contrast to his exciting, adventurous work depicting a Steampunk-oriented Qing dynasty, the banality and normality of his work on contemporary lives is fascinating in comparison, and this article seeks to locate the shared concerns of these two sectors of Liang’s interest.

While one can definitely argue that the more quotidian aspects of Liang’s work perhaps reflect his own life as a young man trying to make his way in 21st century China, I argue that banality figured with a humorous lens is key to his vision of our near-future. His steampunk Qing dynasty fiction is colored with a nostalgic adventurousness that nearly obscures the fact that all of its characters are grappling with threatening new technology. When writing about the present, Liang transmogrifies this obscuring nostalgia into banality and absurdity, but in essence still depicts a skeptical attitude toward omnipresent new technology.

The Resolutely Mundane Protagonists of Liang Qingsan’s SF

Few scholars have written about banality in SF other than with respect to the specific texts cited above, though the stylistic feature is occasionally highlighted in the analysis of literature. More well known is Hannah Arendt’s “banality of evil” concept, famously characterizing the cluster of seemingly inane characteristics in a single individual (Adolf Eichmann) which gave rise to a great evil, an agent of the Nazi Regime and its innumerable crimes (Arendt). In contrast, I wish to consider a banality that is close to its dictionary definition, something that is unremarkable, mundane, even boring. A closely related idea is the everyday, which is akin to boredom but not quite the same. The everyday in fiction resembles so closely our reality that one wonders how it can be interesting enough to write about: protagonists go to uninteresting jobs, possess uninteresting personalities, and muse about their lives in an uninteresting way. Even when the dramatic or the novel intrudes upon their lives, these characters seem unable to resist the pull of their formerly boring lives, trying everything to maintain the status quo and their sense of normality.

The combination of banality and the everyday is essential to the particular worldview and purpose of Liang Qingsan’s near-future SF: not an expression of sublimity, a consideration of great philosophical and ethical conundrums, or an allegorization of geo-political circumstances. What it primarily evokes is simply boredom, banality, and the feeling that the supposedly transformative technologies of the near-future are simply useless ornamentations in our mundane lives. In other words, a remarkably different outlook on technology compared to other SF works: technology not as savior or harbinger of doom, but a reflection of our current problems that require more fundamental solutions.

The characters in this type of Liang Qingsan story typically begin as and remain everyday people going about their jobs and mundane lives, despite their potentially exciting circumstances. The initial paragraphs of “Planet BBQ” (2011),1 for example, depict the exciting “discovery” of a new planet under dangerous circumstances, a procedure called “leaping.” But the story soon reveals that its protagonist is no pioneering hero but a regular traveler, obsessed with his reputation as a “planet exploration strategist,” thinking always of his reputation and how he is perceived by friends and fellow travelers, and not in any way about what it means to discover or visit other planets and what it might mean for their native inhabitants or humanity’s interactions with them. In other words, space travel and contact with other species has become banal.

In “My Happy Pastry Life” (2015),2 there is a similarly blasé reaction to marvelous events. When the narrator’s bread machine somehow creates a human doppelgänger of himself, which then attempts to usurp his life entirely, his internal response is:

I’ve indeed seen many strange things. When I check out at the supermarket, there’s always somebody cutting in line in front of me. When I order beef tendon rice noodles, they always give me fish balls instead. At the subway, I always end up waiting for a train that passes without stopping. And so on. I am indeed a seasoned warrior! (Liang, “Pastry Life” 21)

Firstly, the miraculous technological incident—the creation of a sentient human being from a machine!—in this story is already associated with something utterly banal: a bread machine, an everyday appliance that appears in many households. It is not the outcome of serious scientific inquiry taking place in an ultra-secret government or corporate lab, just something that is discovered by an ordinary office worker upon his return home one day. The examples given above directly after the narrator’s recounting of the miraculous technological incident is an additional layer of banalization, while simultaneously displacing impressions of the fresh incident to remind the reader of the narrator’s everyday concerns and minor inconveniences, none of which have anything to do with the technology of the bread machine, which thus seems irrelevant.

Already, we see that the difference between this type of story and Liang’s Qing-dynasty steampunk adventures is instructive. The banality with which technology is introduced in the story—and the way it is subsequently trivialized—hints that Liang does not believe that speculative technology can produce meaningful change in the present, instead consigning his wildest adventures to a fantastical past. (Even then, whether technology ultimately has a positive impact with respect to China’s ultimate fate is debatable – but that is the subject of another scholarly inquiry.)

Additionally, in stories like “Planet BBQ” and “The Door Leads to the Hallway” (2013),3 Liang combines futuristic technology with the banality, and even irritation, of familiar phenomena in our contemporary society to great effect. “Planet BBQ,” for example, takes place in a time where space travel and the discovery of new planets has been commodified as luxury tourism, instead of the domain of scientific discovery. The industry’s companies thus compete to offer the best equipment for these endeavors: oxygen tanks with the largest life-saving reserves, and the most protective spacesuits, for example – an advantage that ironically becomes a disadvantage. It is an industry that has generated entertainment publications and forums full of “strategy guides” dedicated to high-level (attractive to tourists or commercial interests) planets, mirroring our planetary tourism industry. When “Planet BBQ’s” narrator Zhang Xiaobai crash lands on the titular planet, his first reaction is to marvel at a planet seemingly full of sentient beings that happen to take the form of foods that human beings are interested in eating, and his second reaction is that he will now be able to write a new strategy guide as a claim to fame.

In the midst of starvation and unable to access the plentiful amounts of food items that are seemingly ripe for the taking, he exhausts his options of attempting to pass the food through his airtight spacesuit, cursing the fact that some manufacturers offer suits with an “interior and exterior exchange port,” but his does not. Then, he fantasizes about having a spacesuit that is light as a bubble, allowing exterior objects to enter when necessary. He muses, “Can’t reality be more science-fictional?,” underscoring—despite its setting—the felt banality of his existence (Liang, “Planet BBQ” 7).

Both “Planet BBQ” and “My Happy Pastry Life” thus utilize the unexpected preeminence of banality to great effect. While “BBQ” has the most obvious science-fictional topic of space travel, many SF stories feature sudden and marvelous scientific discoveries like that which the narrator encounters in “Pastry Life.” In either case, the sense of wonder that could be engendered by these nova are quickly set aside for more pedestrian concerns such as the narrator’s ability to maintain his usual routine in “Pastry,” and Zhang’s concerns over his influencer credibility in “BBQ.”

A Future Made Out of Meat and Pastry: The Deflating Effects of Humor and Absurdity

While the circumstances in the two stories quickly settle into a pedestrian rhythm, Liang applies a liberal dose of humor and absurdity to both enhance the readability of his stories and underscore the exasperating contrast between amazing technology and attitudes or circumstances that negate its supposedly wondrous utility. In “My Happy Pastry Life,” the mixture of pathos, existential despair, and quirky humor creates just such cognitive dissonance. In a society where workers feel disposable, Liang’s narrator fittingly finds himself easily replaced by a pastry doppelgänger. The narrator’s internal monologue as he realizes what has happened perfectly encapsulates the story’s combination of ontological anxiety and absurdist humor:

All my hard work, my struggles, the respect I’ve wanted to earn, or should I say that I wanted to demonstrate the unique qualities that only I possess? But I was so easily replaced by pastries! And they so easily out-performed me after they replaced me… (Liang, “Pastry Life” 32)

In a more typical SF story, one could imagine a similar narrative, but  centered around being replaced by automation or by artificial intelligence — the typical boogeymen of SF existential anxiety. But bread and pastries are traditionally sustenance and comfort for human beings, not to mention devices such as the bread machine are usually embraced because they enable convenience and efficiency in one small aspect of the modern middle-class lifestyle, but are not essential or revolutionary enough to be threatening as a piece of technology. Here, suddenly, what is usually comforting is transformed into something absurdly threatening. But the narrator does not have a typical response to the threat, either. Because he sees that the pastry versions of himself perform so well both in terms of career and romantic endeavors, instead of investing in these areas himself, he redoubles his effort in the creation of pastries – as his creations seem have guaranteed success, but he himself does not, at least through the way he used to live his life. Here, Liang emphasizes the very absurdity of the situation by describing, in a comically serious manner, the deliberation and zeal with which the narrator creates pastry after pastry that have essentially replaced his own function in society:

As long as the pastries are made in the bread machine, they should become people…. To make apple pie pastry, one needs not just fresh apples and butter for the filling, but a crust that will accentuate these characteristics. The flour requires large amounts of butter, and the baking time and temperature must be exact… [The apple pastry] was steaming hot, but flaky and tender. Each bite contained the juiciness of fruit but also the delicious decadence of butter… Everything was proceeding smoothly! My happiness—I had a feeling that my happiness had finally arrived! (Liang, “Pastry Life” 30)

The narrator does not exactly describe or investigate how or why his bread machine is able to produce sentient human beings, much less how these human beings emerge as exact replicas of himself, only better. Through the magic of literary narrative, the reader gradually comes to accept these absurdities as we realize that the narrator has accepted it, too. The mystery is how and why the narrator’s pastry selves seem to perform their functions far more admirably. Eventually, we come to understand that the narrator’s inability to “read” the blurry faces of his pastry selves amounts to a kind of literal and psychic misrecognition – the narrator has heretofore not realized that in society, he has never had an authentic self or an ego properly identified as his own; his life and dreams have in some way been shaped by the expectations of work and productivity, and by the expectations of others. Thus, when the narrator ultimately realizes that he himself may also be a bread machine creation, created to continue baking pastry selves ad infinitum, this realization is not surprising because it is in line with how the narrator views his function and work in society: deliciously individual, but ultimately utilitarian, disposable, and replaceable. The reason that the narrator so readily accepted the absurd situation in which he found himself baking pastry replacements, is because he himself was already one: he was not the individual, self-actuating entity that he supposed himself to be, but an interchangeable one in an endless series.

On “Planet BBQ,” the author’s skillful description of the protagonist’s increasingly acute hunger—a mundane reality that all readers must have encountered in their lives—gradually acclimates us to the story’s outrageous premise: that Zhang has crash landed on a planet where the biosphere is teaming with various grilled meats and organs, steaks and lamb chops, rotisserie ducks, and fully-cooked pigs, etc., ready to eat but somehow also alive and seemingly sentient, and bodies of water that are essentially barbecue sauce. The “sauce oceans” even contain bits of vegetation, aromatics such as scallions and cilantro. Having accepted this textual reality, we root for the protagonist and laugh wordlessly with him as he painstakingly finds a way to pass one of the pieces of meat through a valve, all the while getting ever more desperately ravenous. When Zhang finally succeeds in obtaining the piece of meat, he is scalded by his prize because it has just come from an environment where the temperature is apparently 800 degrees Celsius.4 Humorously, because the meat was forced through the oxygen tank one-way valve, it arrives almost shredded into pieces. After this painstaking process that takes up approximately eighty percent of the story, Zhang’s verdict is, humorously and anticlimactically, “It turns out that ground-up pork belly was quite unappetizing… [he] silently swore that he would never eat grilled meat again” (Liang, “Planet BBQ” 13).

The ending of “Planet BBQ” adds to the absurdity that at this point we have come to accept, and also provides an ironic commentary to what the protagonist has just experienced. Mistaking an inbound spacecraft for a rescue vessel, Zhang fantasizes about capitalizing on this adventure on his blog. He feels smug self-satisfied about being a “pioneer,” about having a near-death experience (he will naturally not mention the bathos of spending hours to acquire a piece of meat that ends up being unsatisfying), and imagines being able to bring groups of his admiring followers back to revisit this planet with him. It is at this juncture that Zhang realizes that the spacecraft has flown over his head to land directly next to a clearly man-made structure, a restaurant called “Planet BBQ Premiere Restaurant, Branch No. 4.” These words are the final ones of the story. My somewhat inelegant translation aside, this signage immediately reveals the true nature of the fascinating planet that Zhang has landed on. Not only has it been “populated” (destroying who knows what kind of native ecosystems once in existence) as a commercial venture, it has been done to satisfy an outrageous whim: that of creating an entire planet where grilled meats and its accoutrements are readily available for consumption. The adventurous pioneering spirit and wonder of discovery that one is accustomed to in sublime SF is doubly pierced: by Zhang’s comic episode with the meat, and the final blow of the planet’s real purpose.

Conceptual Frameworks for Liang’s SF and Their Applications

While the depiction of the banal and the absurd risk becoming just that and no more, Liang’s SF is important precisely because of the counterbalance it offers to most popular Chinese SF. While myself and others have identified elsewhere that Chinese SF is largely concerned with social and environmental justice (Luo; Song; Zhou and Liu), Liang’s work is unique in approaching these topics through the lens of banality and absurdity. There are two important advantages to Liang’s unique fictional voice: 1) its relevance to contemporary youth and work culture and 2) its ironicization and subversion of ideas relating to the power and impact of technology as envisioned by China and most Chinese SF.

Liang’s incorporation of the most banal elements of everyday existence and thoughts offers the opportunity for readers to both reevaluate the purpose of technology in real life, and the purpose of the scientific imagination in SF. In Liang’s absurdist SF, his lone protagonists encounter technology that either creates unnecessary complications in their lives, or causes them to reflect further upon the meaninglessness of their daily routines. In these stories, technology neither revolutionizes nor subverts the status quo of social or political conditions at large, because the story provides no opportunity to register impact on a larger scale. There is no hint of the larger physical world beyond the small patch of planet on which Zhang crash lands in “Planet BBQ,” or beyond the commute between home and office that the protagonist of “My Happy Pastry Life” undertakes everyday. For a large part of the story, “Planet BBQ’s” Zhang struggles extensively in a comic-absurdist manner just to pass a single morsel of meat through his spacesuit, revealing a fatal flaw in the suit’s design, only to be disappointed by the taste. The protagonist of “Pastry Life” discovers that his machine can make sentient people that look and act just like him, but his concern is whether the pastry people can win the heart of the colleague he admires, and whether they can perform work functions without anyone discovering his absence, thus banalizing and routinizing these miraculous biological creations. These fictional scenarios are likely to recall for the reader moments in their lives that relate to technological frustration that relate to, and further maintain, the status quo of banal everyday life. For example, Zhang’s struggle may be akin to being forced to use slow and complicated software systems for a work or bureaucratic function rather than reliable pen and paper. On the other hand, the “Pastry Life” protagonist’s one-of-a-kind bread machine produces sentient beings who then… go to work at a boring office job, an outcome which thematically echoes the ways in which revolutionary algorithmic and artificial intelligence technology are being used to further the ends of invasive capitalism, creating conditions not for creativity or transcendence, but simply more work.

These realizations provide a framework for reevaluating the ways in which contemporary SF curtails the parameters by which our near future can be imagined. Usually, the science-fictional imagination is spoken of in the positive sense of inspiring the future, but it is equally likely that the conditions for both scientific inquiry and  literary creativity are incubated within the same contemporary technological milieu. Liang’s work points to the ways in which our current imagination is already strictly limited by mundane concerns and the pressures of an ultra-capitalist society, so it is a voice within contemporary Chinese SF that we should not ignore.

To reiterate perspectives on Chinese SF from two representative recent works of scholarship, Lu asserts that “science fiction in China… has always been taken as a literary way to express the strong desire of the Chinese people to realize and adapt to modernization, urbanization, industrialization, and globalization” (Lu 708), while Peng likewise argues that SF promotes modernization, except one that is parallel to and nourished by a national narrative of growth and progress. These two types of discourses both assume that science and science-fictional ideas promote positive growth and equate technological development with progress. What is unique about Liang’s SF is, as mentioned earlier, its kinship with the “lie flat” ethos that seeks to question, if not disrupt, this kind of ideological narrative that is intertwined with unadulterated technological and capitalistic growth.

As Wendy Su explains, Xi Jinping’s “internal circulation” strategy, designed to reduce Chinese dependence on international markets and technologies, also created intensified competition and increasing frustration among China’s youth: “The anxiety further extends to the uncertainty in the job market and the insecurity of income, and turns into a fear for the future, a sense of futile effort and the pointless meaning of life, and eventually an attitude of lying flat” (Su 133). While this “lying-flatism” emerged as a result of post-pandemic geopolitical and economic instability, Su also identifies various subcultures from the past two decades as precedents. Though these subcultures emerged due to a variety of different factors, what they have in common is a negative outlook that disclaims the official national narrative of harmony, progress, and growth (Su 133). Liang’s “mundane SF,” all published since the mid-2010s, substitutes whimsy for negativity, but is clearly informed by sentiments of youthful discontent with the status quo.

“My Happy Pastry Life” most directly speaks to this kind of discontent as the narrator’s already mundane life and minor career ambitions turn out to be illusions pierced by the revelation that he is not only easily replaced, but was an illusory human being himself. The ease with which his machine produces sentient entities that are capable of replacing a human being renders insignificant that human’s aspirations and sense of purpose in modern-day society, just as many modern Chinese youth feel like interchangeable cogs who feel out of step with the country’s prescribed economic goals and social objectives. On the other hand, the scenario described in “Planet BBQ” implies that much of what a modern nation strives to achieve in the name of technological progress is ultimately used not for the material benefit of its people as a whole, but for idle, vain pleasures such as the type of space travel depicted in the story. The two settings, while seemingly unrelated, are connected through their shared conviction that our banal realities of work and striving are not inherently worthwhile objectives, but merely ends to imposed capitalistic means.

Thus while much of Chinese SF, as Lu and Peng assert, does indeed express the aspirations and fears pertaining to China’s dramatic modernization process and thus could be said to evince a kind of unique “Chineseness,” Liang’s work crafts a narrative relatable to a large part of the world that is suffering under relentless capitalistic technological development, pursuing productivity, efficiency, and growth instead of serious scientific investigation, while losing the sense of self and humanity that would be accessible during a less hectic existence. While those who control most of the world’s resources would have us believe that social classes, ethnic groups, and nation-states are in competition with one another for survival, Liang’s stories reveal much more absurdist rationales underlying modern day-to-day routines: resources and ingenuity spent on creating a planet of sentient food, and an impulse to “go to work” and perform despite one’s biological existence coming into question. The felt mundanity and exasperation in these stories underscore a kind of fundamental human struggle that would be relatable regardless of language or nationality, striving for a kind of connectedness across our existences despite politics and division.

To encounter mundanity and absurdity in a work of SF—a reflection of one’s everyday life—is unexpected, as SF is popularly conceived as an escapist genre depicting awe-inspiring “Big Dumb Objects” that contrast with human insignificance.5 In addition to this relatively unusual approach and tone, Liang’s work is important for two reasons: first, it is a voice of representation within Chinese SF that, along with the “porridge SF” of Xia Jia, contributes to the heterogeneity and maturity of Chinese SF as a genre. For the Chinese reader, it is undoubtedly refreshing to encounter SF that is sympathetic to one’s everyday struggles and does not only depict exceptional people accomplishing impressive feats. Certainly, many SF stories depict ordinary people struggling against extraordinary circumstances, but despite the relatable nature of the characters, the incredible situations in which they find themselves ultimately help the reader readily process the story as “merely” fictional entertainment, not relevant to one’s everyday life. For the non-Chinese reader, this type of SF helps mitigate the negative stereotype of China as fiercely competitive and nationalistic.

Secondly, “SF of everyday life” such as Liang’s stories and Ted Chiang’s The Lifecycle of Software Objects draws attention to a different way that the science-fictional can impact our everyday lives. Its unexpected use of science and technology is revelational in that it immediately feels authentically true to life in ways that much more dramatic narratives do not. One counter-intuitively important aspect of the SF imaginary is not always evident: SF hypothesizes unimaginably optimistic and pessimistic scenarios, but it should also acknowledge the ways in which technological nova do not change our lives, where it may encounter or point to intractable problems that are attributable to societal structure and human psychology, and not technological developments. These stories’ foregrounding of the mundane drives home this point, so they should not be dismissed as mere whimsy or a “lesser” version of the sublime SF of Big Dumb Objects or national narratives. Instead of presenting escapist fantasies or reflections of philosophy or geopolitics, they ask us to look within and scrutinize the way technology potentially impacts the meaning of our own lives.


NOTES

[1] 《烤肉自助星》

[2] 《面包我的幸福》

[3] 《门,是穿堂门的门》

[4] The text does not explain why the meat has not been burnt to a crisp.

[5] The editors of Science Fiction Encyclopedia have since replaced this “jocular yet affectionate” term first coined in 1981 with the more appropriate yet less fun “macrostructure,” because the big objects depicted in SF are not always “dumb” in any sense of the term, but turn out to be sentient and/or intelligent (“Big Dumb Objects”).

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Fontaine Lien received her Ph.D. in comparative literature from the University of California, Riverside and has taught language, literature, and culture across many institutions. Currently, she is assistant professor of Chinese in the Department of Languages and Cultures at the U.S. Naval Academy. She is the author of Reading Chinese Science Fiction in the Age of Techno-Nationalism (2025, Liverpool University Press). Her research interests include speculative fiction, film and media studies, and the scholarship of teaching and learning. The views expressed in this article are those of the author and do not reflect the official policy or position of the U.S. Naval Academy, Department of the Navy, the Department of War, or the U.S. Government.


Metafiction and Pale Fire in Blade Runner 2049



Metafiction and Pale Fire in Blade Runner 2049

Ian Campbell

Editor’s Note: This is a paper I published in a peer-reviewed online film studies journal in 2019. The journal has since gone dark, and I want to preserve the paper and cite it in future research, so I’m taking advantage of my position as editor here to reproduce it.

Near the end of the first act of Blade Runner 2049 (Denis Villeneuve, 2017), the hologram girlfriend Joi (Ana de Armas) of the protagonist K (Ryan Gosling) expresses the desire to cheer him up after a hard day. K is a Replicant, a vatgrown human gengineered for strength, reflexes, perception and, as the film’s opening crawl states, obedience. The crawl also describes K’s job: a Blade Runner is a police officer whose primary job is to “retire” renegade Replicants by killing them. K’s hard day has included killing another person for the crime of unauthorized existence; he also undergoes what the overlay text tells us is a “post-traumatic baseline test”. In this test, he repeats back to an unseen interviewer words from seemingly arbitrary phrases as a demonstration that he remains obedient. Joi pulls from a book on the table an image of that book; viewers see her from K’s perspective holding up the book; its title and author, Pale Fire (1962) by Vladimir Nabokov, are clearly visible, framed by her hands near the center of the screen.

“Let’s read”, she says, to which he responds, “You hate that book”. She shrugs, tosses the image to the side, changes her outfit in the blink of an eye and asks him to dance. The presence of Pale Fire is a brief illusion in the film, perhaps something intended to provide Blade Runner 2049 (BR49) with reflected depth or glory, in the manner that BR49 takes from the original Blade Runner (Ridley Scott, 1982) and the title of Nabokov’s novel and the poem within the novel take from Shakespeare’s Timon of Athens. Yet the arbitrary phrases K repeats in his test of obedience are in fact lines from the same poem: Joi may discard the image of Pale Fire, but the deliberate framing of the book encourages viewers to investigate how it might reflect upon the film.

This essay will argue that the presence of Pale Fire in BR49 repositions the film as metafictional science fiction: the film demands to be watched and re-watched in conjunction with other texts it references, including Pale Fire, in much the same manner as Nabokov’s novel demands to be read and re-read. The disjunctions and misdirections in the novel, centered on whether and to what extent its narrator can be trusted, enable us to view the film’s implied successful revolution by Replicants against their masters as an appealing but ultimately false narrative. The film places viewers in a position structurally equivalent to readers of Pale Fire and to K inside BR49’s story: we are led to jump to an attractive conclusion even though we are shown evidence that the conclusion is unjustified. The film uses a particular visual motif of focusing on holographic illusion as illusion, especially around Joi, in order to both distract from and draw attention to the misdirection. Both Blade Runner films are science fiction (SF): if we read them through the understanding of SF literature as estranging conditions in our own world as a means of reflecting upon those conditions, we can understand that both films estrange the growing dominance of corporate power in their respective eras. The first film shows that this dominance can be slowed, arrested or even reversed, if only through violence. BR49 appears to make the same point, but attention to Pale Fire and to the visual motif of illusion enables a reading of the film as much bleaker, where opportunities to challenge corporate power are always already foreclosed.

For those who have seen Blade Runner (BR82) but not BR49, the sequel presumes that Deckard (Harrison Ford) and Rachael (Sean Young) are indeed able to live outside the reach of corporate power, if only for a couple of years. The protagonist of BR49 is K, a Replicant who serves as a Blade Runner in the collapsed ecosystem of midcentury Los Angeles. After “retiring” a Replicant, he discovers traces on what prove to be the bones of Rachael that she, also a Replicant, gave birth. This promises to upend the society of BR49, in that the difference between Replicants and born humans is no longer empathy (as in the first film) but rather the capacity to reproduce. There is a rebel Replicant underground, who believe the child will lead them to a successful revolution against their corporate and human oppressors. Joi helps K convince himself that he is the now-grown child; he tracks down Deckard, who is the only one who knows that the child is in fact Ana Stelline (Carla Juri), a designer of implanted memories sequestered in her lab on the pretext that she has an autoimmune condition. When the Wallace Corporation, the successor to the first film’s Tyrell Corporation, captures Deckard in order to extract the secret from him, K intervenes. He kills Wallace’s (Jared Leto) Replicant enforcer Luv (Sylvia Hoeks) and frames Deckard as dead so that Deckard might reunite with his daughter without fear of Wallace tracking them down. K dies as a result.

Blade Runner and SF

Both Blade Runner films are SF: they were conceived and marketed as such, and designated as such in major databases such as IMDB and Box Office Mojo. The Encyclopedia of Science Fiction calls the original Blade Runner “the most influential SF film”. (Clute and Nicholls, 224) For how we might analyze SF films, Annette Kuhn established five categories, one of which is reflection, where a film embodies real-world sociocultural issues, such as the perception of 1950s SF film as Cold War paranoia. (Kuhn, 16) In this essay, I will focus on the parallel trope in criticism of SF literature, cognitive estrangement. The term comes from the work of SF critic Darko Suvin; he took “estrangement” from the works of playwright Bertolt Brecht, who defined it as “a representation [that] allows us to recognize its subject, but at the same time makes it seem unfamiliar”. (Willett, 192) This is often phrased as “a reflection in a distorting mirror”. For Suvin, the alternative imaginative framework of an SF text contains a novum or new thing. Suvin borrows the term “novum” from another of his chief influences, Ernst Bloch, defining it as a “totalizing phenomenon or relationship deviating from the author’s and implied reader’s norm of reality”. The novum is plausible as an extrapolation from currently-understood science or as a rewrite of history based on the appearance of the novum before the time in which a work is set, hence “cognitive”. The work of SF uses the consequences of the novum’s presence to reflect upon or question the current conditions in the author’s society. (Suvin, 10) In both films, the novum is Replicants, cognitive in that in 1982 it was a plausible future extrapolation to 2019 and cognitive in 2017 as an extrapolation from the first film. SF and metafiction are of course not mutually exclusive: SF grandmaster Robert A. Heinlein’s The Number of the Beast (1980) has its characters jumping between his own and others’ fictional worlds, while much of Philip K. Dick’s work has metafictional elements.

There are at least as many readings of BR82 through cognitive estrangement as there are cuts of the film; Replicants as slaves is one of the more common approaches. Judith B. Kerman argues that Replicants are lower than slaves:

Although Mosaic law allowed slavery, the slaves of the Israelites had clear legal rights, based specifically on empathy, the memory that the Israelites had been slaves and strangers in a strange land (Exodus 22:20). It is obvious that the replicants have no such protection, and they are even, by definition, excluded from empathy (their own, and human empathy toward them). (Kernan 2005, 36)

Yet slavery is the reflection in the distorting mirror: BR82 discusses it openly, most notably in the climactic scene on the rooftop. I believe the mirror reflects the real-world effect of the growth of corporate power in the years leading up to 1982. Government that represents the interests of citizens has been reduced to violence in the service of unelected oligarchs such as Tyrell; people live in darkness lit by enormous advertisements, while the CEO lives like a pharaoh. Humans, born or Replicant, have little to no say in the direction or structure of their society. BR49 maintains essentially the same paradigm, with Tyrell replaced by Wallace and rain by snow. The ads are holographic now, but Replicants remain slaves.

Pale Fire and Blade Runner 2049

Nabokov’s Pale Fire is a work of problematic, very funny and often absurd literary analysis; it is also a moving meditation on death and grief. The poem “Pale Fire”, written by recently-deceased American poet-professor John Shade, is presented with foreword, annotation and index by Charles Kinbote, a professor from the possibly fictional Baltic country of Zembla. In the poem, Shade muses on his life, most notably the death by drowning of his teenaged daughter Hazel. This appears quite straightforward and often trite, though in fact it is self-reflective and complex. The poem’s primary theme is of Shade overcoming his grief through his faith that the patterns he sees in the world are indicative of a life beyond his. Kinbote, who may or may not be the exiled king of Zembla, argues that the poem is about his own life as king, the overthrow of his regime, and his subsequent escape and flight to America. He backs up his claim through highly improbable and discursive readings of the poem and the unsupported assertion that he convinced Shade to write his story in the guise of the poet’s own. The novel culminates with the reveal that Shade was murdered just after he finished the poem. Kinbote claims the killer is an assassin sent by the new Zemblan regime to assassinate him; the man is likely a local criminal who mistakes Shade for Kinbote’s landlord, the judge who sentenced him to prison. Kinbote takes advantage of Shade’s widow’s grief to make off with the index cards upon which the sole copy of the poem is written, then presents to us the poem and his preposterous reading thereof. We have no guarantee the poem is as Shade wrote it; we have no guarantee Shade even wrote the poem; the lack of guarantee is in many aspects precisely the point of Pale Fire. Kinbote himself may or may not be a figment of Shade’s imagination (or vice versa); he also may be V. Botkin, a paranoid and delusional visiting professor.

The indeterminacy of Pale Fire makes it as studied and argued-over a text in literary criticism as BR82 is in criticism of SF cinema. The novel addresses the interplay between authors and readers as much as the stories of Shade’s or Kinbote’s lives. Many of the earliest critiques framed the novel as a “puzzle box” or “jewel box”, both in admiration of its construction and to imply that a sufficiently careful reading could tease out the answer to the puzzle. (McCarthy) For a generation, critics argued enthusiastically for different and often mutually exclusive positions on the roles of poet Shade and commentator Kinbote, (Maddox, 15-18) or Kinbote’s “real” identity as V. Botkin. (Alexandrov, 374-375) Pale Fire is “a text of absolute uncertainty”. (McHale, 18) Many critics address Nabokov’s long interest in the writing of chess puzzles in between writing critically-acclaimed bestsellers1 in his adopted language and curating the Lepidoptera collection at the Harvard Museum of Comparative Zoology. (Boyd 1999, 9) Chess puzzles typically only admit one solution, hence the hypothesis that Pale Fire also does. Thomas Karshan argues that the entire text is a game, and we need to read it “playfully”, without regard for definite truth, because to solve the puzzle would be to end it, and the novel “equates ending with death”. For Karshan, the desire to find the solution is what drives readers to perform the difficult work of decoding that “initiate[s] us in the play of thought” and transforms readers into writers. (Karshan, 205-206) For Maurice Couturier, the search for the solution to the puzzle is always already doomed to fail because of “various elements of overdetermination” within the text. (Couturier, 56-62)

In the poem, Shade, in search of solace for his grief, succumbs to one of the fits to which he is sometimes subject:

And blood-black nothingness began to spin
A system of cells interlinked within\
Cells interlinked within cells interlinked
Within one stem. And dreadfully distinct
Against the dark, a tall white fountain played.
[703-707] (Nabokov, 59)

These are of course the very words K and the interviewer exchange in the baseline test in BR49. Viewers may not recognize them as lines from the poem, but after seeing Joi present the book, and hearing the words again later in the film when K botches the test, they may look up the words and find their origin in the novel. Readers who scan the section of the poem surrounding these lines will find that the “tall white fountain” is a nebulous representation of proof of an afterlife. Shade reads a newspaper story about a woman who after a near-death experience also recounts seeing a tall white fountain. When Shade seeks out the source, he finds that the article contains a misprint: the woman saw a mountain, not a fountain. [747-802] (Nabokov, 60-62) It’s a curious choice for a test of obedience: to repeat the tall white fountain is in fact to misspeak, to misinterpret. K may have read or even reread Pale Fire; he may have started it but stopped reading because Joi “hates that book”; he certainly learns to misspeak and thus to disobey over the course of the film.

I will undertake a critical reading of BR49 through the 1999 monograph on Pale Fire written by Brian Boyd, also a biographer of Nabokov. Boyd writes about the experience of multiple readings of the novel, especially insofar as this replicates the process of scientific discovery. (Boyd 1999, 3-4) In the first of Boyd’s three approaches to the text, he begins with the foreword before moving to the poem and thence the commentary and index. From the second paragraph of the foreword, it’s evident that Kinbote interjects more of himself into the commentary than is proper for an academic editor. For Boyd, this leads to a fork in the path at the end of the fifth paragraph, where Kinbote urges readers to see his note on line 991. (Nabokov, 15) Readers who turn to the note will be able to follow a trail of cross-references leading to the revelation that Kinbote (believes he) is the exiled king of Zembla. Readers who turn to the notes will then frame the poem in a rather different manner than does the linear reading Boyd believes readers will follow once they have dismissed Kinbote as unreliable. The remainder of the foreword, for linear readers, gives no further cross-references, but ample evidence to question Kinbote’s competence, his custody of the poem, his relationship to Shade, his personality, sexuality and sanity. Shade’s poem, then, becomes for linear readers the “true” story, especially given its humility and lack of bombast, and Kinbote an intruder trying to hijack it for his own ends. (Boyd 1999, 15-24)

In BR49, K does not enter the story with the preconceived idea that he’s the chosen one or “specimen”,2 nor is he played as a comic figure or unreliable narrator, but he’s still clearly framed as the protagonist of the film. Once he finds the wooden horse, even though he knows full well he’s a Replicant with implanted memories, he’s smitten with the idea that he’s the specimen—the protagonist of his own story. Ana Stelline, the real specimen, tells him “someone lived” his memory of the horse. K’s reaction to this is extreme emotion; first-time viewers accustomed to the tropes of film understand he believes himself to be the “someone”. He ignores or transcends his own programming, learns to lie and exhibits a considerably broader range of emotion. In this reading, BR49 is rather more subtle than Pale Fire: whereas the novel foregrounds Kinbote’s unreliability, the film encourages viewing Ana not as the specimen—though she lives in a specimen jar—but as a tertiary character. To the extent that BR49 gives us the story of the real specimen, it only takes place in one long sequence at the precise midpoint of the film and in a very brief penultimate scene. Most of what viewers see in the film is K’s story. In this reading, having Joi hold up an image of Pale Fire reads as something of a wink and a nod to the sort of clever people who know their modern literary classics, much as the references to Shakespeare, Swift, Pope, Eliot and others in the poem, especially those that Kinbote ignores or misinterprets in the commentary, are clues laid for readers by Nabokov the chess puzzle designer. The presence of Pale Fire is a clue to first-time viewers that they ought not to be nearly as shocked or crushed as K himself is when the narrative of him as the specimen turns out to be false.

Boyd’s second approach to Pale Fire imagines readers giving the novel a rereading, forearmed with the knowledge that Shade is dead and Kinbote an egoist or madman. Careful examination of all four sections of the text leads readers to visiting Russian professor V. Botkin. The stress caused by Botkin’s exile compels him to reimagine himself first as Kinbote, then as the king of Zembla. Boyd finds much support in the text for this reading, where Botkin, desperately in need of affirmation or distraction from suicidal ideation, imposes upon Shade’s tolerance and gentle nature to try to induce Shade to write about the delusional Zemblan narrative, which Botkin constructs from their mutual colleagues and the objects and books in his landlord’s home. (Boyd 1999, 91-106) This makes of Kinbote a tragic figure rather than a buffoon or villain.

Viewers who rewatch BR49, forearmed with the knowledge that Ana is the specimen, may find that it adds nuance but relatively little in the way of structural difference. While a second viewing can bring additional pathos to K’s role in creating his own delusion,3 it doesn’t refocus the film. Nevertheless, this rewatching does draw attention to the sheer emptiness of K’s physical and emotional life in the film’s first act. Gosling plays his movements in the initial scenes as jerky and robotic, his face a mask. K knows what he is: a created being, a mostly inhuman killer of humans who are trying to be human. He’s aware that his “childhood” in the orphanage with the toy horse is a set of implanted memories, designed to create emotional responses that mimic those of a human and thereby make him more obedient to his masters. Yet he warms as he begins to believe he might be a born creature, one with a soul, as he puts it to Joshi. His face softens and grows more expressive and his movements looser. A rewatching with the knowledge that he’s delusional underscores his alienation and provokes sympathy, in a manner analogous to how rereaders of Pale Fire might sympathize more with Kinbote/Botkin and his need to do anything to make himself feel that he matters. K knows that if he’s the specimen, Wallace is going to try to vivisect him, but that’s only in one respect worse than another night eating grubs after another day killing his own kind, with his only company a hologram girlfriend.

Boyd’s third reading, or “re-rereading”, centers upon putting in abeyance the conflict between text and commentary in favor of tracing the paths that do exist. He begins his re-rereading by identifying the central question posed by the poem: whether there is an afterlife and whether something of Shade’s daughter Hazel survived her death. While Shade explicitly dismisses her “survival as conventional ghost, phantom, shade”, he ends the poem believing that his sense of order within chaos implies that she is in some way still alive. Through close re-rereading of the poem and commentary, and of the apparent gibberish of the message Kinbote says Shade and his wife and daughter received in a purportedly haunted barn, Boyd grounds an argument that Hazel or her spirit is alive within the poem, but that Shade is unable to perceive this. Boyd interlinks the names of butterflies, one of Kinbote’s many missed cues, and one of Nabokov’s other works of fiction to scaffold a more general argument that in the text and world of Pale Fire, the dead send messages to the living, who can perceive the messages as phenomena but not as carriers of meaning. The message in the barn is not gibberish but a warning from Shade’s Aunt Maud; the Red Admirable butterfly mentioned near the end of the poem is Hazel-as-Psyche. Both try to deter Shade from walking to Kinbote’s house, where he will be killed, but Shade cannot understand their efforts as messages, much less decode them. (Boyd 1999, 131-144) Participation in the quest for meaning both leads readers to the hidden presence of the dead yet alive and transforms Pale Fire into a metafictional text: readers become aware that the text foregrounds its own construction and exhibits slippage among levels of narrative.

BR49 presents two messages from the dead to the living: the scalpel marks on Rachael’s pelvis and the Joi advertisement near the end.


The advertisement is much simpler to decode, in that Joi, here still played by de Armas, serves as inspiration for K to emerge from his existential crisis and decide to rescue Deckard. Gosling gives enough nuance to K’s reaction to the giant, bare-breasted hologram crouching down and telling him he looks like a good joe that it’s evident that K knows that this is manipulation—and yet, it motivates him.

In the scene where Rachael’s bones are examined, the characters in the room, human and Replicant, immediately understand that the scalpel marks are a message and that their meaning is clear. Joshi states in the subsequent scene that “the world is built on a wall” that separates kind, and that without that wall there will be war, or slaughter. The marks on Rachael’s pelvis break down that wall. Joshi engages in a debate with K over what it means to be born, a question that comes up multiple times in the film: K says, “to be born is to have a soul, I guess.” Later, Joi will link this to “being wanted”: this appears to be a facet of underground Replicant culture.

The dependence of status upon the biological, however, is by the standards of real-world 2017 problematic: no serious scholar would try to argue that only those who can bear biological children are truly human. Many critical responses to BR49 take issue with the implications of the consistent focus on reproduction. To take one of many examples on the internet, Emma Louise Backe argues that:

…the central conceit of the movie—that replicants have the capacity to reproduce and therefore ascend from their status as sub-human citizens—the promise of transformation through child-bearing is a tired trope of science fiction, one that reinforces, rather than subverts, the future of the female. (Backe)

She’s not wrong about the tiredness of the trope, but I’d like to propose that one use of Pale Fire in the film is to induce viewers to wonder how accurate the commentary is—not Backe’s, but rather Joshi’s and K’s when they talk about walls and souls. To rewatch the film shows that K sees his own “birthday” when he kneels down in front of the dead tree; to re-rewatch the film reminds us that K knows well that his memories are implanted and that he is to some extent aware that he’s jumping to a conclusion belied by evidence.3 He talks himself into believing that he’s the specimen, but some part of his mind immediately understands the truth that he’s a secondary character in another’s story. I believe it’s more productive to read Joshi’s description of the wall as misdirection, or perhaps propaganda. There is indeed a wall in BR49, and it’s not just the enormous one that separates the risen sea from the city. Yet nor does it separate humans and Replicants insofar as they are fertile and infertile. The wall in the film separates kind, but those kinds are free and slave, not human and Replicant. The existence of a child born from two Replicants only threatens war or slaughter insofar as it’s the final foreclosure upon the hopes of Replicants that they might one day be free. The film doesn’t state whether the child of a slave is itself a slave, as in the antebellum USA, but Niander Wallace, the CEO in BR49, thinks he could have the numbers he wants if Replicants could reproduce.

Reading the first film through the lens of cognitive estrangement allows us to see slavery as a distorted reflection of the dominance of corporate power. Wallace clearly imagines the children of Replicants as his own children. He treats them as his slaves, though he estranges this through his soaring rhetoric about angels. Viewers may think that Wallace believes he’s trying to help humanity, even though he has just stated that “every leap of civilization was built off the back of a disposable workforce”. In BR82, Tyrell gives Replicants a four-year lifespan; it’s said that this is in order to prevent them from developing attachments that might lead to rebellion, but it’s also a means of protecting the Tyrell Corporation’s profits. As Kerman points out, “As in the case of any slave, the design flaw is not so much the short life as the development of control problems which make a short life convenient.” (Kerman 1991, 21) In BR49, the open-ended lifespan of Replicants is a problem for Wallace: they go underground and farm grubs, or pluck out their right eyeballs and form a rag-tag Résistance, or just move to Vegas and keep bees and drink—but they all stop working for the Wallace Corporation. Yet if Replicants can have children, this protects Wallace’s profits.

When Backe argues that transformation through childbearing is an SF cliché, she’s half right: it is a sexist cliché, but BR49 does not present childbearing as ascension from sub-human status. Rather, childbearing is the final barring of humanity to Replicants. If knowledge of the existence of the specimen will bring war, it’s not because the knowledge means Replicants will be free, but rather that they will be forever slaves. Guided by the shade of Pale Fire, we can understand that the Replicants are behaving like Kinbote: they grasp at scraps of narrative in order to construct a meaningful story in which they are the protagonists rather than the preterite. Out of a desperate need to patch his suicidal alienation, Botkin/Kinbote assembles—in Boyd’s re-rereading, Hazel inspires him to assemble—from his colleagues and his landlord’s house a story in which he is king. Out of a similar need, K uses memories he knows are implants in order to assemble a story in which he is the wanted child. The renegade Replicants cast themselves as rebels who would overthrow an interstellar empire.

Holographic Illusion in Blade Runner 2049

Yet BR49 is not a work of print literature: a full “reading” of the film will encompass whether and how its visuals dovetail with the effects of Pale Fire. I believe that the film uses a visual motif to estrange the dramatic increase in corporate dominance of Western society from 1982 to 2017; this same motif also reinforces skepticism toward the narratives of K as the specimen and the Replicant underground as having a fighting chance. There is a particular sort of holographic illusion in the film, especially in the presence of Joi, where our attention is drawn to the fact that it’s an illusion. Joi inspires K throughout the film, even beyond her death; her desire to be “real” mirrors the desire of Replicants in BR82 to be human and to have more life; in discussions of BR49, most viewers find it tragic that Luv kills her by stomping on the emanator just as Joi says “I love you”. We want her to be human, especially since the first film encourages us to expand our definition of humanity. Yet BR49’s focus on the evident illusion of Joi’s presence signals that underneath her apparent autonomy and humanity, she’s another product of the same corporation that creates K and sends him off to kill the specimen.

Just before we see the image of Pale Fire, the projector in the apartment articulates in order to manifest hologram Joi, dressed as a waitress. She carries a hologram of a plate of food, which she places over the bowl of grubs K has prepared for dinner:

We can see what’s on the plate, but at no point does the image of the meal fully cover the bowl of grubs; thirty seconds later, the image is gone and the grubs are still there. The illusion creates a simulacrum of a better or more appealing reality: this screenshot is the point at which the illusion most clearly overlays the reality, but even here, it’s still obviously an illusion. Joi lights his cigarette; K then clearly, deliberately, blows smoke through her, but immediately follows this up by moving his feet so that she can sit down. Once she sits, we see the bowl of grubs, naked of illusion, between them. This first encounter with Joi takes this particular, ambivalent form as a means of drawing the attention of careful viewers—the sort who might follow Kinbote’s direction and turn to the commentary on “Pale Fire” before reading the poem—to the sleight of hand involved in its presentation of Joi as human. The overlay on the bowl of grubs, its incomplete coverage and its subsequent disappearance, all within the space of a few lines of dialogue, serve as a key to inform careful viewers of what Joi is and is not. K interacts with her as if she’s human, making space for her to sit down, asking her how her day was, telling her not to fuss—but all of this is itself a game of pretend, that she is a real person who cares for him and he is a real person who is cared for. How ludic the game is for K, especially at first, is difficult to gauge: he genuinely seems to care, but he also blows smoke at and through her.

The original The Matrix (Wachowski Brothers, 1999) draws our attention to Jean Baudrillard’s work on simulations and simulacra in the same manner that BR49 does with Pale Fire, leaving viewers who follow that path to a deeper understanding of how the hyperreality of the matrix almost demands Cypher’s betrayal of the crew. (Baudrillard, 174-175) When Joi, herself an illusion, holds up Nabokov’s text, it’s an invitation to explore how the novel might affect our understanding of the film; yet the illusions surrounding Joi and her (self-)presentation are partly concealed by her apparent humanity.

As the film progresses, Joi explores her growing humanity, or rather appears to explore what appears to be her growing humanity. Because the first film encourages an expansive definition of humanity, we’re inclined to sympathize with her, but to read the film metafictionally is to understand that it’s as easy for us to jump to conclusions as it is for K. He sees the (planted) evidence and thinks himself the chosen one; we see Joi inspiring K and slot it into a trope to which we’ve been sensitized. The resistance Replicants have evidently watched a lot of movies, too, because they slot themselves into the Star Wars narrative, and don’t the rag-tag rebels led by a princess always end up defeating the totalitarians? Yet K knows his memories are implanted; the resistance is up against insurmountable odds.

Later in the scene, K fetches the package containing the emanator and tells Joi it’s their anniversary. She says “It is?”; he answers, “Let’s just say that it is”, further illustrating the issue at hand here. As she gushes over the emanator, he reboots the system, freezing her in place:

The film gives three images and a sound: the Wallace logo, her customization menu, the update window and the Joi music, the first six notes of Peter’s theme from Peter and the Wolf. In just a few seconds, we’re shown that Joi is a product of the same corporation that creates and enslaves flesh-and-blood humans. She looks the way she does because K has chosen that appearance. She can be updated, implying that developers have control over her personality. There’s even a tune that reminds K, and us, that all these features that distinguish Joi from a “real” human exist. Joi is a work of fiction explicitly designed to mitigate the lack of connection that characterizes this estrangement of our world—“everything you want to hear”, says the advertisement K walks by just before he enters the building.

Yet even in a rewatching, or a re-rewatching à la Boyd, it’s difficult not to fall for the illusion and to think that Joi is in some way meaningfully human. Joi says she has “cabin fever”, and then an illusion is placed before us, and we’re told and shown it’s an illusion. Like K, however, we want to believe, even though “cabin fever” makes it clear that Joi, a product of the Wallace Corporation, is programmed to make K, also a product of the Wallace Corporation, want to spend his hard-earned murder bonus on yet another product of the Wallace Corporation. She’s there to manipulate; her motives are not to teach K to embrace life except insofar as this drives him to act in Wallace’s interests. The theme from Peter and the Wolf is well-chosen, because while the symphony’s narrative is that of a child who ignores the patriarch’s command, goes over the wall and saves the day, the purpose of Prokofiev’s piece is to teach children how to “read” a symphony by recognizing the themes played by different instruments. (Morrison, 51) Like Pale Fire and BR49, it’s metafictional.

In the very next scene, K leads Joi to the roof, where he walks out into the rain, buttoning up his coat and collar against the cold. We see a long shot of her left hand, as she stabilizes the hologram so that (it appears that) the raindrops land on her skin instead of passing through:

She looks up into the rain; now, the illusion is nearly perfect. He even sort of smiles, but she, in her flimsy dress that were she real wouldn’t be appropriate in this weather, is weeping, evidently overcome by emotion. The illusion is broken when a floodlight renders her translucent, but the emotion continues. She comes in for a kiss, which seems very real, until she glitches; he has six seconds of befuddlement until the Automated Joi System Override window comes up. He walks by her while she’s still frozen, and only then remembers to take out the emanator and turn her off.

It’s both easy to recognize and difficult to remember that the illusion is only an overlay, not real. She only looks solid in the absence of direct, bright light, but her feelings seem real—certainly realer than his—and what real human wouldn’t want that kiss to be real? He’s freeing her from “cabin fever”; she’s freeing him from existential loneliness. Joi, however, is a work of fiction: the raindrops on her hand aren’t any more real than the hand itself. Joi is a(n instance of a) computer program, a very sophisticated one to be sure, but not an autonomous intelligence with real feelings. Watching the film for the first time, she seems very human; rewatching the film, she seems like something a very lonely human might bond with; even re-rewatching the film, it’s difficult to keep in mind that K’s feelings have also been programmed. Luv tells him “I see you’re also a customer”, which in context is two Replicants pointing out each other’s artificiality, or perhaps flirting. It also serves as another indication that Joi is a corporate product—and that the Wallace Corporation knows it can use Joi to manipulate K.

Half an hour later in the film, K brings the emanator to the DNA viewing room. Throughout the scene, Joi keeps moving her head back and forth, sometimes directly occupying the space of K’s head, sometimes moving just to one side. Her first comment is “Mere data makes a man”, then says that he’s made up of an alphabet of four letters, while she only has ones and zeroes.

Those who have seen BR82 may see her as akin to a Replicant and thus able to become human through empathy. Yet the film keeps showing the illusion, so upon re-rewatching we ought to question whether this isn’t a narrative we’re being encouraged to embrace. When K discovers the existence of twins, Joi says, “I always knew you were special”, which seems like the sort of thing a caring girlfriend would say, but is also quite plausible from a program acting in the overriding interest of the Wallace Corporation. K knows his memories aren’t his own, but she whispers lovingly “to be born, to be wanted”. The temptation is great enough to send him on a quest for what he might think is himself. He takes Joi in the car with him, until it’s shorted out, whereupon she begins to flicker in and out of existence; we can hear the Peter and the Wolf theme, the aural cue that Joi is an instrument, not a human. After the car crash-lands, she manifests outside the door and calls out to awaken him.

de Armas plays it well, as if she really were a girlfriend in every way except the tangible, such that it’s easy to forget that to whatever extent she’s human, she’s a slave to Wallace. It’s implausible that the emanator and the Joi code are not in some way being monitored; sure enough, the moment there’s real danger, missiles start falling and the perspective cuts to Luv. But of course this isn’t because Luv cares for K,4 but rather because he can find something the corporation desperately wants. “Get up and do your fuckin’ job”, Luv murmurs as if to K while she casually slaughters dozens of born humans from a drone as another slave works on her fingernails. The humans are dismembered, but this isn’t an illusion; rather, the illusion lies in to whatever extent K believes the ignis ex machina reifies his Joi-inspired belief that he’s special. He’s a product of the Wallace Corporation, inspired by another product of the same corporation, monitored and rescued (and later beaten up and left for dead) by a third product of that corporation. The illusions are beautiful, however, and the narratives attractive, so a watcher or even a rewatcher can be excused for thinking him the hero with subjectivity and her a proto- or quasi-human who cares for him:

K returns home, to Joi saying “I want to be real for you” and the entrance of the Replicant “doxie” or sex worker, Mariette. Joi overlays herself on Mariette’s body, then they embrace K together. It seems to fall into familiar tropes: spirit possesses body, two become one. Joi tells Mariette to hold still so she can “sync” with her. It’s the film’s most tender scene, as well, but the direction goes to great lengths to foreground how much of it is an illusion clearly visible to all three parties.

Here is the same view of Joi and Mariette together, a few seconds before:

Viewers may frame this as Joi doing her best to be real, to come as close as she can to giving K the physical connection he desperately seeks; they may reframe it as yet another example of the tired and sexist trope of a woman only existing in order to inspire a man. But it’s also possible to re-reframe it as an exchange: Mariette gets money for her (human, if Replicant) body, K gains an inspirational catharsis, Joi-the-program gains more control over K in furtherance of the mission to find and capture the specimen. All three are Wallace Corporation products.

In the morning, Joi wants to be deleted from the console. This seems to make her more human, because now she can die; when she does die, it’s more poignant. Yet her stated reason for deletion from the console, “They can download my memories”, is clearly nonsense: of course the console backs (this instance of) her up on a cloud, and it’s only barely less implausible that the emanator doesn’t do the same. She dies because her mission is over, just like K’s, which is why he’s left for dead, as well. The illusion is that K is special, wanted, like a born human, when in fact he’s a slave being manipulated by the corporation that made him. Yet the hyperreality of Joi’s presentation can misdirect viewers just as it misdirects him. Even though the film repeatedly tells and shows us that she’s a piece of commercial software, Joi’s arc is compelling: viewers may believe that she’s on some meaningful level human, or growing into humanity, especially given that both Blade Runner films foreground the question of what makes a person human.

Pseudo-Rachael

The only iteration in the film of this sort of deliberate illusion outside Joi’s presence takes place when Wallace brings out pseudo-Rachael as a potential reward for Deckard’s cooperation. The film has already made repeated, and significant, metafictional references to the first Blade Runner, but it is at this point that these metafictional references become especially significant:

Deckard, however, is no K. After thirty years, his memories are far more his own than whatever might have been implanted, and he knows full well that Rachael is dead and that he must also die if he’s to protect their child. She says “I love you”, but he accepted reality long ago; he dismisses the illusion after one long look. Her death seems gratuitous, but is also foreordained, in that once she’s dismissed as a work of fiction, she’s no longer valuable to Wallace.

Yet pseudo-Rachael is also illusion on another axis, that of the creation of the film and its position as a sequel. K and Luv hear clips from the original film in Wallace’s data archive; Deckard gets to see clips from BR82, featuring the original Rachael and the younger Ford as young Deckard. These scenes make use of well-established means to lend weight to a sequel by including iconic images and dialogue from its predecessor. Pseudo-Rachael, however, is a new thing, a reincarnation much simpler within the film than without. Wallace can clone her from DNA and train the clone to look and move and talk like young Rachael; this is elementary, given his other powers. But to bring back the younger Young in the film is only just now possible in the real world; it could not have happened absent a staggering technical and human cost. In BR49, actor Loren Peta was dressed in the 1982 film’s Rachael makeup, clothes and hair; she worked onstage with the other actors during principal photography. Later, both Peta and Young used motion-capture equipment while reading pseudo-Rachael’s lines; then, digital artists built a simulacrum of the younger Young’s face atop Peta’s.

The two-minute scene took a full year for visual effects supervisor John Nelson to complete. (Vilkomerson) Why go to such lengths, other than for the love of a challenge, especially when Deckard isn’t fooled at all by the illusion? I submit that the presence of pseudo-Rachael is directed at viewers passionate about the original film. Its purpose is to overlay this different take on Replicants, what it means to be human and the increasing dominance of corporations in real-world 2017, in order both to authenticate it as a sequel and to cloak this much bleaker film in the comparative optimism of its predecessor. The overall visual aesthetic of the film, including the many specific visuals such as the Pan Am logo, links BR49 to the original. So do the noir plot, the music, the focus on the barriers or continuum between human and Replicant, the casting of Ford and of (pseudo-)Young. The films are clearly discontinuous, however: the opening crawl talks of the collapse of the old order; the Blackout is shoehorned in; Wallace is not Tyrell, despite his megalomania, his love of profit from slavery and his weird eyes. On a metafictional level, the Los Angeles of the original film’s 2019 did not come to pass: while some of the first film’s power lay in its plausibility as a future extrapolated from the real Los Angeles of 1982, the sequel cannot directly lay claim to that sort of authority. Yet bringing pseudo-Rachael into the film, especially so close to the end, tangibly (re-)relinks BR49 to the original. We’ve seen and heard clips of her, but now she’s present: it evokes nostalgia for the first film, which for all its murder has a fundamentally optimistic and inclusive definition of humanity and ends with Rachael and Deckard both free. Though pseudo-Rachael is obviously a simulacrum both to Deckard and to viewers, her presence colors our experience of the film, even if BR49 puts the original Rachael’s bones in a box and brutally kills her replacement after two minutes on screen.

We may, before re-rewatching, think of the ending of BR49 as positive: K has become human by dying for his beliefs and Deckard and Ana are now safe, as all connection between them and Wallace is cut off. Ana the specimen, the Replicant who was born and thereby wanted, can become the leader, or symbol, of the coming revolution. These are tropes we’re inclined to follow unless and until we learn to (re-)reread with skepticism toward narratives. When we do, and we follow not where illusion wants to lead us but rather the facts and logic, we don’t arrive at revolution, but a much bleaker world where born but unwanted humans harpoon flying cars from trash piles, and a Replicant revolution will be put down quickly and brutally. We’ve been putting microchips in our cats and dogs since before the millennium: is it really plausible that the Wallace Corporation can’t track all the Replicants, even those who have plucked out their right eyes? How likely is it that Replicants don’t have remotely-activated devices that can drop them unconscious or kill them instantly? The film seems to end well, but that’s because its use of illusion distracts us from thinking about metafiction in the way that Pale Fire demands. There’s no way Deckard is going to take Ana on a swooping air-car ride into a green wilderness, and not only because the only green wilderness left is the illusory one she turns off to reveal her specimen jar upon K’s entry. The future is (fore)closed, not open: BR49 only seems optimistic because of its familiar tropes and because it borrows some of its predecessor’s aura through Rachael’s iconic look.

Estrangement in Blade Runner 2049

In the original Blade Runner, the presence of Replicant slaves can be read in SF terms as an estrangement of the growth in corporate power in the decades before 1982. Yet a sufficiently committed revolutionary can make a major change. Roy Batty kills Tyrell and JF Sebastian, the overseer of the genetic control mechanisms that keep Replicants slaves. The first film implies, or at least proposes, that absent the capitalist the proletariat might be free—to use terms dated even in 1982, yet somehow still relevant today. With respect to BR49, watchers or even rewatchers might well think its ending as or more optimistic than that of BR82; we might well imagine the Résistance storming Wallace’s pyramid. But this is illusion: the presence of Pale Fire can inspire us to re-rewatch and wonder whether, like K, we’re imagining something that isn’t shown on screen because it’s not possible. The illusion around Joi draws attention to how we might wish to be skeptical about narratives presented to us as natural just because they’re appealing.

The estrangement in BR49 is of our own society of 2017, where corporate power has only continued to grow, to the point where it’s insurmountable. In the world of the film, it’s nothing but Wallace Corporation slaves all the way down: even Joshi, the sole born human and the representative of public authority, works for them, and she’s murdered the moment she tries to resist. Surveillance and other technologies have increased with economic inequality to the point where revolution or even major change is a pipe dream. Even a heroic sacrifice will at best kill only a replaceable minion. The CEO can escape ecological disaster, but the slaves remain slaves: like medieval serfs, they’re owned by the lord, and their purpose is to breed, toil and die. The parallels to our own world are too evident, and too dreary, to enumerate. BR49 is much, much bleaker than its predecessor, but it’s draped in just enough illusion to make a false narrative of hope seem appealing. Its pessimism about our own world is remarkable, for a mainstream Hollywood film. Because it’s SF cinema, however, some might focus on the set design, costumes, special effects, etc., all of which are first-rate but also distract from the social criticism at its heart.

Yet if we use Pale Fire as the key to unlocking a metafictional reading of the film, we can understand how and why BR49 subverts the conventions of mainstream SF cinema in a way that the original film, with its optimistic ending and use of romantic love as a driver of the plot, does not. We cannot, however, simply end here. The constant presence of metafiction in the film problematizes the very notion of its having an ending, positive or no. We may be better served by examining the ambiguity of both films’ endings as constitutive of their familial relation and also of an examination of, and demand for, the persistence of humanity in a world dominated by technology and corporate power. Much ink, real and virtual, has been spilled over the question of whether Deckard in the first film is or is not a Replicant; much of the metafictionality of BR82 lies in this question. The second film answers it definitively, but also poses many more questions that it refuses to answer. In (re-)rewatching both films, we can see that the power of metafictional SF lies in the complications and ambiguities with which it reflects our own world.

NOTES

[1] Both Pale Fire and Lolita (1955) are in the Modern Library’s 100 Best Novels (in English) for the twentieth century. Lolita was a runaway bestseller; Pale Fire, a superficially more difficult text, was somewhat less successful.

[2] This is the name Wallace gives the then still hypothetical child of Replicants. No other name beyond “the child” is provided.

[3] Notably, that his reaction when he learns that “someone lived this [memory]” is rage rather than elation.

[4] Though she does say to him “It is invigorating, being asked personal questions. Makes one feel… desired”.

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Work in the Future: Technological Opportunity or Human Obsolescence in Science Fiction and Reality



Work in the Future: Technological Opportunity or Human Obsolescence in Science Fiction and Reality

Tiff Graham

Everybody knew what was supposed to happen. Technological forecasters predicted it. Economic prognosticators confirmed the warnings. Politicians viewed with alarm. The displacement of flesh and blood works by ugly, anthropomorphic machines meant violence! The Luddites would rise again, and the factory aisles would run sticky with lubricating oil. But it didn’t happen.

–Frederick Pohl’s Midas World (1983:29)

Conversation starter questions such as “what kind of work do you do?” or “what do you do for a living?” are commonplace as people often assume a person occupies time with some sort of work activity. Why that work is performed may be due to financial security, a sense of purpose, a need to serve/help, or simply the work opportunity arose (Duncan; Gross). Initially, a person will learn specific jobs tasks and often spend years maintaining employment in a particular occupational field. Yet with the introduction of new advanced technologies meant to provide greater efficiency, reduction of the more repetitive and mundane job tasks, and safer working conditions, it is possible that various forms of work will be transformed or at risk for elimination in the future. None of this is new knowledge, as history has shown technological advancements often reshape how people work and live. From the First Industrial Revolution (mid-1700s to early 1800s), the use of steam engines and mechanization increased productivity, making some manual labor jobs no longer needed; to the Second Industrial Revolution (late 1800s to early 1900s), where electricity, telephones, and automobiles created new job positions and simultaneously eliminated other ones (Olsen). The Third Industrial Revolution, referred to as the Digital Age, from the 1960s to 2000s, brought in computers, various electronics, automated processes, and the Internet which altered how jobs were performed, while also creating a more globally accessible job market and eliminating occupations that a computer could do more efficiently. The Fourth Industrial Revolution, referred to as the SecondMachine Age, from 2010 to our present, has introduced the world to more advanced AI, robotic machines, smart technology, and other scientific innovations that are currently reshaping work experience in both beneficial and problematic ways (Byrnjolfsson and McAfee; Penprase; Schwab).

By focusing on AI and robotic machine technology associated with the Fourth Industrial Revolution (4IR), this paper draws attention to the transformation of jobs across the business, healthcare, entertainment, restaurant, and government sectors as expectations and anxieties arise with the evolving relationship people have to their new technological collaborators and potential rivals. Reality based examples and science fiction/speculative fiction stories of mundane, utopian, and dystopian futures provide evidence and possibilities of what job seekers of tomorrow may need to consider.

Hype, History, and the Current State of Technology

As societies are becoming more attune to these new 4IR technologies reshaping work and everyday life, the voices of the corporate tech leadership are also gaining attention. There are frequent announcements of the inevitability of AI and robotic tech reach; technologies’ beneficent power to improve the world; and, in some cases its dangers to society while concurrently gaining more publicity. When Bill Gates, cofounder of Microsoft, was interviewed on a late-night show in 2025, he said that AI would “solve problems, enable us to work fewer days, and offer free and commonplace medical advice and tutoring.” He also suggested that we will “not need humans for most things, but we will decide what those things are” (Gates). Other tech leaders have proclaimed AI agents, also called Agentic AI systems, are the future of personal assistants and members of the workforce (Huskins). These autonomous AI entities will work for us using all the available Internet data, software tools, and personal information gathered to meet any business needs in order to serve us better (Metz and Weise). And Jeff Bezos, founder of Amazon and Blue Origin, has suggested that tech will increase human labor and opportunity, though his distribution centers seem to do the opposite as robotic automation replaces human jobs (Bezos; McCallum; Weise).

With much of the techno-optimism rhetoric, there is a great deal of utopian thinking around the new technologies, though some are cautioning governments, businesses, and society to consider the potential unwanted consequences. In the book The Workplace of the Future: The Fourth Industrial Revolution, the Precariat and the Death of Hierarchies, it’s suggested that we are entering a more insecure job market as robotization and digitization replace the human workforce. We could say that job displacement due to new technologies has always been a concern from the earlier industrial revolution with the Luddite Movement (1811-16) to Karl Marx addressing the impact of industrial capitalism (Das Kapital, 1867), and 19th and 20th century laborers protesting railroads, assembly lines, and other machine technology impacting traditional forms of work of the time (Johannessen). There is even a 1930s term, ‘technological unemployment, coined by the economist John Maynard Keyes to describe the effect, though in his essay, “Economic Possibilities for our Grandchildren,” he also envisions an optimistic future where this technology replacing human effort is a temporary step to a better standard of living with humans working less (Schwab; Keyes 1930:363).

Many technological advancements have historically led to changes in the workspace, yet this technological age is different for some critics. It has been described as more disruptive because it can transform jobs associated with creativity, knowledge, and information processing, once a domain of mainly human minds. In books such as Only Humans Need Apply, Winners & Losers in the Age of Smart Machines by Davenport and Kirby, concerns are raised about jobs associated with “knowledge workers” that include lawyers, accountants, doctors, scientists, and various white-collar professions. And now, due to the generative AI text and image programs, even creative artists are feeling their occupational livelihood threatened.

Are these alarm bells we should pay attention to, or is it just a matter of perspective? For example, Sam Altman, CEO of Open AI, has an optimistic spin on the AI revolution, suggesting it is not a new industrialization period but should be seen as more of a renaissance, a time of enlightenment (Barlow). Elon Musk, CEO of Tesla and SpaceX, expects that AI will continue to do things better than humans and his humanoid robots like Optimus Bot will be deployed everywhere in society and many industries (Elon Buzz; Carter). Tech leaders often talk favorably about these new AI and robotic machine technologies, referring to the machines as collaborators, assistants, and agents that will augment us and make the world better. I’ve also heard educators, professionals from various fields, and everyday individuals refer to AI positively as a partner, therapist, mentor, companion, and even as a friend (Brockes; Tangermann; Williams). In addition, educational institutions and cities are championing greater investment, knowledge, and skill building with AI tools and technology company partnerships. For example, The Chronicle of Higher Education articles and webinars feature AI-themed literature and virtual forums (e.g., “AI on Campus”; “New Academic Programs”). Florida State University has promoted an Artificial Intelligence Initiative across the curriculum with donor support from NVIDIA (Southworth et al.). Harvard Business School’s online blog includes advice about the future of AI-powered businesses (Gibson). California State Universities have joined numerous leading tech companies (i.e., OpenAI, Intel, Meta, etc.) on advisory boards “to help identify AI skills needed in the California workforce and provide advice on how best to teach them” (Watanabe). Cities such as Palm Springs, California have hosted an annual AI Expo (2025-2026) to “explore artificial intelligence’s potential to reshape the desert community’s economic future” (Palm Springs Chamber of Commerce; Valley Voice Media) and according to a World Economic Forum article, various global cities in Argentina, Netherlands, Singapore, United States are incorporating AI strategies for projects (North).

As AI and robotic technologies become more embedded in every aspect of work and social life, opting out might prove increasingly difficult (Bilton). In the book Working with AI: Real Stories of Human-Machine Collaboration (2022), Davenport and Miller identify a number of employers who have adopted AI-based systems. For example, in the underwriter profession, where customers apply for life insurance policies, these businesses can use an AI system that automatically reviews applications and client information, simultaneously cross-referencing data about risks and underwriter rules, enabling a quicker turnaround (Davenport and Miller 36:2022). This process allows the business to reserve human labor for the more complex decision-making, something often repeated when advocating for AI (Davenport and Miller 37:2022). While the cost-saving benefits are present, there are downsides, such as what if people are not given entry-level work, how will they gain the experience to become the experts who deal with complex decision-making. And when AI and robotics are used in workplaces, it does raise the question of who truly benefits in the long term. Will we all benefit from the outsourcing, augmenting, and leveraging of new technologies to solve problems or are there consequences we should pay attention to? In the marketing and creative industry field, producers of generative AI content iterate quicker, with multiple versions/designs/ideas delivered to customers and consumers, but at what point do the graphic designers, writers, and marketing individuals no longer have their jobs or find themselves in lower pay or lower skill jobs monitoring AI systems versus engaging in creative thinking. In addition, in the health industry, AI systems are employed in diagnostic imaging, medical transcription, and other services, which seems promising alongside human expertise, but does it mean radiologists and therapists need to reconsider their job market opportunities along with hospital nurses who may find their duties shifted to more management of technologies (Ackermann).

Futuristic Scenarios Sprinkled with Reality

Possibly, this is all just another stage in human evolution where we will adapt and carry on in the 4IR-Renaissance age outsourcing, augmenting, and leveraging our new technologies to solve problems before we enter Ray Kurzweil’s 5th and 6th epoch stages of the singularity; or maybe we should pay attention to what may become irreversible consequences of these technological advancements (Kurzweil 2005). By building a futures focused mindset that includes some science fiction and speculative fiction stories, it may help us better envision those preferrable, probable, possible, or seemingly impossible scenarios associated with work in the future (Balagtas 2024:78).

In the short video, “TempBot” (2006), directed by Neill Blomkamp, a humanoid robot is trucked in to perform temp work at a credit union. Human office workers barely pay attention to the walking metal robot as it uses the copy machine and types on a computer while sitting in a cubicle. As the audience, we see the robot’s perspective through its computer screen vision, a Version 3.02 model, overlayed with task commands and drop-down menus of information interpreting human words, actions, and materials. The workload and productivity speed for the humans and robot are initially equivalent. Then one day, the robot speeds up its productivity as it becomes obsessed with the new human HR manager who pays attention to it. It works faster to impress her while also stalking her like a jealous romantic mate, that is until a work social event when it inappropriately touches the HR manager’s breast, leading to a demotion back to the realm of robots-only offices. This particular story of a robot working in an office is humorous and not too spectacular nor much to fear, apart from its unexpected sentient misconduct.

From a real-world perspective, maybe robots will take on human jobs, but is it something we should be more worried about? In a 2025 news story/podcast from the NPR Short Wave science program, it mentions that humanoid robots are not actually at this level of functioning independently, as it takes many hours to build and train due to changing environments (Brumfiel et al.; Brumfiel). A Berkeley scientist and cofounder of Ambi Robotics, Ken Goldberg, further suggests that with robots, it’s not the same as with the AI chatbots where “they scooped up pretty much the entire Internet to train themselves how to write sentences and draw pictures,” whereas with robot data, it is limited (Brumfiel et al.; Brumfiel). However, there is plenty of robot hype in the news with robotic demonstrations, tech conferences, humans reclassified in jobs as robot wranglers and robot trainers/cyber-laborers in arm farms, along with the extensive research presented in Morgan Stanley’s financial investment report about the top 100 companies that could contribute to advanced humanoid development (Christopher “Delivery robots”; “Why hundreds”; Morgan Stanley; Zhou and Lo). On the other hand, with the generative AI programs, it does seem that knowledge workers should be worried as AI systems often can research, reason, compute, and output patterns and decisions based on data much more efficiently than humans.

If this is a harbinger of the future, what can humans do to save their jobs from machines in the future? In the science fiction animation, “Seniors 3000” (2022), directed by Julien David, the solution for technology taking jobs is to adapt oneself into a robotic cyborg. The story opens with an office boss requiring his employees to be digitally savvy, and if they can’t, then they need to retire. Marlene, an older office worker cannot handle the Bluetooth element of the newest copiers. She is forced to leave her job. She finds her old printer which somehow alters her DNA, transforming her into a printer cyborg that can scan, copy, print, upload .pdf copies, and spit out paper copies instantly through her mouth. The boss then greedily profits from her robotic adaptation. He soon realizes that Marlene can also transform others into cyborgs. He markets her to the French government’s Minister of Work and Profit, saying that he can create workers “requiring no payroll taxes, no paid vacations, and it’s all voluntary.” More retirees are transformed into cyborgs as TVs, floor fans, robotic surgeons, and other technology. But soon after, Marlene’s tech body disfunctions, and she is disposed of with other obsolete humans who have become cyborgs. Eventually, Marlene fights back, leading these obsolete cyborgs in a revolution against those in power. A science fiction story like “Seniors 3000” visually entertains, while also engages audiences to reflect on the embedded social commentary related to themes of aging, human obsolescence, and worker resistance.

Another speculative example is “B.E.N. Bionically Engineered Nursing” (2016), sponsored by the Society of Saint-Vincent-De-Paul. This short video raises the question, what jobs should be given over to AI and robots? On-screen, we see B.E.N., a white, puffy humanoid robot with big, circular, dew-drop black eyes, wearing a blue nurse’s shirt. It cares daily for an older woman named Claudine in her family home, providing nutritious meals, administering medicines, and even entertaining her with dancing. One morning, we see Claudine lying in bed and staring absently ahead in a way that could be interpreted as feeling sad and lonely, as the night before we saw a picture on her nightstand of what could have been her former husband. Upon seeing her in bed, the robot repeatedly says, “Claudine, would you like to get up now, I am here to assist you” and Claudine, physically unresponsive, maintains her absent stare. Later, at the breakfast table, Claudine tells B.E.N. she needed that quiet moment earlier in the morning. The robot, while helpful, doesn’t seem to provide nuanced emotional support apart from what it’s programmed to do. At the end of the short video, a service message appears on the screen displaying the text, “Today, companion robots are being introduced to assist lonely people,” followed by “At Society of Saint-Vincent-De-Paul, we think that only human beings can help in fighting loneliness.” This speculative public service announcement in 2016 reflected a particular perspective of the times, but we can now see more recently that attitudes are changing in the healthcare sector as various AI and robotic models are utilized in reality.

Robots are currently featured in healthcare articles about medical care facilities and home healthcare services. In a Nurse.org article, “This Humanoid AI Robot Is Being Tested in Hospitals-Plus 7 More Transforming Healthcare” by Sarah Falcone, the robots are described as “collaborators, not replacements” and are said to “free up nurses to perform specialized interventions.” One robot featured was Moxi from the US-based Diligent Healthcare, which is said to roam autonomously, deliver lab specimens, and greet patients (Burke, Falcone). Other types of robots mentioned help answer people’s questions, provide emotional support (e.g., robot seal Paro and robot Pepper) and transport supplies, food trays, and samples in the healthcare setting (Burke, Falcone). And for seniors needing home healthcare, the ElliQ by Intuition Robotics is promoted as a social and health coach device initially provided to healthcare organizations (Broadbent et al.). Some recent testimonies by customers in health news websites and on the ElliQ company site suggests a digital companion can help with loneliness and overall wellbeing (ElliQ, Lynn).

In a different work sector, the restaurant industry, AI and robotic implementation is also being promoted. The Spoon, a food technology podcast and website, has featured tech innovations, from AI drive-thru translator assistants at Wendy’s fast food to other robotic AI culinary technology (Wolf). While it’s not clear if everyone welcomes the AI and robotic technology in the kitchen, it is used in some restaurants. A restaurant in South Korea called Munmak uses a ramen-preparing robotic machine. A worker interviewed said, ‘It reduced the workload,” but also suggested there is a “loss of feeling pride in cooking the food” (Kim, “Robot Chefs”). In Japan, the DAWN Avatar robot café uses humanoid robots to serve, greet, and make food recommendations. These robots are not autonomous, but rather, are operated remotely by disabled humans (Steen). With this interconnectedness of AI and robotic machines in the food industry, it seems possible that humans in the future could work alongside robots or in some situations be replaced by them.

The science fiction short video “The Chef” (2021), directed by Hao Zheng and written by Ithaca Deng and Leqi Vanessa Kong, challenges this use of robotic technology and the potential replacement of humans in restaurants. It begins with a restaurant owner escorting William, a humanoid robot, to the kitchen to train under the older chef named Chef Pu. Initially, the chef is reluctant in teaching this machine as he says, “Chinese cooking is not science; it’s a feeling” as William asks for specific measurements in cooking braised meatball and tofu dish and other recipes. Meanwhile, the young human cooking assistant to the chef glares repeatedly at this humanoid assisting the chef. Later, the chef joins the human kitchen staff outside and comforts the younger assistant saying, “Don’t worry, cooking is meant for humans… just work harder, you won’t be replaced.” We soon overhear in a broadcast news story that humans are being replaced as “factory workers, farmers, and truck drivers protest worsening conditions” and others are organizing protest movements that advocate destroying robots in order to get jobs back. As time passes, we see the chef taking a liking to William as it is shown to be more reliable, curious, and attentive than the human assistant. In a scene at the food night market, the chef and William walk together while the chef cheerfully and nostalgically talks about ingredients and recipes. He also seems to be considering William as his eventual replacement when he retires. Shortly after the walk, protestors see the chef with William and attack and destroy the humanoid William. One of these protesters is the chef’s human kitchen assistant, who afterwards offers a saddened chef a ride home on a motorbike.

It’s a little confusing in the story and in a real-world sense whether we should welcome or despise these AI and robotic machines. What do we want from our machines? Maybe it’s efficiency and reliability, or perhaps it fills an emotional void where humans feel neglected. For a business owner, the financial cost-saving aspect of machines prevails. For others, it may be that AI or robotic machines provide something else, such as assistance and companionship, where humans are not as dependable. A story like “The Chef” draws attention to many of these issues as well as the concern about robots taking jobs of younger workers and how human attitudes may change with time and perspective.

A science fiction story about a different work sector, the arts industry, is “Real Artists” (2017), a short video directed by Cameo Wood and written by Cameo Wood and Ken Liu. The camera follows a young twenty something female filmmaker/graphic designer/storyteller interviewing for an entertainment industry job. It seems like a promising opportunity until she learns the film process involves an AI machine called Big Semi. The machine collates the emotional data of people in order to generate multiple film versions that eventually becomes what is considered the best film version. Upon seeing these other creative types sitting in a dark screening room, digitally connected to the AI machine via external body gadgetry on the temple and wristband, the interviewee incredulously comments, “I’m sorry all of Semafore films are essentially made by an AI?” The executive proudly responds, “It’s a process that works–nudging responses to fit a known emotional cord is nothing more than an optimization problem, and Big Semi is excellent at solving them.”

This filmmaking process depicted in “Real Artists” involves humans as mere cogs in an AI machine, no longer individuals but instead part of a hive mind linked to the AI machine. It’s explained to the interviewee that the human mind is repeatedly erased to create a tabula rasa, a blank slate. This process enables the machine to collect fresh, emotional data daily to generate multiple iterations of a story concept and basic plot all rendered using stock characters and dialogue till the best film is statistically achieved.

By reflecting on today’s real-life generative AI software landscape in the U.S. and globally, we can see how these tools are becoming more widely accepted in creative fields like the entertainment and marketing sectors. And for many, this technology is eagerly welcomed. For example, in a MIT Technology Review issue about creativity in the age of AI, the South Korean cartoonist Lee Hyun-se envisions AI giving his archival data of 5000 comics a “kind of immortality” in that AI can be used to develop future iterations of his characters and worldview (Kim, “Generative AI”). For other visual artists and writers, these large language model systems that generate AI art forms are useful but it has been suggested they are not as personally gratifying when art is reduced to an AI calculation (Kim, “Generative AI”). In recent years, writers, actors, animators, and artists have even reacted by protesting and boycotting AI work (Lee).

Maybe this is the future we can’t avoid. Plenty of science fiction and speculative fiction stories show us these utopian and dystopian versions of a world where AI and robots are in the workforce, and some of these scenarios reflect a bit of our reality. Though I hope we are not on the road to Frederick Pohl’s Midas World (1983), but it might be helpful to familiarize oneself with the literature where human adoption of AI and robotics ultimately leads to a government run by machines and humans no longer needed. From simple factory and household chore robots to doctors and government leader robots, the robots in this book are shown displacing humans. In chapter 3, “Servant of the People” of Midas World, originally published in Analog magazine, a human Congressman named O’Hare believes a human touch will always be needed, even with the abundance of robots. He’s unconcerned about his competitor, a small city robot Mayor campaigning for his seat. In a debate, O’Hare believes he is winning over voters; however, the robot seems to appeal to the crowds equally and can even switch out its data modules for whatever knowledge or memory reference is required. The robot, at one point, praises its human opponent for sponsoring Robot ERA rights and the elimination of mechanical and organic status in the voter records. It comments on how human beings have been freed “from one more onerous and difficult task–namely, the job of selecting their elected officials” and if a robot is elected, “human life can be pure pleasure!” (Pohl 101). This robot politician, having learned everything about human communication, emotion, work, expectations, and way of life, is adept at using whatever mode is needed to win votes. The oblivious O’Hare, physically and mentally limited by his humanness and blinded by his past record of success, continues to campaign without realizing that not only is his competition a highly adaptable robot, but many of his constituents are now also robots.

Is This the End or Is it the Beginning of Something Else

Are we living in a time in which our technology could lead to such an existential threat? While humans have often dealt with vulnerabilities around job security, a robot government as described in the Midas World isn’t a reality-based worry. Yet, there are those, such as the late Catholic Pope Leo XIII (1810-1903) and the recent Pope Leo XIV, who have raised concerns about how technological shifts can upend different forms of work and society (Esparza; Hamilton). In Pope Leo XIV Encyclical Letter 2026, it offers guidance around AI, acknowledging the need to develop safeguards for humanity as technological growth is rapid (Leo XIV 106). In contrast, many technology companies are looking for worldwide adoption of AI with an attempt to encourage more positive examples of the advanced technologies. For example, a Google AI Initiative program encourages short film development of stories about the coexistence of AI and humans that may counteract the more dystopian versions commonly referenced in popular culture (Lane, Lee). In the US, the government is trying to integrate AI tools in defense, law enforcement, and administrative work (Hooshidary et al.). The US House of Representatives governing branch passed a bill that would “ban states from enforcing laws regulating artificial intelligence for 10 years” as a way to give breathing room for innovators and the AI marketplace, and then the Senate dropped it after complaints from states (Hendrix and Lima-Strong; Brown and O’Brien “House Republicans include”; “Senate pulls AI”). Internationally, countries are taking steps to promote greater incorporation of AI such as with Japan initiating strategies to build more AI into their Society 5.0 vision; South Korea promoting AI development with AI Basic Act to reduce regulatory guardrails; and China developing their AI + plan to help them “create higher-quality, beautiful lives” through increased AI productivity ability (Spremberg et al; Kim “Why do South Koreans”; Wang).

While some societies and work sectors are optimistic about recent technological innovation in AI and robotics, there are others voicing concerns about the growing technological reach. It might prime the questions, should people be worried about the technologies and possibilities of growing dependence on machines; or with governments advocating more use of it; or should our concerns be directed at the tech leaders profiting and claiming their technology will solve all problems. If job opportunities are limited and economic security is impeded, it may be time to consider a combination of future solutions such as, regulating tech companies, requiring a percentage of human labor for jobs, or government financial supplements like Universal Basic Income for people, though even these potential safeguards are flawed in their application if moral responsibility is overridden by special interests or funding is unavailable. On an individual level, the onus might be on the worker who will need to be prepared to upskill, reskill, augment with technologies, and stay cognizant of how jobs could be restructured and what new jobs are accompanying the technological changes. So, how do we best navigate the future of work? We can try not to inflate or overestimate the potential of AI and robotic technologies. At the same time, we should not ignore its growing impact on society and the workforce; but rather prepare ourselves for potential futures we want or don’t want by consuming and/or creating more science fiction and speculative fiction that gives us a taste of what might be possible.[1]


NOTES

[1] The author thanks Otis College of Art and Design and SEIU Local 721 Faculty Union for financial support that enabled presentation and discussion of this work at the Cultural Studies Association and Science Fiction Research Association conferences.

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Tiff Graham teaches cultural anthropology, foodways, occupational culture, science fiction, and futures thinking topics at Otis College of Art and Design in Los Angeles, California. She holds a Ph.D. in Culture from University of California Los Angeles, M.S. in Occupational Health from Medical College of Ohio, and B.A. in English from University of Missouri Columbia. Her research interests in labor, resistance, technology, and economies are shaped by her varied work roles in the U.S. Department of Labor and in retail, hospitality, agriculture, education, entertainment, B2B, web design, and after-school/summer programs. Her published and presented work ranges in topics from outer space foodways, post-apocalyptic meals, and community gatherings to broader interests in health, technology, and foresight. She attributes her wide-ranging interests to autodidact tendencies and a need to have a fuller understanding of human experiences.


Jules Verne’s Vision of Green Cities for Today


⮌ SFRA Review, vol. 56 no. 1

Features


Jules Verne’s Vision of Green Cities for Today

Quentin R. Skrabec

In 2022, the French Embassy to China unveiled its annual Franco-Chinese Month of Environment, focusing on Jules Verne and “his advocacy, curiosity, passion, and care towards the environment, especially oceans. “Throughout November 2022, a series of educational and cultural events featuring Verne lectures and scientific activities was scheduled in approximately 20 Chinese cities to draw the public’s attention to the current environmental challenges through Jules Verne’s literature” (European Union News Letter, 2022).

Verne wove the environment into the very heart of the plot and themes of many of his novels. His stories often show the pollution, health concerns, and bleakness of industrial cities. Verne frequently lamented the plight of industrial workers and capitalistic slave labor, as in Verne’s The Mighty Orinoco in 1898, while being in awe of industrial progress. Verne’s books lacked the social directness and poignancy of Charles Dickens, but they still highlighted the problems that can come with industrialization. Unlike Dickens, Verne offered solutions as part of a lifelong quest for green energy and healthy living conditions.

In 1863, Jules Verne’s “first” novel, Paris in the Twentieth Century, envisioned a futuristic green city, albeit a dysfunctional urban center, that started a 60-year green literary and scientific journey that addresses numerous environmental issues and offers many lessons for us today. Verne’s novels often contrasted environmental extremes, and his characters were conflicted over the balance between scientific progress and environmental concerns. Verne excelled at framing the struggle. He hated the air and water pollution that scientific progress often brought, and many of his novels address green energy alternatives. Verne believed electricity and the hydrogen derived from it could replace coal as technology evolved. He proposed alternative green energies to generate electricity, such as wind energy, hydroelectric, super chemical batteries, rechargeable batteries, compressed air, solar power, tidal wave dams, electromagnetic  “accumulators,” thermal energy from the oceans, and harvesting static electricity from the air. For the transition from coal, Verne explored new, efficient, and cleaner energy uses, such as clean coal technology, more efficient engines to replace steam engines, and efficient lighting systems. This article details and analyzes his extraordinary journeys in green urban engineering, highlighting the realization of some of his key insights.

The suggested iconic relationship between Verne and the coal-fired steam engine is far from true. He struggled with the relationship between technology and the environment, wishing they could coexist. In Verne’s futuristic Paris, Verne tried to warn and address urban pollution issues, technology versus the arts, and the limits of technology versus nature.

Like many of his readers, Verne found the root of both environmentalism and industrialism. Verne has inspired both naturalists and engineers. It was this common ground of the natural sciences that Verne found hope in creating unity with environmentalism and technology. Many engineers, even today, find their first love of science in grade school nature study. Verne believed that maybe there was a middle destination and that even industrialists could be environmentalists, although he feared that it might never be achieved. In Verne’s vision of the struggle, both sides might find a compromise. However, with age, he grew more pessimistic.

Verne’s “Carbonivorous” World

Verne had an ambiguous relationship with coal. Verne saw the dependency of Victorian society on coal as both an economic and environmental problem. While he envisioned lean energy inventions, such as hydrogen cars, steam engine replacements, clean coal-burning systems, compressed air-driven trains, wind power, hydroelectric power, and electric lights, he still saw a future of some limited coal-burning pollution in his futuristic vision of 1960 Paris (Verne, Paris in 20th Century, p. 157). He fully realized that replacing coal would be challenging even in the future. In Purchase of the North Pole (1889), Verne says,  “The stomach of industry thrives on coal: it will not eat anything else. The industry is a carboniferous animal” (Verne, Purchase of the North Pole, p. 49). In his futuristic Paris, which he looked ahead 100 years, he still saw a smaller but stubborn dependency.

The age of Verne was dominated by coal. Victorians at first saw coal as a boundless energy source, albeit a dirty one. Verne framed an entire novel, The Underground City, in 1877 to discuss the coal mining industry. He highlighted the use of coal in steel and ironmaking in his novels Begum’s Millions (1879) and Mysterious Island (1875).

In his 1875 novel Mysterious Island, Verne correctly predicted the exponential nature of coal consumption. “With the increasing consumption of coal. . . it can be foreseen that the hundred thousand workmen will soon become two hundred thousand, and that the rate of extraction will be doubled” (Verne, Mysterious Island, p. 188). Verne saw this exponential doubling as being driven by the then-emerging use of coal in steelmaking, which, by the late 1880s, had become the primary sector of coal consumption. In the 1880s, coal usage in the steel industry was more prominent than its use as a heating fuel. Verne anticipated a massive future increase in the use of coal in steel and iron in Begum’s Millions (1879), which would occur in the twentieth century.

Like his fellow Victorians, Verne initially saw unlimited sources for their appetite for coal. In 1859, a traveling young Verne saw Scotland’s great coal mines, submarine coal veins, and the “sea coal” on the beaches, noting there was coal “enough to supply the world” (Verne, Backwards to Britain, 1859). Even if the exponential consumption continued, Verne believed there would be time for technology to find more coal deposits or replace coal, and he often noted this in his writings. Verne initially saw excess consumption as a problem for future centuries.

In his 1863 Journey to the Center of the Earth, a Verne character proclaimed, “Thus were formed those immense coalfields, which nevertheless are not inexhaustible, and which three centuries at the present accelerated rate of consumption will exhaust unless the industrial world will devise a remedy” (Verne, Journey to the Center of the Earth, p. 57). Like many Victorians, Verne believed that future coal reserves under the sea, as he noted in 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea (1871), would significantly increase the coal supply. Verne believed that the discovery of new reserves and technological advancements would also grow exponentially to meet rising demand. Still, not everybody was optimistic about coal reserves.

Many Victorian scientists, upon witnessing the exponential growth in coal use in the late 1870s, became pessimistic and published articles about potential shortages. The British were extremely sensitive to fuel shortages since the early 1800s, which had led to an urban shift from wood to coal for heating. By the 1880s, much like the 1980s with oil, Victorians started to fear a future of coal shortages (Minchinton, 1990, pp. 212-226), and Verne’s writings began to reflect this. As with oil today, Verne saw an unhealthy need for more coal reserves in the 1800s, leading to global economic pressures, more exploration, and environmental pressures.

Verne, in 1889, novelized a fictional coal exploration project to tap into the vast coal reserves under the Arctic to meet this future demand in [Topsy Turvy,] Purchase of the North Pole (1889). In this novel, Verne foresaw competing international claims on Arctic mineral rights and the attempt to change nature for economic reasons. In Purchase of the North Pole, Verne foresees the possibility of capitalists needing to change the earth’s rotation axis to create a warming of the Arctic to mine its coal. Verne’s plan in that novel was to tap Arctic coal deposits, which he assumed were plentiful. While his methodology here was not his best science, Verne’s prediction of vast coal reserves in the Arctic turned out to be true. A 300-mile-long belt in Alaska has an estimated four trillion tons of coal, one-third of the United States reserves, and an eighth of the world’s coal resources. Verne had a simple plan, yet a grand scale to tap into such reserves. He used giant cannons of his Baltimore Gun Club from his earlier novel, From the Earth to the Moon, to try to shift the Earth’s axis. Noting, “The jolt of its recoil will remove the tilt of Earth’s axis. This shift will give the Arctic region a temperate climate, thus warming the globe” (Verne, Purchase of the North Pole, p. 57-58). His capitalists would then access the large coal deposits believed to be ready for the taking in the Arctic. In Verne’s novel, nature inhibits man from succeeding.

 However, Verne’s primary concern with coal was not shortages but air pollution, water pollution, and social problems created by its use. Verne had a love/hate relationship with coal-fired Victorian-era icons such as coal heating, steam locomotives, and steam engines. Verne had noted these concerns early in his career. In his first writings, Verne highlighted the smoke and air pollution of the Industrial Revolution in his 1859 tour of Britain. In his The Will of an Eccentric (1899), Verne defines an even worse environment in industrialized America. His fictional cities, such as futuristic Paris in Paris in the 20th Century (1863), France-Ville in Begum’s Fortune (1879), Standard City in The Self-Propelled Island (1895), and Blackland in The Barsac Mission (1919), were designed to reduce or eliminate smoke and industrial dirt.

In his personal life, Verne sometimes had to balance his fascination with industrial progress and the beauty of nature. Verne loved the fresh air and the cleanliness of the countryside, as well as cruising on his yacht. In the 1880s, Verne ran and was elected to the Amiens city council. He was very active in this role, promoting laws to stop “locomotive smoke from polluting the town” and limiting “trolleybuses’ overhead wires in the public square” (Butcher, p.208). His final home in Amiens was, in many ways, a reflection of the clash between industry, culture, and nature that characterized the Industrial Revolution.

The Dark Side of the Vernian Industrial Revolution

While Verne believed in a possible green future, like Charles Dickens, he addressed the realities of the times. The industrial cities of Verne’s time were dark, smoky, and polluted. Verne’s polluted fictional steel city, Stahlstadt, in Begum’s Million (1879), represented Victorian industrial cities. It had all the literary darkness of a Dickens novel.

The years from 1820 to 1900 saw a rapid increase in British coal consumption. It rose from 20 million tons in 1820 to 160 million tons in 1900 (an eight-fold increase) (Fouquet, 2011, pp. 2380-2386). Severe timber shortages in the early 1800s drove a crisis-driven shift from wood to coal in home heating, cooking, iron production, and steam production. A half ton of coal produced four times as much energy as the same amount of wood and was cheaper to produce as timber became rare. Despite coal’s bulk, it was easier to distribute. The switch to coal averted an energy crisis but ushered in a pollution crisis. Figure 1 shows the dramatic rise in pollution in the 1800s.

Fig. 1. London Air Pollution 1700-2000
Source: Fouquet, R. (2011). Ecological Economics 70(12), 2380–2389 

Verne saw considerable air and water pollution when coal overtook wood for home heating, as in cities like Edinburgh in the 1850s, which he toured and wrote about in his Backwards to Britain (1859). Charles Dickens could have written chapters 15 and 20 of Backwards to Britain. Historians noted, “By the 1800s, more than a million London residents were burning soft coal, and winter ‘fogs’ became more than a nuisance” (Urbinato, 1994, summer) Verne describes industrial 1859 Liverpool as “gas lamps had to be lite by four in the afternoon” because of smoke, “smoke blackened yellow brick and grimy windows” (Verne, Backwards to Britain, p. 59). The streets were filled with coal dust, swarmed with children in rags that “flaunted the misery of England.” His description of Edinburgh was similar. He even described the air of a small French industrial city, Indret, in 1858 as “an atmosphere thick with the tarry emanations of coal” (Verne, Backwards to Britain, p.17). At Edinburgh, he noted the social aspects of pollution: “foul disease-ridden atmosphere” with children begging in rags. Verne would die at the peak of coal air pollution (1905) as new fuels and air quality standards started appearing. Verne hoped science would deliver a cleaner future, but even his futuristic vision of 1960 Paris still had some air pollution from coal usage and chemical plants.

Verne described London’s Thames River in 1859 as a “putrid overflow of sewage.” Coal, however, was the primary source of poisonous water pollution. In the 1850s and 1860s, Europe’s primary municipal industry was coal gas production for lighting and heating. Gas works were built on major rivers, reducing air pollution from coal burning at home, but the big problem with gasworks was that by-products such as tar and benzene chemicals were dumped into the rivers, eliminating fish. The other by-product of dense sulfur dioxide gas was less visible but killed vegetation around the gas works. This sulfur dioxide also attacked the beautiful stone architecture and statues, which Verne noted in his 1859 tour of Britain.

The main characteristic of the atmosphere of London in 1873 was a coal-smoke-saturated fog, thicker and more persistent than natural fog, that would hover over the city for days. Historians noted, “As we now know from subsequent epidemiological findings, the [1873] fog caused 268 deaths from bronchitis. Another fog 1879 lasted four long months with little sunshine from November to March” (Fouquet, 1990, p. 2384). London was typical of European cities. In building his fictional underground town in 1877 (Underground City/Child of the Cavern) to rival Edinburgh, Verne describes Edinburgh as having “an atmosphere poisoned by the smoke of factories” (Verne, Underground City, p. 122). Air pollution in Paris by the late 1870s was deemed equivalent to Edinburgh and London.

Verne’s industrial world only worsened in the following decades as iron production increased. Coal for iron and steel production had created most of the smoke and dust pollution in the late 1800s. In 1899, a Verne fictional train traveler in The Will of an Eccentric described the Iron City of Pittsburgh’s atmosphere as capable of making ink by placing a glass of water out overnight. Verne went further, describing the pollution and destruction of nature seen on a rail trip from Chicago to Pittsburgh, ironically, as “that is progress.” Steel production increased nearly 40-fold in Europe between 1870 and 1912 (and more than 90-fold in Germany for the same period), causing an explosion in coal-driven air pollution.

The rapid technological progress and its pollution had left Verne conflicted. He loved science and technology, but he saw the problems that Charles Dickens had seen. Verne’s novels often deal with stark contrasts, such as in Begum’s Millions (1879). In many stories, he highlights the inherent conflicts of Victorian times, such as industry versus the environment, distribution of wealth, misuse of technology for war, science versus the arts, totalitarianism versus democracy, technical versus liberal arts education, practical versus idealism, industry versus agriculture, and capitalism versus socialism. Verne chronicles his futuristic visions with solutions, hopes, warnings, inconvenient truths, and concerns. He was both an industrialist and an environmentalist, much like Henry Ford (Skrabec, 2010). He saw room for compromise but was pessimistic that it could be achieved. His characters, like his stories, are conflicted and full of contrasts.

Verne was not alone in his belief in a compromise between industry and the environment. William Armstrong, one of Britain’s great engineers and often noted by Verne, was an early advocate for renewable energy and even hypothesized about future solar power generation. Armstrong believed coal “was used wastefully and extravagantly in all its applications” (Cockburn, 2010). Verne would use many of Armstrong’s ideas in Paris in the 20th Century (1863). This novel became a type of game plan for the future of energy in Verne’s visions.

Verne’s energy predictions and insights in Paris in the 20th Century (1863) laid the foundation for the literary future of energy in Verne’s world and beyond. This 50-year literary history (1863 to 1919) of energy by Verne was at times indeed a series of green adventures extraordinaire. His literary series adventures (Voyages Extraordinaire) would cover and improve upon an array of futuristic energy predictions such as compressed air rapid transit, hydrogen-fueled vehicle engines, new efficient electrical and electromagnetic applications, more powerful sodium batteries, wind power, hydroelectric power, solar power, tidal power, static electricity air accumulators, x-rays, wireless communications, laser beams, petroleum fuels, and new electro-mechanical machines, and new types of efficient engines to replace the steam engine—even some unfilled dreams such as electrical generation from ocean thermal gradients.

Verne’s Green Futurist Paris of 1960

 Born in the smoke, dust, and dirt of an Industrial Revolution driven by coal, Verne envisioned a new and cleaner world. Verne began his writing career with a green vision of a futuristic Paris of 1960, a hundred years into the future. It was this fictional green city on the hill whose vision was a muse for Verne’s writing career. Verne’s editor turned down this first novel, Paris in the 20th Century, in 1863. His editor saw it as “simply unbelievable” (Tavis, 1997). The manuscript would be found and published in 1996. It was not only entirely believable, but most of the engineering had been implemented or is being researched today. It also represented the blueprint for his next 50 years of literary journeys into future science.

Verne’s Paris in the 20th Century (1863)would have significantly restricted the use of coal, with green sources supplying the power grid, hydrogen home heating, electric home and street lighting, windmill compressed air factory power, and rail transportation. It would be fueled by high-tech battery electricity, dynamo-generated electricity, hydrogen and oxygen from electrolysis, windmills, compressed air, tidal wave energy, and even air electrical “accumulators.” But even in this futuristic green Paris, coal for chemicals, fertilizers, and public demands for coal gas lighting by shop owners continued to cause some pollution. He realized getting off coal would be long and difficult. Figure 2 is an artistic view of Verne’s Paris.

Fig. 2. Cover of Paris in the 20th Century (1863)

Verne’s futuristic green Paris was a complex mix of wind, water, compressed air, electrical power, hydro-power, hydrogen for heating, and hydrogen-fueled cars, trucks, and ships. Verne even frames his green city’s needed evolution and a retro historical timeline. He started with windmill-sourced compressed air, powering his initial construction projects, factory machines, and construction cranes. The construction projects included skyscrapers, asphalt roads, sea channels, and canal construction to open Paris and its transportation networks to the sea. Windmills compressed air and drove mechanical devices in factories, homes, and powered trains and railways (Taves, 1997).

The next phase was the electrical power grid. It would be an electrical city with lights, elevators, and other electrical devices such as fax machines and wireless communication. However, Verne does not fully define how massive amounts of electricity would be produced in detail. He notes that an electro-mechanical dynamo (gravity-fed) generated electricity and batteries for small devices. This futuristic Paris did have the potential infrastructure to generate electricity through electromechanical, wind, water, compressed-air, and chemical means. The literary years of Verne to follow were made up of electrical adventures to achieve the massive electrical power needed for his futuristic Paris.

Electrical power would be the basis for another ancillary power source of hydrogen. He foresaw the massive hydrogen production by electrolysis to power cars, ships, and home heating. And maybe to use hydrogen instead of coal to power steam engines. Verne predicted a technical fantasy of hydrogen fuel for cars and home heating, hydropower generation, new efficient carbonic acid (carbon dioxide) engines instead of steam, and replacing coal gas with electric lighting (Verne, Paris in the 20th Century, pp. 24-25).

Verne envisioned a fanciful array of green, efficient, and power-saving inventions, such as carbon dioxide engines, electrical lighting systems, magnetic friction reduction for trains, hydraulic lifting systems, compressed air storage, hydraulic cranes, water turbines, and hydrogen/oxygen/compressed air heating systems, which would augment his green energy sources, improve efficiency, and reduce demand. Verne’s Green New World would also address environment, health, and wildlife conservation in his city design as part of his holistic approach.

The heart of Verne’s green Paris was built on four pillars of green energy: Compressed air and Wind Power, Hydrogen fuel, and chemical electrical power. And a number of energy-saving inventions.

The Power of Wind and Compressed Air of 1960 Paris

 You can estimate that Verne’s futuristic Paris was 60 percent electricity-based. The balance of power came from compressed air from windmills and some water power. Jules Verne and his son Michel believed that stored windmill-generated compressed air would be part of a green future. In Paris in the 20th Century, Verne proposed the use of stored compressed air to power railways, factory machines, construction cranes, pneumatic tube trains, moving bridges, and even regulate clocks in a future Paris of 1960. Verne drew inspiration from a 1861 pneumatic compressed air single-car train experiment in London and the use of compressed air technology for the Fréjus Rail Tunnel through Mt. Cenis in the European Alps in 1857.

Verne addressed the inconsistency of wind power by proposing an urban compressed air storage utility. In Verne’s futuristic Paris, compressed air would supply energy through a public utility called the Catacomb Company of Paris. Verne’s windmill compressed air was pumped into and stored in Paris’ catacombs by “1,853 windmills established on the plains of Montrogue” outside the city (Verne, Paris in the 20th Century, p.31). Stored compressed air solves an inconsistent supply of wind energy and solar, making it attractive today. Verne and his son proposed a bright future for compressed air applications in many of his future novels. In the novel Self-Propelled Island (1894), Verne had a compressed air city utility company on his floating island. Similarly, in his book The Barsac Mission (1919), Verne’s city in the Sahara Desert had a compressed air utility.

In Paris in the 20th Century, Verne envisioned high-speed compressed air tube trains for interurban transportation. In his 1888 novel, The Year 2889, Michel Verne, son of Jules Verne, suggested pneumatic trains traveling at 1000 mph (Verne, In the Year 2889, p. 51). This prediction of high-speed pneumatic trains is on the verge of becoming a reality.

 In July 2017, Elon Musk’s startup, Hyperloop, successfully tested a full-scale system on its test track in Nevada and reached a top speed of 70 mph. Musk hopes to achieve 250 mph soon. The Hyperloop uses compressed air and magnetic force to reduce friction, as Verne did in his futuristic Paris. Magnetic cushioning was yet another necessary design application of Jules Verne (Verne, Paris in the 20th Century, p.23).

Michel Verne took the vision further with a transatlantic pneumatic tube train from Boston to Liverpool in two hours and 15 minutes. This story was published in English in Strand Magazine in 1895 and was incorrectly attributed to Jules Verne (Verne, Worlds Known and Unknown, p. 262). This pneumatic train could travel at 1000 to 1112 mph, much faster than Musk’s prototype.1

Recently, Popular Science suggested that a transatlantic tunnel is more feasible than previously thought and possible with today’s engineering. Researchers from the Chinese Academy of Sciences proposed a submarine rail project that would run at a theoretical speed of 1,240 mphclose to Verne’s prediction (Garfield, 2018). A pneumatic transatlantic system is compared favorably with transatlantic pipelines, cargo ships, planes, and cables; the proposed transatlantic system would still cost over 200 billion dollars. Of course, reducing carbon dioxide would help offset the project costs. Verne envisioned compressed air doing much more than trains.

Today’s green energy movement has resurrected Verne’s vision of green compressed air. Compressed Air Energy Storage (CAES) is a potential renewable power grid because it can store power from clean energy sources such as wind turbines and solar panels. Like Verne’s futuristic Paris catacombs, CAES uses underground storage. At the urban utility scale, energy generated during periods of low demand can be released during peak demands. Many competitive thermodynamic designs are being researched, and pilot plants are being built. Of course, any power source can be used to compress air.

Jules and/or Michel in Barsac Mission (1919) used hydroelectric power to run electric compressors to compress air into a liquid. In the Barsac Mission, compressed liquid air was stored in tanks and powered an engine to propel his heliplanes. This air engine was a piston engine using the liquid-to-gas phase transition. In January 2024, the US government’s Defense Advanced Research Projects Agency (DARPA) awarded research contracts to use compressed liquid air in planes.

Several options are being considered today for manufacturing and applying compressed air. Figure 3 is schematic of the options.

In addition, Verne’s compressed liquid air engine in Barsac Mission is also getting new interest in car engines. All major car companies are doing serious research driven by the zero-emission green movement on compressed air engines. Compressed air cars are not yet very efficient in terms of net energy balance, although Ford and Jeep are improving their engines with an eye on the future.

Fig. 3. Generation of Compressed Air and its Uses:Society of Environmental Engineers
Source: Kham, Imram. Renewable Energy and Sustainability, Elsevier, 2020

In addition, Verne’s compressed liquid air engine in Barsac Mission is also getting new interest in car engines. All major car companies are doing serious research driven by the zero-emission green movement on compressed air engines. Compressed air cars are not yet very efficient in terms of net energy balance, although Ford and Jeep are improving their engines with an eye on the future.

Electrically Generated Hydrogen For Cars, Trucks, and Home Heating

While Verne’s 1960 Paris had compressed air-driven commuter trains, he also envisioned green hydrogen individual transportation. Verne, in 1863, had no doubt that the future was hydrogen. Verne’s answer to carbon pollution was hydrogen, which would come from electricity. In Verne’s green Paris, hydrogen-fueled trucks, cars, and heated homes. Of course, hydrogen comes from the electrical breakdown of water (electrolysis) into hydrogen and oxygen. As we have discussed, coal in Verne’s time was used for home heating and was the primary source of air pollution. Verne used the method of water electrolysis, used for hydrogen gas heating, for altitude control in his Five Weeks in a Balloon (1863). Verne’s green Paris utilized a similar electrolysis-generated hydrogen for home heating via an engineering system that remixed hydrogen and oxygen fuel to heat compressed air and pipe it to apartments. The design was like his small-scale electrical electrolysis of water to hydrogen/oxygen, which was then remixed to heat the gas in the balloon to lift his balloon in Five Weeks in A Balloon.2 Generating a small amount of hydrogen from battery electrolysis, he was required to design a separate burner pipe to transfer heat safely to the explosive hydrogen gas in the balloon for flight control. It was an ingenious design but still risky, and after the famous explosions of the early twentieth century, non-flammable (but costly) helium replaced hydrogen in the 1920s in balloons and dirigibles.

Verne would later use electrolysis again, found recent fueling interest in hydrogen balloons. In Five Weeks in a Balloon, Verne produced hydrogen by transporting iron and sulfuric acid to the balloon launch site, but in future novels, Verne’s preferred method was water electrolysis. The Weather Service now uses local on-site electrolysis to fill hydrogen weather balloons. The 2023 switch from helium-filled balloons to launching hydrogen-filled balloons significantly reduced costs and carbon emissions (Rappe, 2023).

However, it was not hydrogen balloons that inspired Verne but hydrogen as a replacement for coal. Verne saw a much more significant role for hydrogen as a fuel in the future. In Jules Verne’s science fiction novel The Mysterious Island (1875), Verne imagines a world where “water will one day be employed as fuel, that the hydrogen and oxygen which constitute it…will furnish an inexhaustible source of heat and light, of an intensity of which coal is not capable” (Verne, Mysterious Island, p. 189). Verne’s vision of a hydrogen economy was not so much about smaller localized production but the mass production of hydrogen. In his sixty years, Verne evolved the mass production of hydrogen in his scientific and literary quest (Voyages Extraordinaire) from chemical production from iron and acid to battery-powered electrolysis to electromechanical electrolysis.

Verne predicted urban utilities for hydrogen production in Dr. Ox’s Experiment (1872)and Paris in the 20th Century (1863).In Paris in the 20th Century, Verne was unclear on how the electrical power needed for the massive hydrogen would be produced. Still, his futuristic Paris had many possibilities, from battery-powered electricity, electromechanical dynamos, wind, and hydroelectric power, as noted in the novel. In Dr. Ox’s Experiment, Verne used an extensive series of batteries. Like engineers today, Verne realized that batteries could not be a significant source of green hydrogen. It would take the electromechanical dynamo, which Michael Faraday had predicted and Verne was fascinated by. In the late 1850s, commercial dynamos were still evolving, but Verne quickly applied their future use. His last fictional city in The Self-Propelled Island (1897) was a total electric city using petroleum, steam, and electromechanical dynamos to generate electricity.

Some engineers of Verne’s time had envisioned a possible future for a hydrogen economy via commercial production via electrolysis with dynamos. Interestingly, Alliance Company, a hydrogen manufacturing company, made the first commercial electrical dynamos in 1859, originally to produce hydrogen fuel by electrolysis and sell it. Within a few years, the hydrogen proved too costly, difficult to transport safely, and impractical for an extensive fuel network. However, this failure did not alter Verne’s vision in 1863 of its future use. He followed the evolution of the electromechanical dynamo and applied its advance in his future novels. In his Underground City (1877), Verne used coal-powered dynamos, which again were not green. In The Barsac Mission (1919), he used hydroelectric dynamo generation, which was green but limited. By the twentieth century, electromechanical dynamos supplied the world’s electricity. Continued advances in technology have made a hydrogen economy possible.

Verne did augur the emerging green cities where hydrogen could supply heating and transportation. Verne’s use of electrolysis to mass-produce hydrogen is back on the table. These visions are being realized today by Toyota, which is building hydrogen plants using electrolysis that could meet the demands of Verne’s futuristic Paris (Collins,2024). Toyota’s hydrogen plants will power a city that is currently under construction, known as Woven City (Collins, 2024). Toyota’s Woven City will use green hydrogen based on these new engineering efficiencies of hydrogen generation via electrolysis. Toyota will use solar and wind-produced electricity to manufacture hydrogen. Like Verne’s Paris, Toyota’s city will use hydrogen to power trucks and cars, and like Verne, Toyota will use a city-wide network of hydrogen fueling stations. Woven City will supply hydrogen to passenger and commercial vehicles in the city via a pipeline.

Today’s engineering has overcome significant issues such as the cost/energy balance and the inefficiency of electrolysis in hydrogen production. Hysata, a New South Wales-based company that makes electrolyzers, has announced its latest breakthrough: Hysata can generate hydrogen with a whopping 95 percent efficiency. A hydrogen fuel cell electrolyzer/generator at the individual fueling stations will back up power during outages. Figure 4 shows the possible infrastructure of a future economy.

Fig. 4. Possible Hydrogen Economy: Society of Environmental Engineers
Source: Kham, Imram. Renewable Energy and Sustainability, Elsevier, 2020

Verne’s 1863 vision included hydrogen-powered engines. Verne used clean, burning internal combustion hydrogen cars, which he calls the “Lenoir Machine in his futuristic Paris” (Verne, Paris in the 20th Century, pp. 24-26). In 1858, Etienne Lenoir of France invented the 1-cylinder, 2-stroke engine that used gaseous fuel. The Lenoir Hippomobile in 1860 was fueled by electrolyzing water and running the hydrogen. Later, Lenoir adapted the engine for various gases, such as coal gas. The advantage of burning hydrogen is it exhausts water and no pollutants. Hydrogen cars are still being researched as a green solution for internal combustion. Verne realized the city needed a network of hydrogen gas stations, but he did not address today’s concern about handling highly explosive hydrogen.

Today, green hydrogen is achieved through electrolysis powered by renewable energies such as wind or solar energy coupled with improved process efficiencies even on a smaller scale, such as in fuel stations. Hysata makes electrolyzer units in many sizes and has built pilot plants to supply heavy-duty trucks in California. Amazingly, Verne used hydrogen in Paris in the 20th Century to power trucks.

Verne’s Electrical 1960 Paris—The City of Lights—But How to Power It?

Verne’s future Paris was an electricity-based city, and besides generating hydrogen, Verne’s green futurist Paris was electrical in many areas, much like Toyota’s Woven City of today. Verne applied electrical power for electrolysis to produce hydrogen fuel, power arc lighting, operate elevators, run cranes, open doors, and operate book lifts in library warehouses, as well as an array of time-saving electric devices. In his 1863 writing of his futuristic Paris, Verne’s problem was not the vision of an electrical Eden but how to supply the electricity needed for this Eden without the pollution of coal and steam. The electrical demands for Verne’s Paris skyscrapers needed lighting, powerful elevators, doors, and other electrical devices such as fax machines, copiers, calculators, and phones, which would be an enormous use of electricity. The primary electricity demand was street, business, and home lighting in Verne’s Paris.

In Paris in the 20th Century, Verne used the electric street lighting system known as the “Way Method” (after John Thomas Way), developed in 1860, which Verne referenced in Paris in the 20th Century (p. 24). The Way lighting system was an improved type of street lighting, a mix between straight arc and modern neon mercury lighting. Arc and mercury lighting brightness made it a poor system for room lighting. In Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea (1871), Verne noted that the harshness of early arc lighting had to be “softened and tempered by delicately painted [wall] designs” (Verne, Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea, p. 92). This harshness of the light was probably the reason some shopkeepers in Paris in the 20th Century rejected it and stuck with coal gas (p. 24). Brightness and feel remain a lighting problem and a source of green resistance even today. Verne used both arc and Edison’s softer incandescent lighting in his novel Underground City in 1877. Incandescent lighting became commercially available in the 1880s. Regardless of type, lighting requires a large amount of electrical power.

In Paris in the 20th Century, Verne was not clear on how massive amounts of electricity would be generated for urban use, but it would be the quest of his scientific novels to come. Still, Verne did not specifically name anyone one type of power source in his futuristic Paris, although he had noted many possibilities, which would be a life quest. Verne’s literary quest for mass-produced electricity took him over sixty novels and articles in four decades. Verne would explore improved batteries, solar, wind, hydroelectric, tidal, static electricity collection from the air, thermal gradients in oceans, and more efficient engines and motors.

Verne first looked to improve battery efficiency. When Verne wrote in 1863 of a futuristic Paris, unique and powerful chemical batteries for electricity were possible but far from feasible. In 1863, the only significant source of electricity was chemical batteries, but Verne’s Paris had twenty thousand street lights alone, which was beyond the scope of the chemical batteries of the 1860s.

Verne had followed the development of batteries from the 1840s, and Verne knew from the battery experiments of Davy and Faraday that batteries could not power a city of lights. Humphry Davy had established the cost of battery power, noting it in his arc lighting experiments in the 1820s. Davy required 2000 galvanic battery cells at six dollars per minute (about 200 dollars a minute today) to power one arc light. In 1848, two experimental arc streetlights in Paris were tried, which caused considerable excitement in Paris but was short-lived because of battery cost. Verne’s 20th-century Paris had 200,000 streetlights, and battery electricity would be cost-prohibitive. Verne would have realized that the future of electric cities would require mass production of electricity beyond the battery power of the 19th century, and this would be true even today with today’s powerful batteries.

Verne considered increasing the efficiency of batteries in his novels of the 1860s for more output. Verne tried to improve the common  “Bunsen battery” in his 1863 novel Five Weeks in a Balloon. The Bunsen battery was a lead-carbon-acid battery.

Early in Verne’s Voyages Extraordinaire, Verne invented the most futuristic design of a sodium battery in Twenty Thousand Leagues under the Sea. Verne’s futuristic use of sodium was a hundred years ahead of its time and would significantly increase electrical output. This sodium battery has again taken Jules Verne into recent scientific headlines as a cheap replacement for lithium EV car batteries. However, Verne’s sodium battery would still require 500-1000 battery cells per single city street light in his futuristic Paris. Still in his Paris in the 20th Century, Verne applied smaller applications for batteries, such as powering musical instruments, but so much more power was needed.

Verne never wholly gave up on some role for batteries in his final fictional electrical city, Standard City in The Self-Propelled Island (1895); he sees our future of rechargeable batteries for electric cars, trains, boats, and small electrical devices.

Lighting homes, factories, shops, streets, and signs would require massive amounts of electricity. When Verne wrote Paris in the 20th Century, he did not specify how the enormous electrical power would be generated. Verne was sure that electrical generation would not be chemical-based but mechanical. In Faraday’s 1820s experiments, he generated electricity with cheaper mechanical magneto-electric generators (dynamos). Based on these early principles of electromagnetic induction, hand-cranked induction lanterns evolved in the 1840s, and Verne quickly realized its future potential. Verne used induction devices ( Ruhmkorff lamps) to generate electrical lighting in his novels Journey to the Center of the Earth (1870), From the Earth to the Moon (1865), and 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea (1871). In his futurist Paris, he references the  “Way Method,” which used a magneto-electric generator (a type of dynamo). Way used his system for a single lighthouse in 1858, but it was hand-cranked, hardly a system for urban lighting, yet Verne realized the potential for the future of a dynamo.

In 1858, the Alliance Company used a magneto-electric generator driven by a coal fueled steam engine to power arc lights and make hydrogen fuel through electrolysis; however, Verne’s own requirements in futuristic Paris was a very restrictive use of coal and steam. Eventually, in Verne’s novel The Underground City (1877), he applied the electro-mechanical dynamo generation for mass electricity. In Verne’s underground Coal City in The Underground City, Verne creates an electrical city using dynamos (“electromagnetic-mechanical machines”), and electricity is used for “all the needs of industrial and domestic life.”2 Coal City used electricity for lighting, ventilation, and heating. In one of his last books, The Self-Propelled Island, electro-mechanical dynamos would power urban needs. Verne was not as clear in Paris in the 20th Century, how massive amounts of electricity might be produced.

Power generation may have been generated by converting coal-fired steam power via a dynamo to electricity for Verne’s Paris. Of course, coal-powered dynamos were far from the green solution Verne wanted. Verne alludes to the green electromagnetic base by noting the Way Method. The Way Method dynamos were hand-cranked or gravity-based. Verne’s green Paris did have several other potential green power sources to drive a dynamo shaft or a magneto, such as wind, gas, compressed air, water power, chemical batteries, hydroelectric, and even hydrogen.

Verne had developed a vast windmill system in his futuristic Paris, which compressed air but could also turn a dynamo shaft (although he did not specify). Verne’s Paris had “1,853 windmills established on the plains of Montrogue” outside the city (Verne, Paris in the 20th Century, p. 24). Verne’s future Paris also had the potential for hydroelectric power, which Verne was using water turbines to replace waterwheel power in his green Paris. Since canals had connected Verne’s Paris to the ocean, there was even the potential to utilize tidal energy. His 1889 novel, The Purchase of the North Pole, notes the potential future of tidal power (p.16) France’s Rance Tidal Power Station was the world’s first large-scale tidal power plant, which became operational in 1966.

In the early 1900s, technology caught up with Verne’s imagination of clean electric cities. Verne would finally have a source for the massive electric needs of a city like his 20th-century Paris. Verne had long envisioned harnessing the power of Niagara Falls, which was achieved in the 1890s with hydroelectric power supplying factories in Buffalo, New York. In Jules and Michel’s novel, The Barsac Mission (1919), Verne’s imagination took these new power generation advances to build Blackland, a fictional city in the Sahara Desert. Verne had to evolve Blackland’s electrical power from wood-burning steam engines driving dynamos to green hydroelectric dynamos. Verne dammed the Niger River to generate electric power for his Blackland factories, city lighting, and irrigation system, declaring, “Smoke no longer gushes from the useless chimney.” This Vernian vision augured the 1930s Boulder Dam and Las Vegas system. Hydroelectricity is a significant electricity resource today, accounting for more than 16% of global electricity production.

Verne’s prediction of generating electricity from temperature gradients at different ocean depths is even more astonishing: “By establishing a circuit by wires at immersed at different depths, I will be able to generate electricity,” he wrote in 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea. Verne probably got the idea from Faraday’s thermocouple experiments, generating electricity from heat. Years later, in 1881, Jacques Arsene d’Arsonval, a French physicist, proposed Verne’s idea of tapping the ocean’s thermal energy. Still, this offered no solution to massive electricity production for a city; however, Verne might have been on to something. In 1970, the Tokyo Electric Power Company successfully built and deployed the first large-scale production using the principle.

Interestingly, Verne did not envision using solar energy to produce electricity and hydrogen, a recent area of significant research. Even though Jules and his son understood the principles of a photoelectric cell in 1888, it was a rarity that Verne so understood such a unique scientific discovery without extrapolating into the future.

Fig. 5. A Punch Magazine 1881 Cartoon The Growth of the Electrical Baby

Verne realized the issue was Victorian demand for heating, steam production, and industrial power produced from coal. Verne designed three great fictional electric-powered cities: Paris in Paris in the 20th Century, Standard City in The Self-Propelled Island , and Blackland in The Barsac Mission, which avoided or restricted coal-generated electricity. New Aberfoyle was an electric city but used coal to generate it (Underground City, 1877). Verne understood that the transition from coal would be measured in centuries, not decades.

Verne saw a 200-year struggle to reduce our dependency on coal and hydrocarbons. A reduction in coal smoke would be part of such a transition. Verne did not see a quick conversion from coal but looked to a gradual use of alternative energy, more efficiency, and even methods for the clean use of coal. As noted, coal gas production for home and street lighting was extremely popular because of its soft light. Coal gas production polluted the air, smoke, and rivers with benzene, chemicals, and tar. Verne also foresaw that there would be resistance to electric lighting and the green movement. He noted opposition to electric lighting in his future Paris by merchants who preferred the soft light of coal gas. Noting in his futuristic Paris, “Nonetheless a few old-fashioned shops remained faithful to the old means of hydro carbonated gas,” which necessitated “limited coal mining” (Verne, Paris in the 20th Century, p. 24).

Verne’s early writings noted that coal for heating and cooking was the primary source of Victorian air pollution. In his futuristic Paris, Verne used clean hydrogen for heating. In the same year, 1863, Verne used electricity for cooking in his Nautilus (Verne, Twenty Thousand Leagues Under the Sea).

Another possible interim reduction of coal pollution came in Verne’s Begun’s Millions, in which Verne envisions an environmental but dystopian city called France-Ville. As noted previously, Verne was concerned about unhealthy coal-burning air pollution. He feared government regulation would be needed in France-Ville. France-Ville used building regulations imposed on houses, and a unique subterranean scrubbing system was used to clean coal and wood-burning exhaust. The system took exhaust gases from the heating furnace via pipes to a “burner” used to strip it of carbon (Verne, Begum’s Millions, p. 124). While lacking the process details, it does augur today’s Clean Coal Technology.

 Verne did look to cleaner petroleum as a possible fuel alternative. Verne foresaw petroleum’s potential, using it to fuel his floating island in The Self-Propelled Island. Verne compares petroleum to the “pollution” of coal-fired steam engines of the 1890s as “the difference being instead of black smoke, the chimneys emitted only light vapor that did not pollute the atmosphere” (Verne, The Self-Propelled Island, p. 41).

Fig. 6. Illustration from The Self-Propelled Island

Figure 6 shows the original illustration from Verne’s novel Self-Propelled Island. Verne uses petroleum and/or petroleum biomass to heat steam boilers in place of coal which was then used to generate electrical power on his fictional floating island. In The Self-Propelled Island he describes the fuel as petroleum (p. 41) and “oil briquettes” (p. 55). Verne is using petroleum briquettes to replace coal to drive the steam engine dynamo and produce electricity. Verne predicts the future of petroleum briquettes based on some emerging technology and his imagination. Pressed palm oil briquettes were used in some countries in the 1890s for heating, but Verne used the word petroleum briquettes writing in 1895. Verne considered petroleum and/or petroleum products to be clean-burning fuels. Petroleum briquettes were just being experimented with in the 1890s but Verne recognized the potential.

Petroleum briquettes would have offered a deliverable product to Verne’s island in a world without oil tankers and a pipeline network. Verne states that petroleum briquettes are “less cumbersome, less dirty than coal, and have more heating power” (Verne, The Self-Propelled Island, p. 51). Amazingly, now 130 years later, petroleum briquettes are being looked at for the same attributes Verne noted. Research on petroleum and new patents for processing and chemical binders are emerging. The new look at petroleum briquettes lists similar advantages noted by Verne: ease of handling versus coal, its clean burning, heating power, and environmentally safe transportation. A recent study of biomass petroleum briquettes made from bitumen (raw petroleum), starch, and rice husks found that they are competitive in industrial heating (Ikell, 2014). A new patented process takes Canadian bitumen crude oil mixed with a polymer to form briquettes that can be transported without fear of spills or fires.

Petroleum oil, in general, emerged as a somewhat “cleaner” fuel by 1895; however, its refining was a significant pollutant by 1899. One of Verne’s fictional travelers in The Will of an Eccentric (1899) describes the oil refining atmosphere of Warren, Ohio, as a “sickening” atmosphere, tarry chemical water pollution and even explosive water pollution, which contributed to the famous 1969 burning of the oily Cuyahoga River in near-by Cleveland.

 Unfortunately, Verne incorrectly wrote off natural gas as a clean alternative to coal in describing Pittsburgh’s still dirty air in The Will of an Eccentric (1899): “In spite of the thousands of miles of subterranean conduits by which natural gas is supplied.” Verne here alludes to George Westinghouse’s first massive conversion to natural gas from coal in Pittsburgh in 1887, using an enormous pipeline supply network. The use of natural gas dramatically reduced smoke, but supply diminished by 1892, and the coal smoke was returned by the writing of Verne’s The Will of an Eccentric (1899). Verne missed the actual improvement of natural gas conversion. The Society of Engineers reported: “We had four or five years of wonderful cleanliness for Pittsburg, and we have all had a taste of knowing what it is to be clean. We all felt better, looked better, and were better. But we are back into the smoke. It is growing worse day by day” (Tarr, 2015).

 Verne’s other transitional strategy was improving the steam engine’s thermal efficiency, which was between 30 to 35 percent. The iconic Victorian steam engine was a major consumer of coal; therefore, efficiency improvements in steam engines offered significant reductions in coal pollution. Even today, coal, natural gas, oil, nuclear, and even some solar electrical plants use steam turbines with mediocre efficiencies. The major problem for Victorians was that the steam Rankine cycle has a 30-40 percent efficiency. In the 1860s, Victorian engineers and scientists pursued the use of carbon dioxide (they used the term carbonic acid) as a way to increase efficiency significantly. This breakthrough brings us to one of Jules Verne’s most obscure predictions in Paris in the 20th Century. Verne predicted that in 1960 Paris: “Carbonic acid (carbon dioxide) now dethroning steam” (p. 12). Later in the novel, he suggests the carbonic acid engine would power ships (p. 135). Verne again probably extrapolated Marc Brunel and his son Isambard ( Great Eastern fame) work in the 1860s, conducting over 15,000 experiments on a motor driven by carbonic acid (carbon dioxide) based on Michael Faraday’s theories.

In the late 1860s, James Baldwin detailed his patent for a carbonic acid engine using the physical phases (liquid and gas) of carbon dioxide at available temperatures and pressures in the 1860s. Such an engine was theoretically possible, but future engineering was needed for the super temperatures and pressures to make the engine cycle efficient. Steam turbines still produce over 75 percent of today’s electricity. Carbon dioxide engines have the potential for 60 percent thermal efficiency versus 35 percent for steam. This efficiency jump has led to a pilot plant using carbon dioxide in supercritical phases to replace steam. The Supercritical Transformational Electric Power project is one of the world’s largest-scale and most comprehensive, funded by the Department of Energy. A key project goal is to advance the state-of-the-art for high-temperature carbon dioxide in the power cycle performance. It may turn out that one of Verne’s little-noticed predictions will become one of his best.

Some of Verne’s visions of clean energy remain in the future. Verne envisioned a futuristic “accumulator” and  “transformer” to gather static electricity from air or molecular vibrations. He describes these in his 1889 book, The Year 2889. In his 1885 novel Mathias Sandorf, he uses this Vernian accumulator for electric boats, and in Master of the World (1904) suggests their use to power electrical airships.

Conclusion

Figure 7 is a schematic summary of the fifty-year vision of Verne’s green future. It shows a mix of new sources for electricity, the need for storage, and a role for hydrogen.

Fig. 7

The green design of energy started in his first novel, Paris in the 20th Century, which envisioned a green and cleaner city of the future. In it, Verne would design a green energy grid for his futuristic Paris and a blueprint to build on for his literary career. Verne then launched a 50-year literary journey of novels (Voyages Extraordinaire), which he improved on this initial urban energy plan. His futuristic Paris realized the potential of electricity in transportation, hydrogen generation, home heating, powering factories, and street lighting. Verne spent the next fifty years applying the evolving science to produce clean electricity in some of other his fictional cities. He foresaw the future of an electrical grid that could recharge battery-powered cars, trains, and electrical devices.

 Verne saw a hydrogen-driven economy in the future, but the root of his economy was the electricity for electrolysis to produce hydrogen. His hydrogen solution evolves in four novels: Paris in the 20th Century, Five Weeks in a Balloon, Mysterious Island, and Dr Ox’s Experiment.

Maybe more interesting was Verne’s understanding of political issues and human resistance to change, which required some compromise as part of the solution. Verne articulated that the green transition would move slowly. Realizing that getting off coal required a transitional approach, such as his clean coal scrubbing system in Begum’s Millions. Verne looked further into the future need for efficient electrical devices, more efficient engines, rechargeable batteries, and energy systems as part of the big picture and longer-range solution.

Eventually, Verne would see the future in electricity, hydrogen, wind power, hydroelectric power generation, compressed air, biomass fuel, tidal power generation, and even solar power. Along the way, he envisioned an array of things like an electric submarine, an electric airship, electric vehicles, solar sails, high-speed pneumatic trains, hydrogen cars, hydrogen home heating, tidal wave power, windmills for electrical generation, and hundreds of futuristic devices.

Verne’s green vision is not complete, but we still have over 800 years to achieve Verne’s ultimate solution. In his book, The Year 2889, Verne hails the future of wonderful instruments, such as “accumulators”. Verne describes them as able to “absorb and condense the living force [energy from molecular vibration] contained in the sun’s rays; others, the electricity stored in our globe; others, again, the energy coming from whatever source, such as a waterfall, a stream, the winds, etc.” He, too, invented the  “transformer”, a more wonderful contrivance still, which takes the living force [energy] from the accumulator and, on the simple pressure of a button, gives it back to space in whatever form may be desired, whether as heat, light, electricity, or mechanical force, after having first obtained from it the work required. The day when these two instruments were contrived is to be dated as the era of true progress. They have put into the hands of man a power that is almost infinite (Verne, In The Year 2889, pp. 21-22).

NOTES

  1. There are two translations of the Strand article one using 1000 and the other 1112 mph.
  2. Verne initially used hydrogen from the iron and acid chemical reaction to fill the balloon.

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—. The Purchase of the North Pole, originally published 1889, Associated Booksellers.

—. Mysterious Island, originally published 1867, Kindle Edition.

—. Backwards to Britain, originally published 1859, Chambers Limited, 1992.

—. Five Weeks in a Balloon. 1863.

—. Underground City, originally published 1877, Luath Press, 2005.

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—. The Self-Propelled Island, originally published 1895, translated by Marie-Therese Noiset, University of Nebraska Press, 2015.

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— and Michel Verne. In the Year 2889, originally published 1889, Seven Treasures Publications, 2008.

— and Michel Verne.  “A Futurist Express Train.” Worlds Known and Unknown, The Palik Series.

Quentin R.Skrabec Jr. is a full-time researcher in engineering futurism, Jules Verne, Victorian science, the intersection of culture and engineering, and metallurgical studies. His education includes a BS in engineering from the University of Michigan, an MS in engineering from Ohio State, and a Ph.D. in manufacturing management from the University of Toledo. He has appeared on both PBS and the History Channel. He has published over 100 articles and 25 books in science, science fiction, and engineering.


Jules Verne’s Fictional Quest for the Secrets of Krupp Steel


⮌ SFRA Review, vol. 56 no. 1

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Jules Verne’s Fictional Quest for the Secrets of Krupp Steel

Quentin R. Skrabec

Story Summary

A French physician, Doctor Sarrasin, and a German scientist, Professor Schultze, inherit a vast fortune as descendants of an Indian rajah’s fortune. This rajah married the wealthy widow of a native prince, the  “begum “ of the title. Each heir decided to build utopian cities in the United States.

Sarrasin builds France-Ville on the western side of the Cascade Range in the state of Oregon, with a focus on the health and wellness of its citizens. Schultze, a German militarist, builds Stahlstadt on the east side, a vast industrial and mining complex, devoted to the production of ever more powerful and destructive weapons. Schultze soon plans to destroy Sarrasin’s city.

Schultze builds an advanced steel mill for cannons. Stahlstadt becomes the world’s biggest producer of arms. Schultze was Stahlstadt’s dictator, whose very word was law and who made all significant decisions personally. Schultze was an eccentric and unusual character. Stahlstadt was an industrial and circular labyrinth covered in secrecy. The primary purpose of this cannon factory was to maintain secrecy around its advanced cannon-making process. It was strictly controlled by employees’ oaths, passwords, locked doors, guards, and a central observation tower. Schultze added a home in the middle, with exotic gardens and greenhouses.

Marcel Bruckmann, a friend of Sarrasin’s son, becomes an industrial spy to understand the manufacture and technology of Schulze’s cannons. Bruckmann relocates to Stahlstadt and quickly rises high in its rigid hierarchy, gaining Schultze’s personal confidence, spying out some well-kept secrets, and sending a warning to his France-Ville friends. Still, Bruckmann faces a factory built to maintain secrets and security. Schultze is not content to produce arms, but intends to use them first against France-Ville, then worldwide. Schultze’s super-cannon was capable of firing massive shells filled with gas. Schultze’s pressurized carbon dioxide gas was designed not only to asphyxiate its victims but also to freeze them. As Schultze prepares for the final assault on France-Ville, a gas projectile in the office accidentally explodes, asphyxiating him and leaving him in frozen animation. Stahlstadt goes bankrupt and becomes a ghost town. Bruckmann and Dr. Sarrasin’s son take it over. Eventually, Stahlstadt is re-invented as a peaceful manufacturing town.

Setting the Environment and the Story

In Verne’s scientific romances, science and technology are not merely a passive backdrop or setting for the story, but an active driver of the plot. Begum’s Millions1 (1879) is a prime example of this blending of technology and story; however, before examining the story of Begum’s Millions, there is a subject of debate, and we must first consider the authorship itself. Many consider Paschal Grousset (1845–1909) to be at least the co-author in the sense that many believe the story and framework were those of Paschal Grousset, and there is good evidence that Verne’s editor purchased the storyline (Verne, BM Luce ed, p. xvi). Indeed, there is support that the France-Ville of chapter 10 fits Grousset’s political ideas. Chapter 6, “The Albrecht Mine,” gives the reader the feeling of something patched in or merged from a different manuscript. Some merging and blending of two manuscripts was probably the case. As to Verne using Alfred Krupp and the Stahlstadt factory as a model for the book, there is a connection in Verne’s own words to his editor: “What shall we say about the Krupp factory now, as it is really Krupp who is in play here, and his factory that is so forbidden to indiscreet eyes.” (Verne, BM, Luce ed., p. 206, note 5)

Stahlstadt factory descriptions may have come from Victor Tissot’s The Prussians in Germany, published in Paris in 1876. Another possible source could have been a pamphlet published in 1865 by French science journalist and publisher, Francois Julien Turgan (Michaelis, 1888. P.50). Turgan documented the Krupp factory in Germany as well as other European cannon factories, focusing on its military artillery, design, and manufacturing processes. His account provides a detailed, illustrated record of the operations at Krupp during the mid-1860s. Napoleon III had planned to buy Krupp cannons in the 1860s, but the French military command overruled him. Everything changed with the Franco-Prussian War (1870-71), which started an international arms race.

Other sources could have been available to Verne, such as military reports from the 1870s, marketing materials from Krupp Steel, and those of French steelmaker Schneider-Creusot, which had a network of traveling engineers known as  “Silent Research at Schneider” to study and report on steelmaking innovations worldwide. This is consistent with other sources available to Verne, such as military visit reports of the 1870s and the corporate spy network of the French Schneider Creusot steel. Verne’s story matches the unique actual process details of Krupp steel. The connections to some of Alfred Krupp’s personal characteristics are less compelling, but in the broader context of all the Krupp details, they rise above mere coincidence, and they should at least be discussed.

The Franco-Prussian War vividly demonstrated the superiority of Krupp’s breech-loading crucible steel cannons over the French’s muzzle-loading brass cannons. The world entered a type of arms race, which is reflected in Verne’s story. Herr Schultze’s steelworks and Marcel Bruckmann’s quest to uncover its secrets were based on the real international espionage by countries such as France and England to find the 19th century’s greatest industrial secret: the Krupp cast crucible steel cannon process.

Verne’s Cannon Factory Layout Versus Krupp’s

Verne was no stranger to iron works, forging, and cannon foundries, having visited the naval foundry and cannon shop near Indret a number of times with his father in his youth (Butcher, 2006, p.18). This cannon forge made use of steam forging hammers that Verne would write about in Begum’s Millions. Begum’s Millions demonstrated Verne’s depth of knowledge of the secretive Alfred Krupp and his factory. It is not fully clear how Verne acquired these details. The main source appears to be the secretive, partially published report of an 1865 visit to Krupp’s factory (Michaelis, 1888, p. 50). What is known is that Krupp’s layout of the factory and mansion is unique and far different than other steel works, such as Carnegie’s 1875 massive steelworks at Braddock, Pennsylvania, and France’s Schneider-Creusot. Both Verne’s and Krupp’s mills were built on a coal field with adjoining ore deposits.

Verne’s Herr Schultze’s city, factory, and castle reflected those of Alfred Krupp and the city of Essen. For study reference and comparison, Begum’s Millions Stanford Luce translation and William Manchester’s The Arms of Krupp will be used. Schultze, like Krupp, builds a massive tropical garden at the center of his factory operations around his factory home, which was unheard of until very recently, with roof gardens at manufacturing plants such as Ford Motor Company. Krupp had maintained his original family house of the 1820s amidst the works, adding gardens in the 1860s. However, in the 1870s, he built a castle overlooking the factory. Verne’s glass-enclosed heated garden was modeled after Krupp’s glass-enclosed gardens. In both cases, excess factory heat is used to maintain the temperature. Verne includes Krupp’s use of peacocks, pineapples, slag-formed fountains, and statues in the garden at the center of the steel works (Manchester, 1964, pp. 71-72). Verne’s Schultze had a museum and model shop exactly like Krupp’s, as described by a rare visitor to the works in 1865. Both Krupp and Verne had a tower with a glass lookout. Krupp’s original central home inside the factory had a glass  “crow’s nest” for watching workers. Verne’s novel had the Tower of Bull at the center of Stahlstadt. Both used thick glass roof skylights.

Krupp’s steel works and mansion in the 1870s were described as: “The interior is a mad labyrinth of great halls, hidden doors, and secret passages” (Manchester, 1964. P. 110). This is a similar visual to Verne’s. Verne blends Krupp’s unique steelmaking process, industrial labyrinth, Krupp’s famous mansion, and passion for secrecy into his story. Krupp’s factory layout and restricted employee movement were core to his secrecy policy, which Verne illustrates in his story. Krupp’s Essen and Verne’s Stahlstadt are both integrated cities/factories. Verne’s Stahlstadt was modeled after Krupp’s factory, complete with a police force, guards at every department entrance, passwords, locked doors, codes, and secret agents (James, 2012, p. 42). Both factories were designed with circular-walled sections and locked departments to ensure no one could piece together the secret process of cannon-making, which was a key part of Verne’s storyline.

The fictional factory organization in Verne’s novel reflected the pioneering Krupp industrial philosophy of vertical integration, which involved owning and coordinating resources throughout the production cycle. Verne’s Stahlstadt, like Krupp’s Essen, was an oval-shaped city with a circular railroad to supply the steel works. While much is made of Verne’s circular steel city design on a philosophical, metaphysical, and mythical level, it appears to be inspired by Krupp’s  “great circle railway” around his factory for process integration, allowing materials and semi-products to move between departments and connections to bring in coal and ore (Krupp Steel, 1912). William Kingston’s earliest English translation of Begum’s Millions, published in 1879, offers a slightly more explicit visual representation of this circular design. Krupp’s railway was built from 1874 to 1877 and was the subject of much news attention. The circular design enabled efficient integration, which other notable steelworks failed to achieve fully in the 1870s. All the great steel works of the 1800s and even the 1900s had a linear integration from department to department. It would be unlikely that Verne thought of this circular design independently of Krupp’s design. Interestingly, Verne would utilize this circular integration in his posthumously published novel, The Barsac Mission (1919), which featured an evil factory. The circular design of steel mills has become popular recently as the ultimate in vertical integration (IREA, 2023).

Making Steel in the 1870s: An Extraordinary Journey of Technology

The 1870s were a time of much innovation in steelmaking, particularly at Krupp Steel. Steelmaking was a matter of controlling carbon. Blister, puddling, crucible, open-hearth, and Bessemer converter processes were being used at various plants. Initially, Krupp used blister steel, as made in Verne’s novel Mysterious Island, as an intermediate step in making his crucible steel to cast cannons. But Krupp converted from blister steel as the intermediate step to puddling in the 1870s.

In Mysterious Island (1875),Verne clearly defines the metallurgical difference between blister and puddled process steel. Puddling allowed Krupp to move directly from pig iron to steel without producing the intermediate wrought iron product and then carburizing it in a cementation process to produce blister steel, as Verne’s island colonists did. After extensive trials, Krupp decided that a combination of puddled and crucible steel processes could meet the quality requirements of his cannons. Krupp also produced lower-quality steel for other applications using the Bessemer converter and evolving open-hearth steelmaking processes. In fact. Krupp had been the first to use the Bessemer process (1862) and the open-hearth process (1869). However, no other world steelmaker used Krupp’s combination of puddling and crucible processing for cannon steel because of the high cost of such double processing. Krupp believed that cost was secondary to achieving the best quality in the world. Verne captures Krupp’s quest for pride and excellence over cost in his character Herr Schultze. In 1875, Andrew Carnegie embarked on a journey to become the wealthiest man in the world, profiting from Bessemer steel in the mass steel market; however, Krupp remained loyal to puddling for his prized cannons.

The story of Begum’s Millions (1879) includes a fictional quest for Krupp’s secret steelmaking process. The quest evolved out of an international arms race that began with the American Civil War (1860-65) and the Franco-Prussian War (1870-71). In 1870, Schneider-Creusot began producing steel cannons using the Bessemer process, but never achieved the quality of Krupp’s cannons, and Schneider-Creusot lacked the puddling/crucible technology to match Krupp. To catch up, Schneider-Creusot developed a network of traveling engineers known as “Silent Research at Schneider” to study and report on steelmaking innovations around the world that could be applied to cannon making (Galvez-Behar, 2004). This research network encompassed patent office research, social networking at scientific meetings and conferences, and observations of competitive military cannon marketing trials, as well as visitors’ notes from competing steel mills. Krupp was forced to balance the secrecy of his superior process with the need to utilize it as a marketing tool for the global market. In 1878 and 1879, Krupp held competitions known as Völkerschiessen, which were firing demonstrations of cannons for hundreds of international buyers to view his operations. Being aware of the Schneider-Creusot spy network, Krupp would not allow French observers.

The success of Krupp’s famous cast crucible steel process was a complex evolutionary process and technological innovation. The basic core crucible process developed by Frederick Krupp (1787-1826) evolved throughout the 19th century under Alfred Krupp (1812-1887). Interestingly, Alfred Krupp has been accused of stealing the original basic crucible steelmaking process from Britain in the 1850s. (Stewart, 1994) The Krupp cast crucible steel process was a mix of crucible steelmaking, puddling, and advanced forging techniques.

The process outline consisted of producing high-quality pig iron from a blast furnace. The process outline consisted of producing high-quality pig iron from a blast furnace, remelting this pig iron in a puddling operation to make steel, then forging and rolling rods, remelting pieces of these rods in multiple crucibles, and finally sequencing the casting of steel blocks to be forged into cannon barrels. Originally, Krupp exploited blister steel production on a massive scale to maintain the quality of its cannons. Krupp switched to puddling only after years of testing in the 1870s.

Fig. 1 Krupp Cast Steel Works 1878 vs. the Cover of The Begum’s Fortune (aka The Begum’s Millions)

Krupp’s cast crucible steel of the 1870s for cannons was unique among other steel processes and cannon makers. Most militaries of the world were still using bronze and cast iron, which could be cast directly into a cannon body. At the time, steel could not be cast directly into a quality cannon body. The term  “Krupp cast crucible steel” can be misleading since cast steel blocks were forged into a cylindrical cannon body. The secret of Krupp’s process lay not only in the chemical processes but also in his forging operation, which utilized steam hammers. By today’s standards, the Krupp process was redundant and seemingly endless, with melting, reheating, rolling, hammering, and final forging stages. At the same time, Krupp was pioneering newer steel processes of Bessemer and open-hearth for other products, such as railroad rails and wheels, and plate armor, but never his cannons in the 1870s.

Mass steel production using puddling instead of the newer, cheaper processes of Bessemer and open-hearth was unique to Krupp’s cannon making in the late 1870s. His major competitors in France, England, Russia, and America were using the Bessemer process and moving toward open-hearth manufacture. One of the reasons was that Krupp’s iron sources were high in phosphorus, which embrittled steel, and Bessemer and open hearth at the time were not efficient at removing phosphorus, while puddling was.

A Krupp cast crucible steel cannon was the most feared worldwide because of its accuracy and range. Steelmaking, steam hammer forging, rifling, and breech loading were the four key factors contributing to the field superiority of Krupp’s cannon. Verne knew the superiority of Krupp’s crucible steel cannons through the Paris bombardment and France’s defeat in the Franco-Prussian War (1870-71).

In Verne’s Mysterious Island (1874), he highlights the cast steel breech-loading cannon but does not use the Krupp name (Verne, Mysterious Island, p. 482). In Begum’s Millions, Verne highlights this revolutionary breech-loading design and rifling, which was the signature design of the Krupp cast steel cannon (Verne, BM, p. 97).

At the time, Krupp’s cast crucible steel process was the biggest industrial secret in the world. One exhaustive study of the Krupp crucible cast steel showed that the full details of the Krupp process are still not fully understood (Barraclough, 1981). In Begum’s Millions (1879), Verne deals with the details of the casting of crucible steel. Verne features Krupp’s metallurgy and methods in 1879, a remarkable literary and research achievement.

The real historical stories of the quest to find Alfred Krupp’s secretive cast steel process were as fascinating as Verne’s fictional. The story of a spy in Begum’s Millions, Stahlstadt reads like the real-world struggle of competitors and their spies trying to discover Krupp’s secret process. Alfred Krupp required loyalty oaths from his workers, who were confined to their departments to prevent them from learning the overall process (Manchester, 1964, p. 157). Krupp maintained a large plant police force, posted guards between sections, and had roaming plant agents. Rarely was a worker transferred to a different department without demonstrating extreme loyalty. All of these are characterized in Verne’s novel. Krupp employed spies to watch his workers in the mill. If a worker left for another company, Krupp spies would follow. Surprisingly, Verne missed Krupp photographing employees for identification. Krupp used photography to collect engineering data on the competition at artillery exhibitions. Krupp also personally orchestrated and approved process photography at his own exhibitions for marketing and international expositions (Bosson, 2008).

Even today, the whole secret of cast crucible steel is not fully understood. Verne’s description appears to have an origin at least partially based on unauthorized notes from a French science editor who visited Krupp’s factory in 1865 (Michaelis, 1888. P.50). Verne described the same sketchiness as the published unauthorized tour notes of 1865 and 1888. It appears that when Krupp granted tours, they were purposely disorganized or organized to limit a complete understanding of the process. In 1878, Krupp hosted a special tour of military experts to help improve international business, but no French officials were allowed in (Menne, 2013, pp. 110-114). There doesn’t appear to be any detailed records of this 1878 tour until 1888.

Fig. 2. Krupp Cannon at 1876 Philadelphia Exhibition versus 1879 Verne Illustration

Krupp and Verne’s Schultze Cannon Making

The secret cannon-making required a complex factory of ironmaking, steelmaking, and steam-powered forges, presses, blooming mills, and rolling mills, not something Verne could have easily put together without detailed information. The reconstructed description by Verne of the Krupp process for high-quality cannon steelmaking steps was detailed in Begum’s Millions (1879). Verne’s literary technique to probe the secrets of the process was the search by a spy, Marcel Bruckmann, who was planted in Stahlstadt to find the secret. Verne’s spy takes samples of ore, steel, and slag while taking notes on the process. Verne’s spy espionage begins in the puddling section.

Verne applies puddling, a unique feature of the Krupp process at the time. Without Verne trying to emulate the Krupp operation, it would be unlikely for Verne’s fictional design not to incorporate the emerging Bessemer and open-hearth processes used in France, England, and America. There is an unusual connection between Krupp and Verne’s understanding and use of puddling. Verne’s spy Marcel Bruckmann describes puddling, mentioning the use of  “Chernoff’s rules,” a scientific detail that few would have known in 1879, except for metallurgists in Russian and German steelworks. Chernoff is clearly a misspelling or translation issue of the Russian metallurgist Dmitry Chernov. Chernov, in 1868, after studying the production of heavy guns at Obukhovsky Steel Foundry, published a paper in Russian on the necessary temperature control in puddling furnaces. The 1869 publication of this article is considered the date of the transformation of metallurgy from an art into a science (Golovin, 1968, pp. 335-340). It was translated into English and French in 1877.

The exchange of technology between Russia and Krupp was a mix of formal and informal exchanges (James, 2012, pp. 49-50). Since the 1860s, Russia had been the largest customer for Krupp, thereby granting the company access to its operations. One of Krupp’s significant advances in cannon making, which involved overlapping tube barrels as seen in Begum’s Millions’ illustrations, came at the insistence of Russian military engineers (Krupp Steel, 1912, p. 124). At the same time, Russia was determined to become independent of German cannons and had assembled a research center of the best metallurgists, similar to the Schneider-Creusot network. Krupp had its own counterpart spy group of metallurgists in the 1870s, which traveled around the world to monitor competitors (James, 2012, p. 45). Krupp had applied this Russian science to achieve exceptional quality. Verne demonstrates his understanding of the process and the science and metallurgy of puddling, such as temperature control, as seen in Begum’s Millions.

Puddling offered a quality steel to feed Krupp’s crucible furnace operation for massive cannons. Puddling is the process of converting pig iron to steel in a coal-fired reverberatory furnace. It was a labor-intensive process of hammering pasty iron balls into steel.Puddling was hard work, as Verne described using his spy character in Begum’s Millions. The problem was thatpuddling is limited to a direct and consolidated steel billet, typically ranging from 1 to 2 tons.Puddling could not directly produce a 330-ton batch of steel needed for Schultze’s cannon. This is where the Krupp crucible process was key. Puddled steel had to be remelted in crucibles to consolidate the homogeneous quantity of steel for cannons.

The puddling steel product required batches to be hammered into blooms and billets, and then rolled out into rods. These puddled rods were broken into pieces and packed into crucibles. For this part of the process, Verne’s description of packing the crucibles is somewhat lacking, but the melting and casting of these crucibles captures Verne’s full attention. Verne is amazed at the German precision of this part of the process. German precision was the heart of Krupp’s success in cannon making.

It took many crucibles of remelted steel to make cannons of 20 to 40 tons, the typical weight of Krupp’s 1870s cannons. These crucibles had to be blended into a large molten steel bath by simultaneously pouring them to produce large, homogeneous steel blocks to make cannons. The blending was done by pouring the crucibles into a clay channel that led to the ingot mold. In the 1850s, Krupp Steel developed timed simultaneous mixing and casting of many crucible furnaces, allowing for the homogeneous quantity of steel needed to make steel cannons. In his 1870 novel From Earth to the Moon, Verne uses the Krupp precision simultaneous discharge of 1200 furnaces to cast his gigantic 68,000-ton iron moon cannon.

 Many recall Krupp’s famous Great Exhibition of 1851 exhibit of steel cannons, but for engineers, it was not cannons that amazed but the largest steel ingot ever cast up to that point, weighing 4,300 pounds (approximately 2,000 kg), achieved with the simultaneous casting of 98 crucibles.

Fig. 3. An illustration of Krupp’s exhibition

Ironically, Krupp would exhibit a steel ingot of double the size, earning a gold medal at the Paris Exhibition of 1855. Krupp’s success led to the world’s largest and most powerful cannons, which would rain shells on Paris in 1870.

The Krupp cannon exhibited at the 1876 Philadelphia Centennial Exposition weighed 122 tons. Krupp’s 1892 cannon was 150 tons. Verne uses several pages to describe this precision casting method applied to crucible steelmaking in Begum’s Millions; Schultze’s cannon was 330 tons in Verne’s 1878 novel.

The final operation was forging the cannon from the cast steel block into a finished cannon cylinder. Krupp was the first to forge seamless tubes in the 1850s. Forging was required in the cast-crucible process to break up the cast steel microstructure, thereby reducing the fracture risk and improving strength. Forging was also a critical part of Krupp’s superiority in cannons.

Fig. 4. Krupp Hammer/press forge with cold center mandrel

Part of Krupp’s secret was upset forging of the steel block into cylinders by steam-powered presses and forging machines. A hole was drilled into the steel block and then forged with a cold mandrel. Krupp would build the world’s largest forging hammers. The length of Krupp’s cannon required several cylinders to be shrunk and forged to fit together, and this can be noted in the illustrations used in Begum’s Millions. Russian engineers had suggested this cylinder built-up of the cannon, but Krupp applied it and perfected it in the 1870s. Verne captures another advantage of Krupp’s cannon-making in his steam hammers for forging. Krupp built hundreds of steam hammers to forge his cannons and sell hammers around the world. Krupp maintained a huge drafting (engineering) department to improve its products continually. Verne’s novel reflects this when his spy gets stuck in Stahlstadt’s engineering department, designing endless types and sizes of steam hammers (Verne, Begum’s Millions, 1879, p. 83) Finally, there were intermediate annealing steps and a final machining for a rifled barrel and placement of his patented breech-loading system.

Fig. 5. Krupp Famous Steam Hammer of the 1870 “Fritz”

Interesting Comparisons: Schultze versus Alfred Krupp

The political subplot and literary imagery of Begum’s Millions have been discussed by several reviewers, and it makes for a fascinating study. Still, Krupp’s own personal struggles may be just as important and more interesting. Recent reviews feel that the character of Herr Schultze is clearly modeled after Alfred Krupp.2 This effort focuses on looking at Alfred Krupp (1812-1887), his company Krupp Steel, and his steel city of Essen as a model for Herr Schultze and Stahlstadt. Verne’s technical depth of the secret of Krupp cannon production is impressive, but just as important is his knowledge of Krupp the man. Krupp was known as an eccentric with a  “slew of anxieties: hypochondria, insomnia, and a phobia of everything from fire to suffocation from his own bodily gases” (Dirada, 2006, p. BW15).Verne also reveals his knowledge of the personal and operational functioning of Krupp Steel in the late 1870s. Finally, he knows Krupp, the man, and how he runs Krupp Steel. Verne had clearly studied Alfred Krupp, his factory, his steel city, Essen, and the Krupp Castle. Verne demonstrates his understanding of Alfred Krupp’s idiosyncrasies and personal events, which he incorporates into the story.

Fig. 6. Illustrations from Begum’s Millions

When Verne’s spy Bruckmann breaks into the frozen office of Schultze, he notes the electric light, but also notes a large candelabra. This again was an eccentric characteristic of Krupp, who used only pure tallow candles to light his living quarters, fearing suffocation by gas, which was the standard lighting vehicle in 1879. Such comparable details in Verne’s led to other possible plot items that might be considered coincidental except for the number of Krupp details already noted.

One interesting possibility is the incorporation of Krupp’s fear of asphyxiation by carbon dioxide in Verne’s novel. Krupp hated drafts, so he permanently closed windows, requiring him to build a special ventilation system for his castle. Still, Krupp came to believe that his ventilation system could not prevent the buildup of carbon dioxide. Krupp was a hypochondriac who was said to  “be a night ghost hunting his castle sniffing for traces of carbon dioxide” (Manchesster, 1964, p. 140). While Alfred Krupp did not die of asphyxiation, Verne’s Herr Schultze would die from carbon dioxide asphyxiation. This accidental asphyxiation of Herr Schultze was a result of the plan to use a mass destruction cannon shell using carbon dioxide asphyxiation on his rival city of France-Ville. In an earlier chapter, a thirteen-year-old child died from carbon dioxide asphyxiation because of a poor mine ventilation system, and later, Herr Schultze threatened to asphyxiate a spy while he slept.

Chapter 15,  “The San Francisco Stock Exchange,” feels that it was adapted, modified, or added to the original manuscript. Yet it accurately mimics the critical period of Alfred Krupp’s life during the international financial and stock market Panic of 1873. Verne sets up the financial and stock market crisis of chapter 15 as  “a natural consequence of… this concentration of all power in one person” (Verne, Begum’s Millions, 1879, p. 156). Schultze’s greatest fear, like Krupp’s, was to lose control of his company. Krupp’s sole ownership led Krupp Steel to the brink of bankruptcy in the mid-1870s. A depressed Krupp took his exit from the public to avoid reporters. Like Schultze, Krupp was involved in a possible Central Bank takeover. Krupp could not get bank loans until a banking association was formed with the government’s help to save him. Krupp was forced to sign a “shameful” document that required some sharing of authority among the company bankers (Manchester, 1964, p. 140-150).

The literary image of the novel’s guarding giants, Arminius and Sigimer, has been studied, and their link to mythical characters and German politics has been noted. Additionally, they reflect the company police force of Alfred Krupp, which was used to guard the manufacturing secrets and maintain order and adherence to Alfred Krupp’s company rules.

With the organization of Stahlstadt’s steel factory, Verne again demonstrates an extensive knowledge of Krupp’s factory in the 1870s. Most of Verne’s organizational description of the Stahlstadt appears to have come from Krupp’s General Directive of 1872. Many of these details were unique to Krupp’s Essen operation. Verne, like Krupp, uses sectors (departments) and shops for operation layout and a hierarchy of foremen, section chiefs, and directors, as well as using military ranking. More interesting is the role of the foreman in the organization, which reflects the changes at Krupp in the 1870s. Krupp thus started to use the foreman as an integral part of the organization in the 1870s. Verne incorporates the employee development role of the foremen in the story to allow his spy to be moved from the department and promoted up the hierarchy (Verne, Begum’s Millions, 1879, pp. 58-84). Verne was also aware of Alfred Krupp’s unusual hybrid hierarchy of civilian titles and military ranks, as noted in the promotion of his spy, Marcel Bruckmann, to lieutenant in Chapter 7 (Verne, Begum’s Millions, 1879, p. 82).

The story also reflects the arms race and the French fears of Germany. The France-Ville, in Chapter 10, was probably written by Paschal Grousset (1845–1909) rather than Jules Verne. Translator Stanford Luce references a letter from Verne to his editor stating:  “I don’t see any differences between the city of steel and the city of well-being” (Verne, Begum’s Millions, 1879, p. 213, note 1). It was probably Verne who emphasized the government’s control of living regulations in France-Ville in the chapter for contrast, suggesting there was little difference between the paternalism of Krupp and the totalitarian application of social democracy, which Verne portrayed as feudal. Of course, France-Ville was truly a socialist state with a free health system, free healthy activities, and restrictive government regulations to control environmental issues such as smoke, which reflects Grousset’s political view, but Verne’s political view is more moderate. Verne had, early on in his 1863 novel Paris in the 20th Century, presented a similar mixed political approach.

While many see Begum’s Millions as a conflict between France and Germany, which certainly fits well, Krupp’s writings, employee edicts, and documents addressed the comparison between social democracy, which was gaining traction across Europe, and his own counter-philosophy of paternal capitalism. This narrative would also reflect Verne’s fictional struggle between France-Ville and Stahlstadt. Krupp’s paternalism is evident in Verne’s Stahlstadt, as seen in employee technical training, paternal care by foremen, pensions, and family employment, all of which were practiced by Krupp.

Another Schultze-Krupp comparison is the use of disabled workers. When Marcel Bruckmann comes to enter Schultze’s central living area, Verne emphasizes that the guard was “an invalid with a wooden leg and a chest full of medals” (Verne, Begum’s Millions, 1879, p. 53). Not surprisingly, Alfred Krupp was a national advocate of employing disabled veterans of the Franco-Prussian War. Krupp, in a letter, asked for disabled veterans to be hired so they are not  “supported like beggars” using government charity (Berdrow, 1930, p. 267). This type of government unemployment benefit was at the heart of social democracy. Krupp was known in Germany for assigning any disabled or injured employee to light-duty jobs.

In reality, Krupp’s paternal organization had characteristics of both Verne’s Stahlstadt and France-Ville. Krupp provided extensive educational benefits, low-cost housing, medical care, and pensions. The difference was in the delivery to the workers (socialism versus paternalism).

Areas of Future Research and Analysis

Verne’s demonstration of his knowledge of Krupp’s metallurgical process and Krupp’s personal behavior suggests a possible deeper presence of Krupp in Begum’s Millions. Many have viewed the novel as a comparison between the dystopia of Stahlstadt and the more utopian model of France-Ville. Others have seen it as the arms race and political struggle between France and Germany. If you look at the novel through the eyes of Alfred Krupp of the 1870s, other themes emerge. Germany of the 1870s was like the rest of Europe, struggling with social democracy and Marxism, and Krupp’s own factory was no exception. Marxists were actively trying to win over Krupp’s workers. Alfred Krupp was passionate about stopping the rise of social democracy in Europe and Germany, a sentiment that is evident in the story. Certainly, France-Ville could also have represented the social democracy movement. Krupp published numerous letters to his employees and to the rulers of Germany on this matter. Alfred Krupp’s address to his employees on February 11, 1877 might well explain the struggle between France-Ville/ Sarrasin and Stahlstadt / Schultze portrayed in the novel (Krupp, 1877, GHDI). Also in the 1870s, the world was locked in a struggle for control of production, as reflected in the rise of socialism and capitalism.

Herr Schultze demonstrates the biggest fear of capitalists worldwide: the loss of control over production. In America, renowned steel titans such as Andrew Carnegie and Henry Clay Frick were frequently criticized for being greedy and anti-union (Skrabec, 2012, p. 21). However, like Alfred Krupp, the real story of opposing unions was not so much about money as it was about control over how the factory was run. In this respect, these capitalists, like those in Verne’s fictional world, feared unions, shareholders, and bankers alike. In this, their paternalism was an effort to gain loyalty. There is much material in Begum’s Millions to explore this basic premise further.

Verne’s description of Schultze does present him as a fearful, even evil, man. However, in describing France-Ville, the reader gets a sense of a very rigid approach, where the government knows best, reminiscent of Krupp’s criticism of social democracy. There are also hints of some of the positive aspects of Krupp’s competing ideal of paternal capitalism, such as education and a paternal approach to employees. In a way, both models are feudal in nature. A view of the novel might consider the story not only as a comparison but also as an exploration of how the two political approaches might be merged for the common good, as Verne suggests in the ending.

Conclusion

Verne borrowed heavily from Aldred Krupp and his steel town in writing Begum’s Millions (1879). Much of the storyline and subplots can be linked to the Krupp legacy, such as competitors’ industrial spying, plant layout, company secrecy methods, European paternalism, the rise of social democracy and Marxism, and technological advances. A major subplot involved an industrial spy’s search of Herr Schultze’s steelworks, which was based on the real international espionage by countries such as France and England to uncover the 19th century’s greatest industrial secret: the Krupp cast crucible steel cannon process. Verne’s description of the secret crucible steel process was visionary and well researched for the state of public knowledge in the 1870s. There are also interesting comparisons and potential connections between Schultze and Alfred Krupp for further research.

NOTES

  1. The most common title used is Begum’s Fortune, however it was first published as 500 Millions of the Begum. I have chosen the title Begum’s Millions to use because the Luce’s translation is what I used as a base for comparison.
  2. Review by Michael Dirda, Washington Post, Sunday, March 5, 2006; Page BW15.

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Quentin R.Skrabec Jr. is a full-time researcher in engineering futurism, Jules Verne, Victorian science, the intersection of culture and engineering, and metallurgical studies. His education includes a BS in engineering from the University of Michigan, an MS in engineering from Ohio State, and a Ph.D. in manufacturing management from the University of Toledo. He has appeared on both PBS and the History Channel. He has published over 100 articles and 25 books in science, science fiction, and engineering.


The 2025 Hugo and Nebula Nominees



The 2025 Hugo and Nebula Nominees

The Editorial Collective

The following is an edited discussion from our Discord site, wherein each of us who had the opportunity to read a given novel had the chance to comment on it. The questions at stake here are what each novel says about the state of SF in these times, and whether and how it did or not deserve a nomination for a major award. We begin with a more general discussion, then move to each text in turn. Some texts are absent because nobody had the opportunity to read them.


Ian Campbell: Could each of you please drop a couple of paragraphs giving your take on the awards nominees and winners overall? What do these picks say about the state of the discourse? What is your take on how so many of these are way more fantasy than SF?

Dominick Grace: I have read only three of the nominees. Of them, Only Adrian Tchaikovsky’s Alien Clay really qualifies as SF. Vajra Chandrasekera’s Rakesfall has SF elements but might be better considered as science-fantasy, or perhaps as slipstream. John Wiswell’s Someone You Can Build a Nest In is straight medievalesque fantasy—set on an Earth-analogous world without conforming particularly realistically to medieval Earth in terms of politics or social practices. To be frank, when reviewing the list of nominees, I had a difficult time choosing which ones to read for our discussion, since few of them seemed to me to be SF—those on the Hugo list perhaps slightly more so. (While I prefer SF to Fantasy, I like fantasy fine, but I do tend to think that an SF award should go to a book within the genre). My impression from the list and without a comprehensive review of the books published in 2024 is that SF seems to be on the decline, at least in literary form, with fantasy or hybrid genre works emerging as more prevalent. I am inclined to think that the general swing to the right, not only (but especially, certainly) in the USA, is a factor in this shift. SF can be a hopeful genre, but even in hopeful mode it tends to have a critical perspective on the real world. While fantasy can also have such a perspective, it is much more free to offer escape rather than confrontation with an increasingly uncomfortable reality.

That Wiswell’s novel won the Nebula is for me the clearest indication that, in the case of that awards committee, at least, an implausible normalizing of the other via true love outweighs serious consideration of the real and concerning issue of the (mis)treatment of non-binary, trans, and other atypical people in contemporary Western society.

The novel uses a shape-changing monster that identifies as “she” and who breeds by planting eggs in a human, which eggs upon hatching then consume the host, as a metaphor for the queer other. Rather a risky move, but not so much when the novel simply hand-waves the problems away when the creature, Shesheshen, finds true love and conveniently has her eggs destroyed, so she won’t have to face whether using her love as an incubator will be necessary.

Indeed, even the most narratively complex of these three books, Rakesfall, fails (IMO) to offer any deep or thought-provoking commentary on our postmodern, post-truth world, preferring instead to use a glib narrative voice (a failing of all three books I read, actually) and metafictional/self-reflexive and linguistically playful style—which, to me as a reader, anyway, blunts most of the claim to serious speculation the novel might have had. It has a lot of fascinating and complex ideas in it but just doesn’t seem to do much with them.

So, my feeling based on what I have read is that we seem to be moving into (or back into) a world in which the “award-worthy” books give themselves some contemporary relevance by touching on current hot-button topics (LGBTQ, for instance, or post-truth authoritarian America, as Tchaikovsky is clearly doing in Alien Clay) but which focus more on being entertaining/amusing than thought-provoking.

Leimar Garcia-Siino: I think you’ve hit it right on the head, Dom. In fact, I might go a bit further and say it comes across as a little performative, not the novels themselves, but on the part of the awarding committees. They’re seeing a novel with queer people in it, and nominating it just because. If it had been yet another vampire/werewolf/demon/monster hetpair, it would likely have been overlooked. Could it also, in part, be a result of politics? SF has always skewed political, and things are really effed right now. Is it that there’s fewer SF novels or is it the Hugos trying to keep the peace?

Dominick: That is an intriguing thought. I doubt that politics is gone from the genre, but I did not read much new this year, so it could well be that there are still books like that, but they didn’t get nominated. To be Fair, Alien Clay is political, but its narrative voice is so arch and self-aware that (for me, anyway), the novel’s seriousness gets somewhat blunted.

Virginia L. Conn: I have to agree with Dom and Leimar here about the general state of awarded SF (I hesitate to say the state of SF in general) on two fronts: one, the general decline of what I would consider “science fiction” as a result of the global shift towards the right, and two, the (perhaps) overcorrection of the awards committee and readers to reward those publications that, from an identity perspective, resist that rightward shift.

So there’s a few things going on here that I think contribute to the aforementioned problems, many of which are not necessarily “literary” in nature. The primary issue—and the issue from which most others grow—is that at a cultural level we’re experiencing a collective loss of hope in the possibilities afforded by “the future” (as an abstract concept) and the role of either technoscientific or sociopolitical developments to measurably improve outcomes. It might be painting with too broad a brush to say that SF authors, readers, and scholars are more critical of technology than the general public (certainly there are far too many techno-optimists to make a blanket statement like this, anyway), but it’s almost inarguable that the real-life technological developments available over the last, say, five years have almost all come with their fair share of detriments along with whatever labor-saving or quality-of-life improvements they offer. How can you be excited about the possibility of artificial intelligence or its transformative possibilities when we know that it has accelerated ecological destruction at a staggering rate; functions only by incorporating and erasing the work of millions of practicing artists and creators; encodes and reproduces human biases while naturalizing them as “objective;” and has functionally destroyed the neural pathways, dopamine receptors, memory capacity, and critical thinking skills of an entire generation in a few short years of exposure?

Even though SF doesn’t necessarily need to focus on technology (or even necessarily science, however we might want to define that), it seems fairly correlative that increased suspicion of the technological agents typically associated with progress, futurity, and/or development would result in writers, readers, and awarders being suspicious of and turning away from any text that does foreground these elements. Thus, the escapism of fantasy.

The other major social element from which a lot of these issues stem is a loss of societal “objectivity”—if (IF) we understand SF as something that estranges us from the world, that means we have to have a shared understanding of that world in the first place. There’s been an explosion of research over the last few decades showing a precipitous decline in public trust in social institutions (see the Pew Research Report’s multi-decade investigation into public trust in government if you want to be shaken down to your boots) and an increased siloing of opinions. How can a piece of media estrange us if we’re already living in conceptually different worlds? Again, it’s easier to displace the narrative and not deal with the reality on the ground, as well as much safer in terms of not antagonizing different identity groups, if authors don’t assume a shared world from which it is possible to be estranged at all.

Which leads to the last point, which I think Leimar already addressed nicely. We (I’m using an inclusive we [that I know has many exceptions] to refer to SF fans, authors, readers, awarders, reviewers, publishers, etc.) WANT to live in a world where queer people, trans people, people of color, religious and ethnic and cultural minorities, the disabled, the neurodivergent, the Other, etc. etc. etc. have a place in the future we’re imagining (a good one, at that). So often, however, this desire to engage with different kinds of identities and lived experiences becomes flanderized as an impulse to ONLY show uncomplicatedly “good” characters, storylines, or outcomes, with anything else being labeled problematic. I didn’t read Someone You Can Build a Nest In, but based on y’all’s discussion of it, I wish they’d depicted Shesheshen as a predator. That would’ve made for a much more exciting and interesting story.

Pretending that queer or trans people are ubiquitously good or unproblematic or simple does an incredible disservice to the nuances of people’s lived experiences and is just as objectifying as pretending they’re all straightforwardly evil or immoral. It seems as if their very inclusion (and especially when their experience OF their identity is the focus) is enough to be considered for an award. If we can’t grapple with complicated identities or experiences, then all that’s left is a fantasy world whether it’s intended to be fantastic or not.

Leimar: Yes to all of this, Virginia! AND, to complicate matters even more, because we’re still in the (relative) beginning stages of queerness reaching mainstream culture, ‘queer’ stories are still being largely told about queerness instead of with individuals who happen to be queer. This makes this one single aspect of identity and humanity the main or even sole defining characteristic. Which means, we [at mainstream levels] still can’t tell stories where queer or trans people are not ubiquitously good or problematic. Look at the travesty that is Emilia Pérez, where her transness and her criminality get horrendously intertwined!

Maybe in part it’s also because we [contemporary society] are so bad at discussing “other”: it’s all one big bucket, so that a “bad” person is as much “other” as a neurodivergent person, or non-white person, or queer person, etc. Which then, if I may indulge in some shower-thoughts thinking, kind of circles back to SF and estrangement. What is or isn’t SF right now? The richest person in the world tinkered with his platform’s AI so much it’s now calling itself MechaHitler and it’s about to get installed into the self-driving death machines. Concentration camps are being used in the US and we’re on the brink of civil war. The whole world right now is either on fire or flooding, while corporations lay off thousands of employees in favor of AI. What is the “self” that SF is to reflect back to us—who are we??—and what is the “other”?

Dominick: This last point hits on what I found something of a weakness in Alien Clay. Initially, the complex alien symbiotic creature(s) seemed to me delightfully alien, even though I knew where the plot was going. By the end, however, their integration with the human seems not to make much of a fundamental difference to humanness—it just seems to offer a greater sense of connectedness with, and a greater knowledge of, other humans, with Tchaikovsky going to some lengths to try to take the curse of mind control or a hive mind off the table. So, the “other” basically just ends up being able to show us a better version of the “we”—those “we” who stand for free thought and workers’ rights, of course, and those “others” of “we” that “we” can be morally and ethically certain of not being a good ideological fit justly destroyed, natch.

Leimar: Pivoting the discussion, after reading through several of the descriptions and responses to the other novels, I’m getting the impression most fall under “very interesting idea, poorly executed”, and the reasons tend to suggest an amateurishness, immaturity, or outright bad writing practices on the part of the authors. I have to wonder about the state of publishing houses and their in-house editors—are they not giving authors good feedback? This is frankly something I’ve been noticing for a few years. It’s not that any of these novels’ premises is lacking: they seem to be offering interesting takes and world dynamics that unfortunately go underdeveloped and even invalidated by the handling of the plot.

Dominick: I agree, and will whisper, the same is increasingly true of academic writing: I am often appalled at the quality of the writing I see in pieces I am asked to referee or to review.

Ian: I’ve noticed this with both academic writing and fiction. I think that for younger people, a work of fiction seems somewhat inauthentic if it’s not told in kind of a snarky, informal tone. I blame fanfic, which I find absolutely unreadable in general but millions of people would disagree. As for academic writing, I actually kind of welcome it, not bad quality writing but a somewhat less formal tone. I’m writing a book chapter here in the background, and I had already noted that I now write in a much more conversational tone than I would have five years ago. Generally shorter and less complex sentences, not using fifty-cent academic words unless I really need to, that sort of thing.

A good specific answer would be contractions. I used to feel it necessary to turn it’s into it is, but no longer care, and then I got pushback from a book editor a couple of years ago, that would I go and change all the contractions, and was kind of baffled as to why it was important. I did manage to get a y’all’d’ve into a journal article recently, and really enjoyed that.

Leimar: I agree that it’s almost definitely the fault of fanfiction. And don’t get me wrong, I love fanfiction, I’ve been reading it for 25 years, and have written it too. But fanfiction is meant to be indulgent: it’s intrinsically an act of indulgence. It’s desire: for certain fictional relationships, for plotlines, to be part of it, to participate and belong within the thing you like. And that’s fine; that’s the purpose of that medium. But SF fiction has the potential to be waaaay more than that: to be unconstrained by indulgent desire. But I guess if all you’re reading is self-indulgent fanficky stuff (and, let’s be honest, most pop fiction is this anyway), then it’s harder for authors to distance themselves from those impulses.

Dominick: I have no objection to academic writing that eschews prolixity and generally obfuscatory terminology (heh). When I say bad writing, I mean things such as subject/verb agreement problems, basic confusion of vocabulary (e.g. I have seen palate for palette more than once), mixed constructions, word choice errors, etc.—the sort of thing I spent my career trying to beat out of my students (well, not literally). Every now and then, I will see some term in a paper or book I’m reviewing, scratch my head, check a few dictionaries, do a Google search, and eventually just add a comment that says, “?”

Ian: Oh, I see what you mean. A lot of what I review is people writing in English about literature in Arabic, and who usually aren’t native speakers of English, so I usually overlook all that unless the overall document is unreadable. Mostly, my response to the journal will focus on their argument, and then I’ll say “and the whole thing needs a copyedit by someone fluent in both English and this person’s native language”. So my sample of writing by native English speakers is likely skewed.

James Knupp: My overall impression of this year’s nominees both based on what I’ve read personally and everyone’s reviews here, is that the fandom overall is taking a very hard shift into fantasy or very light sci fi. I have multiple ideas for why this is happening, but chiefly among them is the current political climate driving to the right and fandom being more often left leaning. The big villains of real life right now tend to be right wing politicians and tech billionaires. New tech innovations today are often only celebrated by other tech execs and such as the way they’re utilized in people’s daily lives actually makes things lower quality, more stressful, etc. It’s very tempting to retreat into a genre where those tech innovations don’t need to be part of the narrative. I’ve been reading a lot of 80s and 90s sci fi recently on my quest to finish all the Hugo and Nebula winners, and it’s striking how much those novels are about new ventures and overcoming the downsides of advancement but acknowledging their realities. You’re not seeing a lot of that now in regards to current tech.

As for quality of the actual writing, I have to echo the sentiment others have said that fanfic has heavily influenced things. I’m not a fanfic person, but I have read plenty of it and listened to many successful authors go on about how much fanfic opened the doors for many current authors. And I think that’s genuinely good, but it feels like we’re getting to the point of the machine feeding itself. You have authors who started off doing fanfic, and then their readers did fanfic of them and became authors themselves, and the style became fixed into a main one of the genre.

It’s already been touched on that there’s a lot of POC and LGBTQ representation in this year and recent years. The only addition to that I really have is that I think we’re seeing maybe a peak of the backlash to the Sad Puppies campaigns from several years ago. People took that movement very personally and retreated into their fandoms in a protective manner. That movement was gross and deserved to be purged like it was, but it definitely has made people probably more aware of representation in awards than they used to be. Whether this is an overcorrection or not is not for me to say, but it’s just my theory.

Ian: I agree that a lot of the shift into fantasy has to do with an overall sourness toward tech—a sourness I think is completely justified. We live in a particularly grim Black Mirror episode these days, where all innovation is sucked up by about four corporations and immediately enshittified and/or turned against us. I don’t use Facebook all that much, but I have all kinds of filters installed on it over and above my regular adblockers, so nearly all of what I see is just what my friends are up to. Install the FB Purity extension, though it doesn’t work on a phone. But I was at my dad’s house and actually needed to find something on Facebook, and logged in, and my gods what a horror of ads and right-wing drivel. I don’t think there are a meaningful number of fans out there who really still think that technological innovation is going to make things better. Therefore, all SF has to be Candy-Coated Happiness(tm) or else a grim fighting retreat against encroaching authoritarianism—and Palantír is spying on all the kids who might Hunger Games the
whole thing.

Another reason for the turn toward fantasy is that mid-tier fantasy is a lot easier to write than mid-tier SF. You’ve got to do your research to write quality SF, even if you’re willing to handwave things like FTL travel, but for fantasy, so long as it’s internally consistent, it holds together just fine even if the central premise is ludicrous. I think this is an undermentioned aspect of the turn toward fantasy.

With respect to representation, it’s both the blowback to the Puppies and also a form of recognition that SF blatantly excluded writers who weren’t white men for decades, and that we ought to foreground other folks as a form of recompense. As a journal editor whose last name is Campbell, I feel a real responsiblity to make sure we’re not doing that sort of exclusion. And the truth of the matter is, I like SF from other cultures or perspectives. I don’t care if Space Captain Chadjaw is into dudes instead of women: if it’s a well-told story, that’s great. Do I want to read explicit same-sex sex scenes? No, but I don’t want to read straight ones, either. Same goes for SF from previously-colonized cultures: it’s valuable to read these perspectives. In fact, the only thing I really liked about Rakesfall was how it put Sri Lankan mythology/history in there and didn’t sugarcoat it or explain it too much. Deal with it, blanco—or however you say blanco in their language.

But to paraphrase Virginia, the problem with representation is that it often leads to a lack of dramatic tension. If your book is going to center on (say) trans people, then I know from the minute I pick up on it what the dramatic stakes are: nobody is going to write a novel where the trans people are the villains, because the uproar would wreck them. Though in point of fact it would be interesting to have an SF society where gender fluidity is the norm and the guy who just wants to Be A Man is oppressed. Iain M. Banks’ The Player of Games does a decent job with this, where everyone else in the Culture thinks the protagonist is a real weirdo because he’s never been a woman. To be clear, I’m not saying that we should have villainous trans, or black, or indigenous or whatever, people as a group, but I also think that we’ve not yet got to the point where most writers feel free to put in a major role a person from an oppressed group who also happens to be a terrible person.

Someone to Build a Nest In

Ian: This was the winner, somehow, so let’s begin with it.

Dominick: I found it unimpressive. Not bad, just… well, meh. The plot becomes increasingly implausible as the book proceeds, most notably with how Homily seems so easily to swallow (no pun intended) the fact that her beloved eats her dead sister (murdered by Homily—but it’s ok, she deserved it) in front of her, and then disguises herself as said dead sister. Sorry, spoilers. The inherently destructive nature of the creature is conveniently disposed of when the only eggs she ever has get used to poison the evil monster, thereby avoiding the thorny issue of the necessity of breeding by planting eggs in a human body that will, you know, get eaten by the eggs, which will then go at each other until only one survives. Instead, by the end, we have a “monster” (and tiny protoplasmic offshoot) saved by love, with a hint of masochistic self-loathing.

The writing is uneven—if anything, weakening as the book proceeds. I’m not too worried by some of the violations of realistic depictions of a medievalesque environment—I suppose you can imagine a medieval world rife with silly superstitions and a healthy fear of the other that nevertheless is ok with LGBTQ+ folk, complete with terminology such as enby and allosexual—but I do tend to trip over medievalesque folk talking about goons (a 20th century American word) or things getting hairy. The politics of normalizing different sexualities is fine, but I don’t feel like the book gets beyond the level of an after-school special level of addressing those politics. (Do they still make after-school specials, or am I talking to the ancient?)

Leimar: Just finished it: by the end, I was begging for release! I’m going to try to form some cohesive and reasonable thoughts on it as opposed to a rant (although it’s so underwhelmingly meh that I’m not sure I could even muster a rant).

The good: The premise of the novel is, I think, quite interesting and unique, though certainly has tendrils (hehe) from other narratives. I very much appreciate the attempt at centering a fantasy story around the monstrous creature, and to have them have a conception of family and love that is alien to us humans. I also like the attempts at representing queerness (though I agree with you Dom, that representing queerness as the monstrous other is problematic). But the ideas of genderlessness and genderqueerness, of gay love, and of asexuality, being shown as not what’s outside the norm is refreshing. Homily isn’t mistreated by her family for being gay and Shesheshen’s concerns about her relationship with Homily is less about her being asexual than about her not knowing “how to human”.

I think that if I was in the 13-15 age bracket, I would enjoy the novel a lot more (i.e., if I had less experience reading good fiction). Outside of the gore (and, maybe it’s that I’m old enough to remember when descriptions of bodies being torn apart weren’t considered too much for teenagers), the novel is extremely easy to read—mostly uncomplicated and uninteresting in its narrative style. I would definitely have thought it was YA.

The not so good/meh/ugh: I said mostly uncomplicated, and that’s true generally. There are passages, though, of painful “cleverness” that come across as amateurish, tryhard, and self-indulgent. For example, early in their travels, Homily and Shesheshen encounter some highway robbers. Their names are Aristocracy, Kleptocracy, and Plutocracy. As Shesheshen considers killing them, the narration (which is supposed to be from her point of view) quips: “If she thrust two bones out through her shoulder and under the man’s wooden mask, through that collar, Plutocracy would bleed out before he could define his form of government.” The levels of cringe are off the charts! These kinds of ridiculous sentences occur throughout, and it’s jarring how it disrupts suspension of disbelief entirely. Then there’s Homily’s family, and her siblings: Catharsis, Epigram, and Ode. [pain pain pain] Later, at the end of the novel, when Homily and Shesheshen have a “child”, it’s named Epilogue. How clever. Gold star.

However, what makes the novel a slog for me is the nonsensical plot choices, the fanficky ship writing style, the way what should be difficult and compelling problems are waved away, and the atonal jumps from overly sentimental feeliest-feelings that ever were felt to absurdist comedy. Homily is injured and is bleeding out and Shesheshen needs to take her somewhere safe so she employs the help of Laurent—a wealthy young man who likes being threatened(??) and who had previously tried to kill her—to go to her cave-ruins and make it hospitable. When she and Homily arrive, the area has been cleaned, and now there’s candles and throw rugs everywhere!

Or when Homily and Shesheshen stay at a tavern and the latter, who barely interacts with humans except to eat them, decides the thing to do right then would be to dance with Homily, because she’s so pretty. It reads like clumsy fanfiction. And don’t get me started with the ways Ode and Epigram are dealt with, or the reveal about the Baroness, or Shesheshen’s egg-sac, or the sudden I actually want to keep this accidental clone-offspring as a child thing.

So, yeah. Long story short, it wasn’t my cup of tea and I struggle to understand how this is award-worthy.

Ian: Up to a certain point, I was willing to accept the twee. I get it, you’re trying to mimic the Gideon the Ninth tone or something fanfic adjacent, I’ll roll with it for a while. I agree that the initial conceit was pretty good: let’s tell the story from the monster’s POV.

But it couldn’t stick to this, at all. Give me the monster’s POV, and since it’s been clearly established that the monster hibernates until it’s time to eat, then sneaks to the edge of town and vanishes someone, then by consequence the monster has to be almost completely ignorant of human culture. At first, this is done reasonably well: we can figure that the one part of human culture the monster does know is knights/warriors showing up to try to kill her, so even if she gets a bunch of it wrong, it’s still within the bounds of good storytelling. Once she gets to town, however, she knows way too much way too quickly about human culture. I kept saying how does the hibernating monster have any idea about this, let alone the correct idea? I quickly became more and more disappointed—and it wasn’t as if the book was remotely award-worthy to begin with. Now, it was verging on just bad fanfic.

And then I got to that exact scene, about the candles and throw rugs, and was just like oh hells no and put it down.

I’m having trouble understanding how so many of these janky, poorly-written books get nominated for awards. This can’t possibly be the cream of the crop. None of them is quite as bad as The Terraformers, which I’m still salty about, but there’s no universe in which this novel should have been within sniffing distance of an award nomination. Like, it could have been made comic that the monster had no idea how to act like a human. But they had a dance-off and suddenly she’s got expertise in socializing. Gah.

[we are merciful and will spare you our exchange of cat pictures]

Leimar: On the subject of queerness, I feel Wiswell, rather unwittingly (and I don’t know how the other novels do, as I didn’t have a chance to read them), painted himself into a corner by wanting the happy ending. If the monstrous protagonist is a queer representative, then the message being sent (again, I think, unintentionally by him) is that if queer folks are so monstrously other, we should exorcise parts of what makes us different (and dangerous?), and conform to some kind of nuclear family structure. Two parents and baby makes three!

Dominick: Yep, that’s how it felt to me. There MUST have been a better way to solve the problem, assuming the use of a human-eating shape-shifter as your queer stand-in, than basically wishing it away.

Leimar: Even using fanficky tropes, I actually would have preferred if Homily was given the choice to become a nest and she was like, “you know what? I’m not entirely opposed”, and then they discovered (again, fanficky-deus-ex-machina type) that what Shesheshen had misunderstood was the extent of “making a nest inside someone”: that there’s a safe way to do it. Maybe something to do with how she healed Homily. Anything, anything! would be better than destroy the eggs and completely abandon your deepest belief about family.

I’d also be more charitable toward it if he had explored what should be a self-shattering revelation for Shesheshen (but the narrative doesn’t actually delve into Homily’s familial abuse either except as oooooh it’s soooo sad! her family is awful!). It would have been nice if both of them had a conversation about how both of them created these unhealthy conceptions of love, family, and duty as a result of their parents’ abuse and selfishness. But nope.

Dominick: Agreed. Since Shesheshen’s personal experience of birth is all we really have to go on, and it was evidently abnormal, there was certainly room for a resolution that fell between Homily getting eaten and the magic hand-waving. Not sufficiently thought through, perhaps because “love” is supposed to be enough?

Ian: I put the book down about a third of the way through, so I was still reading it as a fairy tale from the monster’s POV, not as an estrangement of queerness. In my defence, most of the queer people I know are anything but predatory, so I wasn’t really making the link; I was just trying and failing to make it through a book that had an interesting premise but absolutely failed to deliver. Now that I reflect upon it, I can see where you’re coming from, but it makes the book seem even less well-constructed. Just like black folks typically know way more about white culture than white folks do about black culture, queer folks typically know way more about straight culture than the converse. This is a matter of survival: know enough, and you’re likelier to be able to see trouble coming when you encounter the hostile parts of those cultures. So it would have made way more sense from the start to have the monster know about human culture, in order to make the parallel. Don’t get me wrong: queer people are under real and serious threat in the real world by this gang of evil clowns, so it makes sense for the awards committee to want to foreground this and respond to it. I just didn’t think the book was worth finishing, let alone rewarding.

Alien Clay

Dominick: Narrator/narrative voice: irritating. Not sure why so many writers these days seem to think their narrators should have a glib, bantery way of speaking, even when describing horrific events. Tchaikovsky does speak to this briefly when he has his narrator say that if he wasn’t trying to be funny about it, he’d be crying. But then, that just foregrounds my second problem with the narrative voice: who is the narrator telling this story to? First person narratives usually don’t invite that question, but Tchaikovsky does; he makes his narrator address the implied reader, as here from chapter 22: “I’m jumping ahead now, I know. But there are more tales of the march to come, don’t worry.” Now, maybe in the last 40 pages, I will discover that there is indeed an audience, but so far, all these nods to I’m telling a story of what happened are just (to me) inessential nods to meta.

I am fond of first contact stories, so the fact that this story addresses contact with a profoundly alien life and tracks the difficulty in coming to understand it/an understanding with it, appeals to me. Tchaikovsky acknowledging that the typical human approach is profoundly flawed is also a good touch (burn the vegetation, don’t even really consider that maybe killing everything to study it isn’t great). The Mandate, with its ideology trumps fact approach to science, is also timely, given the egregious politicization of science we have been seeing recently, not to mention the authoritian trend in certain governments. Nevertheless, the Mandate seems (with 40 pages left to complicate this) like a pretty cookie-cutter tyranny. All I can really say about it is, it believes humanity is the centre of the universe, and science should prove that; and that everything is binary: you are with us or an enemy, etc. And as for the plot itself, I doubt I am alone in figuring out what was actually going on with Kiln life within the first several chapters (again, there are 40 pages or so that could pull that rug from under me, but I doubt it will happen). So, despite the premise being one I liked, the book doesn’t really offer any surprises. I still am liking it better than Rakesfall and Someone, but it seems not much more of an award-worthy book. Since Tchaikowsky seems to bang out two or three books a year, I guess I shouldn’t be surprised to find something formulaic and underdeveloped in this one.

Ian: His book about a fantasy M*A*S*H* military hospital is actually really good.

Dominick: I’ve now finished the book, and nothing in the final pages substantially changes what I’d said already. The final chapters perhaps try too hard to pound the point in, about colonialism and what it can breed, and the resistance of those colonized by the planet they tried to tame leading to a reverse expedition is the ending I entirely expected. The novel plays somewhat interestingly with the long-standing notion of alien invasion in the form of entities—pods, spores, whatever—that can insert themselves into humans and, maybe, turn them into something else. Still not, IMO, an award-worthy book.

Asunder

Ian: This was my favorite among all these, and a much better-written book than all of them. I would have absolutely voted for it as the winner. Would I necessarily have picked up a fantasy quasi-romance novel were it not part of this awards discussion? Probably not, but I’m glad I did.

The novel is set in the fairly typical basically medieval but made early modern by magic type of fantasy world. Environmentally more or less identical to Earth, inhabited also by an indigenous or authochthonous set of quasi-deities who were then hunted more or less to extinction by an invading/colonizing society. There’s also another set of aliens? demons? who trade power for service. This sounds like a bunch of clichés, but is in fact all very well done and organic. Our protagonist has power as a “deathspeaker” due to a bargain made with one of these entities: she can speak with the recently dead, but this power is mostly unused in the narrative. Near the beginning, she tries to rescue a man, a diplomat from the invading society, but can only take his essence/spirit into herself. He’s there, and conscious, while she goes about the quest of trying to sort out how to split them asunder while keeping them both alive. The relationship between her and the man in her head is very well-crafted, to the extent that I was able to willingly suspend my disbelief the whole way through. Of course, they fall for each other while living in the same head, as one does, but this is well-executed, too.

Of the books on this list that I’ve read, this is the most clearly SF rather than fantasy, which is saying a great deal. There’s magic in this world, but it’s the kind of techno-magic where things are laid out in circuits and works more or less like engineering: it can be taught, though it’s evident that some have more talent for it than others. The magic isn’t cognitive in the original Darko Suvin sense of cognitive estrangement, but it satisfies Freedman’s cognition effect, or is at least satisfaction-adjacent.

It’s a fun, exciting story: I stayed up late because I wanted to finish it. The world makes sense, the characters are solid, the ending is landed well. My only real critique of it is that I don’t think it’s doing much in the way of estranging our own society. Sure, there’s a Colonialism Is Bad trope going on, but it doesn’t really map onto our world in any significant way—and for that matter, what remains of the indigenous deities are just awful, terrible people. If I really want to stretch the estrangement, I could argue that the novel depicts how a colonizing culture reproduces its conditions of existence within the minds of the subaltern people it dominates, but honestly, it’s an adventure story far before it’s any of that. And it’s a good one. Is it the Best SF Novel of 2024? Hardly: I’m as confused as any of us as to why this list is dominated by fantasy and by YA-adjacent works. But it’s a good novel, one that I’d totally recommend to people, especially younger readers.

Michael Pitts: I just finished the novel, and I must say that I feel a bit out of my element since I rarely jump into fantasy fiction. What I appreciated about the novel, however, is its emphasis upon friendship and community within a setting scarred by colonization, fundamentalist religious sects, and class divides. The novel withstands the temptation to give our protagonist or her friends a happy and predictable resolution to their story. Instead, she emphasizes the compromises they must make, the efforts they must make to understand and sympathize with each other, and the probability that their end will not be some joyous conclusion. Hall does a wonderful job of world-building here with competing gods, Eldritch horror-influenced characters and rituals, and fascinating gadgets derived from the workings of the supernatural, but I think its major win is this emphasis upon hardship, compromise, and friendship during an era of continued, tremendous historical trauma.

Ian: One of the things that made me really appreciate this book was its sly portrayal of sexuality. We have our protagonist, and within the first couple of chapters she has a man living in her head. Then, we introduce two other women, her childhood friend and the scholar, and it’s really obvious that both of them have giant crushes on the protagonist. So I jump to the conclusion that there’s going to be some kind of three-way romance or antagonistic love triangle, and I’m maybe gritting my teeth about it, not because it’s same-sex but because I generally prefer my SFF to downplay romance.

But then the book plays beautifully with my expectations, and it becomes clear over the middle section that our protagonist is the Oblivious Straight Girl meme. The text gives me all kinds of clues that both of these women are really interested in her, and she just breezes through them: she sees what the women are doing but never jumps to they’re doing it because they have a crush on me. Nope: she just focuses on the man in her head and the romance comes from there. It becomes pretty funny by about two-thirds of the way through the text: oh, there’s the scholar batting her eyes, she must have dust in them. So, kudos for that.

Book of Love

Virginia: I can really see this being a very divisive book for a lot of reasons.

First of all, it’s 600+ pages and, as the debut novel from someone known for her short fiction, that’s going to be a hard sell for a lot of people. I, personally, would take a 600-page novel that stands alone over a 200-page “first in a series” at this point, though, so I can’t say this was a problem for me. When I first picked this up, I was so reticent to even begin, because it sounds, on the surface, like a collection of YA tropes held together with spit and fanfic familiarity. A li’l Stars Hollow-esque town where magic both mundane (music is magic, love is magic, having a home is magic, etc. etc. etc.) and supernatural (well, gods are definitely magic) is taking place amidst a bit too self-aware banter from all sides. Three teenagers! Who are chosen by fate for something greater than themselves! And discover unknown power in the process! The potent combo of an ethereally-hot-but-ethically-suspicious guy paired enticingly with a confusingly-boring-and-normal-guy-but-wow-they’re-so-intertwined-there-must-be-something-more-to-him-than-meets-the-eye-AND-HOW having a nice gay romance for eternity just off-screen (Good Omens shippers, I’m looking at you).

Ian: That’s a lot of hyphens.

Virginia: However, despite my initial hesitation based on the description alone, I soon found that this is a book ABOUT teenagers, by someone extremely familiar with all the tropes, pitfalls, and expectations surrounding YA (and romance, and fantasy) literature, that is not FOR teenagers. There’s a lot of complicated things to say about the ongoing YA-ification of science fiction (which this emphatically is not, more on that later) but without dealing with any of the nuance of it, I don’t think I could have sat through 600 pages of a YA novel without tearing out my hair. Luckily, this isn’t that. Link does a great job of writing a very adult piece of literature (hey, she won the Pulitzer for a reason!) that’s about young people without assuming her audience is at the same level of reading comprehension. It’s smart, it’s funny, it’s infuriating sometimes, these characters are little shits, and I really enjoyed the pace at which information is parceled out without infodumping or holding the audience’s hand.

The story broadly follows one single narrative arc: three teenagers died, and a year later, they’re back. No one remembers that they were dead except for their music teacher (the aforementioned confusingly-boring-so-you-know-there’s-more-there guy), someone who appears to be the devil (the hot one), and themselves. The novel covers their attempts to find out what happened to them a year ago, what’s happening now, and what larger scheme they’re a part of, all while attempting to blend in to their families and lives. These teenagers are, to a one, little shits. I love it. They make terrible choices and draw infuriating conclusions and act like they collectively share one single brain cell that they have to take turns with and honestly, it’s just nice to read about actual teenagers. They’re not supposed to be endearingly quirky, they just kind of all suck in the way all teenagers suck (sorry to any teens reading this—I say this as a former shitty teenager, myself). Of course, if you don’t like reading about frustrating people (this is very much to say that these are not anti-heroes in any way, which would make this a different kind of story), 600 pages of that would be a…lot (Goodreads reviews seem pretty divided on this front).

I will say that this is emphatically not science fiction; it’s solidly magical realism/fantasy. It very explicitly deals with magic (variously described as the same feeling as when you’re performing music, when you’re in a flow state with work, what it feels like to look at someone with love, etc.) that isn’t attributable to some kind of repeatable mechanism. It’s not particularly estranging in the Suvinian sense; it’s basically the Gilmore Girls universe with a bit more focus on race relations and the later introduction of a literal god. That’s fine if you know what you’re going into, but the most estranging thing in this book is the kinds of names bands have that no one blinks an eye at coupled with what pizza toppings they have available to them on a daily basis (fennel and preserved lemon: are you kidding me?).

One thing that I eventually found tedious was the way the author signaled that she as the author was aware of internet culture and signaling her in-group recognition with references to such—eventually to the expense of characterization. It happens frequently before this, but this is the exact moment I lost patience with it: why would a five-year-old in 2024 reference a famous line in a movie (Elle in Legally Blonde, “What, like it’s hard?”) beloved of a particular millennial feminist and frequently memetically deployed line used to indicate a gatekept/reified objective was actually quite easy to acquire/accomplish by an overlooked/(typically socially) devalued source? This Legally Blonde reference signals the author’s expected readership, not reinforces characterization (admittedly the 5 y/o is a unicorn magical construct at this point in the text so it may not even be worth worrying so much about consistency of characterization).

Anyway, I really liked it and I found a lot of the revelations and conclusions very satisfying, but I can definitely see it being a divisive book. It’s inarguable that it’s well-written, and that alone (sorry to be mean!), even aside from content-level divisiveness, makes it worth reading compared to a lot of the other and previous nominees.

The Ministry of Time

Ian: This novel had a lot going for it, and I really enjoyed it up until the final act, which is very lax and unsatisfying. The premise is that certain people are able to time travel, and that there is a British intelligence agency that carefully selects people who are missing and presumed dead in their own timeline and brings them forward to a near-future London where climate change has started to take hold in earnest. The protagonist is a British woman whose parents were refugees from Cambodia: her job is to serve as the 21C liaison for one of these travellers, who are all British from the fourteenth through nineteenth centuries. Her traveller is a naval officer and polar explorer from the mid-19C.

Most of the book is very good. The tension rests on the relationship between the two of them. He is very take-charge, British empire, unsentimental, pretty racist and sexist at the core, and she is someone who’s absorbed and embraced many of the opposite points of view. This novel does a much better job of portraying “I grew up in Britain, but I’m not white, so many people will never regard me as truly British” than Babel did: Ministry of Time shows us this rather than spending a lot of time telling us, and the way the character is portrayed gives us a lot of nuance and ambivalence, whereas Babel just wore the author’s shoulder-chip to the intense detriment of the story. The protagonist is quickly able to recognize that despite his antediluvian views on certain subjects, our naval officer is a person of genuinely good character. In addition, she can’t help but find his take-charge unsentimentality very attractive, while at the same time being cranky with herself for finding it attractive. It’s all very well done.

And then we get to the final act, which is terrible. I would have been absolutely willing to read the story of their relationship as the entirety of the book, but an ill-advised decision to shoehorn an adventure plot into the story renders it trite. There is a group of people from even further into the future who are trying to mess up the Ministry of Time, in an attempt to mitigate the catastrophic post-climate-change conditions in their own future, and once this happens, we move quickly into tedious I’m my own grandpa type bootstrapping that other time travel works have done rather better. Rarely have I gone so quickly from very much enjoying a story to wanting to put it down.

Sleeping Worlds Have No Memory

James: I’m just going to give my quick thoughts and let my more in-depth takes wait till there’s other commentary to compare with. First off, this was barely SF-adjacent. There’s a mysterious technology, but it’s more magic coded than anything else, and that’s about it. It gave more steampunk fantasy vibes than anything else, without explicitly being steampunk. This was one of the most frustrating books I’ve read in a while because there was an interesting plot, but it was buried beneath really bad prose and mediocre dialogue. A lot of the reviews for this book described the writing as poetic, which they all seem to think means drown everything in verbose descriptions. Oftentimes, I would forget what exactly was being described because some of the descriptors would go on for so long and become so abstract.

Michael: I agree here, James. I just finished the book, and—after reading this and Asunder— I feel out of my element, since both novels are very much fantasy texts, which I rarely read. I feel that my critique is limited since I just am not immersed in fantasy fiction, but the writing style seemed a not-so-great attempt at implementing the noir genre, or at least aspects of it, into a steampunk fantasy setting. The absurd opening parts in which the protagonist constantly mentions not drinking before going on a ridiculous, self-absorbed alcoholic binge for days on end because he may not succeed in his task reads like an adolescent romanticizing the self-destructive qualities of a male hero. The descriptions were definitely a distraction. The world, though, was really interesting to me: the magic, colonial history, and intrigue made for an engaging read, but the language and actions of the protagonist at times frequently make it hard to enjoy.

James: I forgot about the alcoholic binge drinking coming after he went on about not drinking! I felt at times the dialogue also suffered from a bit of “MCU snark.” Too often characters would be in high-drama situations, emotions tense, and then someone would make a snarky remark that just felt very out of place. The geopolitics were honestly fairly well done, but the pace that things moved made it hard to appreciate them more. And really the ending was so out of nowhere that it just really wrecked the tension the author had managed to build in the last third or so of the book.

Ian: I tried thrice with this and failed each time. It wasn’t a bad setup at all: high-ranking official who did the right thing is exiled to become responsible for a huge and over-budget project, and everyone is hostile to him because their power depends on the project. But it was very amateurishly written, both the prose and the organization. I put it down the first time after someone was described as thirty-thirty-five instead of thirty to thirty-five, then tried again and got to the “exiled people have magical technology”, and then after another very brief stint, it hit me that the central plot, the building of a tower, made absolutely zero sense, and that was it for me.

It is nothing like an award-nominated novel, and I get that the committee was rewarding it for having the exiled people in there and addressing it directly as genocide, but that level of representation was just drowned in bad writing.

Rakesfall

Dominick: I need to preface my remarks on this one by noting that 1) I am not generally enamored of twentieth and twenty-first century “literary” writing. Give me Tolkien over Joyce, Chandler over Faulkner, etc. (exceptions duly noted); and 2) I am especially not enamored of postmodern writing (again, exceptions duly noted). This reads like a theory student decided to go wild. When I hit the following passage, “It imbricates us and implicates us, plotless, fragmented, atomized,” in the extensively meta introductory bit, I thought, “can always already be far behind?” It was not. I will have more thoughts later, more specifically about this book.

Ian: I’ll defend Faulkner to my last breath, but what you said.

Dominick: Alright, I’ve finished. My feelings are mixed—there were bits I did enjoy a fair bit, such as the story about the dead who just sort of hang around after death, have jobs, etc.—but overall it left me cold. There are things to admire here. Chandrasekera is well-read (or so he seems to me—it’s not every day you see John Webster’s Duchess of Malfi referenced, for instance, and I was glad to see it) and has a heck of a vocabulary. I had to look up “baryonic,” among other words. There were passages I thought were well-written and effective. And Chandrasekera has a very inventive mind—there are possibly too many interesting concepts in here to resolve into coherence. In addition to nanotech, genetically redesigned humans, intergalactic colonization (though the novel remains Earthbound), terraforming (or reforming, perhaps, since it is Earth we see being rebuilt), multiple instantiations of characters, sometimes at the same time, the walking dead, ghosts, demons, gods, and other sf and fantasy standbys, we have such things as a baryonic and nonbaryonic grandmother, who cannot perceive each other and can occupy the same physical space simultaneously. So, lots of meat in the soup. On the other hand, too often the meat seems merely to have been waved over the soup than fully immersed and allowed to permeate. For instance, the baryonic grandmother: how/why is she baryonic? If she therefore exists on some other plane than the regular humans, how can she have any biological connection to the characters? The novel does not deign to answer (or even pose) such questions, which gets to my problems with it.

I mentioned in my prefatory note on this book that neither contemporary “literary” nor postmodern writing are overly appealing to me, and Chandrasekera is very fond of the tics and conventions of both. The novel seems far less interested in being a novel than in being about fiction—the sort of knowing, self-reflexive and frequently meta distancing from telling a story to playing with fictional tropes that, for me, no longer is very appealing. On the one hand, one might say that Chandrasekera is ambitious and experimental, with his narrative frame of creatures identified as ghosts watching what they conceive of as a TV series (apparently) which is (apparently) actually events in the real world mediated for them, his dipping into various narrative modes—drama, the detective story, the Scheherezadean tales within tales, the ghost story, etc.—his time frame of millions of years, and so on. However, for me, none of it seems to come together or weave back into something coherent. The “frame” is dropped after the opening segment; the mystery story peters out without resolution; the nested tales peter out; the pastiche of dramatic form modeled on Webster fades away, etc. Everything seems provisional, open to revision, irreducible to coherent meaning—tres tres post-modern. Even whether the “real” world in this novel is real is subject to interrogation. By the end of the book, I was wondering whether I should be reading all of the action as taking place inside an enormous computer simulation of reality, a reading the book seems to invite without foreclosing on.

Consequently, for me as a reader, the characters seemed to exist as cutouts to fit the “reality is subjective/mutable” thesis, and the events to have no meaning except as a sequence of events that may or may not mean something, depending on one’s frame of reference.

In short, not my cup of tea. I have avoided bringing in specific examples or quotations, to keep this comment from getting excessively long. Also, I look forward to others’ thoughts, especially if you had a more positive experience of the book than I did.

Ian: I eagerly anticipated this, and was thoroughly disappointed. I read The Saint of Bright Doors almost immediately before it, and was blown off my feet: Bright Doors deserves every ounce of praise it received. So I was ready to open this and be transported… and it’s just what my daughter would call “mid”. Everything Dom says I concur with, here. There are many dropped threads, there’s a big dollop of ungrounded High Modernist prose that doesn’t improve the story, the characters did nothing for me. It shared with Babel, another winner, the feel of let me tell you (at length) instead of show you about postcoloniality, and it really suffers from this. Whereas in Bright Doors, Chandrasekera gives you a really nuanced and gorgeous portrait of a (post)colonized subject coming to the metropole, Rakesfall repeatedly bludgeons you over the head with a very reductive take on the issue.

I did like the dead, though: I parsed them as being people who could no longer exist under the near-total domination by the (ex?)colonizing society: that because they were too imbued with their original culture, they fell out of the dominated society.

It seemed clear to me by about halfway through that Rakesfall is not the follow-up to Bright Doors, but rather a novel Chandrasekera wrote prior to Bright Doors and couldn’t get published: once he became a hit, he was able to tidy this up and publish it. Good for him, but while the book isn’t bad; it’s just not award-nomination good.

I should be extremely clear here that to the absolute best of my ability, my mostly-negative opinion of Rakesfall has nothing to do with its being written by someone from a formerly colonized society, or with being at least partially about (de/post)colonization. On the contrary, I think SF (the novel is barely SF-adjacent) would benefit from more of both.

A Sorceress Comes to Call

Ian: This was the first of the nominees I read, and I spent the entire time wondering why on earth it was nominated. It’s… competent, I suppose. The story is set in a quasi-18th-century world, where magic is quite rare but present and effective. It’s told through the POV of the sorceress’s daughter, who has been dominated (sorcerously and otherwise) by her mother into obedience. The mother, a commoner, needs to marry a rich man to support herself in luxury, so she masquerades as a noblewoman fallen on hard times in order to seduce the lord of the manor. The lord’s middle-aged sister is not fooled, and undertakes a plan to remove her ensorcelled brother from the sorceress’s control: the plan ultimately ropes in the daughter, who has begun to figure out that her mother is horrible.

At no one point in this story was I thinking well, that played with my expectations. By about one-third of the way through, I wrote down the rest of the plot on a scrap of paper, and got all but a few details correct. I found it boring and tedious to get through, because I already knew what was going to happen. There’s nothing innovative or even all that interesting about this story: it’s not SF by any stretch, it doesn’t perform any real estrangement, it does nothing with calling form into question. What prompted anyone to nominate this?, is what I kept asking myself.

It did take me way too long to suss out that the story is an inverted retelling of the Goose Girl fairy tale, but the actual goose girl (the sister) and the daughter are separate people, here, which distracted me from the parallel. When I read the book, it seemed as if the writer had just cooked up on the spur of the moment that the sister was an accomplished tender of prize geese, and then didn’t bother to go back and work this into the beginning of the book so it didn’t appear to come out of nowhere.

I usually call this Goldfinching a book, after Donna Tartt’s very disappointing novel of the same name: the author doesn’t bother to go back and smooth out the introduction of this suddenly-critical piece of information. In Tartt’s book, it becomes important to the plot about three-quarters of the way through that the narrator’s Manic Pixie Dreamgirlfriend’s actual boyfriend grew up on some kind of ashram or commune, but the book is so lazily written that Tartt didn’t then go back and insert this information when we first meet the boyfriend. In fairness to Kingfisher, I was supposed to have been clever enough to pick up on the fact that this is a retelling of the Goose Girl story and expected geese to be there: the horse’s name in both stories is Falada. In my defence, I think I read the original story when I was about fifteen. Also, the novel just isn’t all that good. As with Spear from last year, did we really need a retelling of this story?

The one aspect where I think the novel does deserve a lot of praise is in its portrayal of the sorceress: it’s a very accurate and detailed depiction of a psychopath, one that gets all the details right, especially with respect to the psychopath’s interiority and how they can or cannot fool others. Impulsivity, grandiosity, violence (she murders a lot of people, but it’s boring, because almost all of it is off screen) and the inability to consistently keep the lies straight over time: grandiose narcissism leads to lack of attention to detail. In fact, now that I think about it—and I’ll Goldfinch myself and not go back and act as if I’d planned this all along—maybe this is the estrangement function of the novel, given that we here in the USA are now ruled by a grandiose narcissist and psychopath whose lack of attention to detail is really beginning to affect his approval ratings.

James: I just finished this myself and I find myself agreeing pretty much wholeheartedly with your assessments. It’s a perfectly fine book, but it’s so far from award-worthy I’m confused as to why it got nominated at all. There really was never anything to subvert my expectations, and while I definitely didn’t predict the plot as well as you seem to have, too many of the “twists” I was able to see coming a mile off. That Penelope the ghost would be the one to embody wine felt so obvious the moment Lord Evermore was deemed to not be right. He was portrayed more opposite of him than Penelope, where multiple passages were dedicated to her personality.

I also found that there’s seems to have been a desire by Kingfisher to incorporate Cordelia’s father into the plot in some meaningful way, but ended up deciding against it, and like your Goldfinching, just never went back to clean up the prior references to him to make it feel less like a point of emphasis. The little bit at the end where Cordelia ponders trying to track him down and dismisses it felt like a bad attempt to make it meaningful. I guess that’s actually more an inversion of Goldfinching than anything really.

Like I said, it’s not a bad book, it’s just so surface level that I would never consider nominating it. It’s clearly not SF, and it feels more like a beach read fantasy. Something quick and easy to get through on your downtime on vacation, not something to really take in and consider. I will give it credit like you Ian in its portrayal of sorcery and sorcerers. Very grounded and I appreciated the limits to their abilities that made them feel dangerous but not all powerful. And the narcissism and manipulation were very well written.

Final Thoughts

Virginia: I think there’s something fundamentally different going on in the publishing and awarding world right now that has developed as a result of social media, broadly understood. Not to invoke Stuart Hall or Pierre Bourdieu too strongly, but it seems to me that the kinds of texts being recognized and rewarded (which are qualitatively different than the kinds of texts being written more generally) are more about signaling a certain in-group affinity than evincing literary quality or adhering to any kind of genre definitions. We could argue ad infinitum about whether those genre definitions (or how we measure literary quality) are valuable in and of themselves, but given the media landscape in which contemporary SF is being published, they have to appeal to the most terminally online among us in order to turn a profit. And as long as publishers are in the business of turning a profit (they are—no need for us to get Marxist about whether or not this ought to be true; objectively these texts are products that their publishing houses require to reach a minimum expected threshold to invest in their publication in the first place), they need to appeal to the largest audience of readers possible, and those audiences are online. Anyone with even a passing familiarity with online discourse communities such as booktok or Goodreads knows that what you read and how you position yourself vis-à-vis that text signals belonging within certain groups and encodes information about one’s own identity. So are we really surprised that this discursive turn is evident in the current crop of authors’ own writing?

Ian: omg now I need to go back and reread Bordieu.

Dominick: I read Virginia’s summative statement before beginning my own, so I will begin by saying that her consideration of how the online world is having a significant impact on how/for whom fiction is produced—and what will sell—is very persuasive to me. Indeed, I had considered beginning my own summative comment by wondering whether, being 62, I have had my tastes too thoroughly formed by the SF of previous decades to be able to appreciate fully what current writers—or anyway, current writers who don’t seem to me to resonate with SF through, say, the 1980s—are doing. Which of course does not delegitimize what they are doing; it just makes me generally cool (or worse) to it. Ian’s reference to The Terraformers leaving him still feeling salty a year later hits home to me—a novel that deals with the kinds of things I have often enjoyed in earlier SF, but not in a style or structure that I find speaks to me. When I read current/recent SF, the stuff I tend to like is what, say, Anne Leckie, or Jo Walton, or Peter Watts, does—they write books of genuine Sf (sometimes very thoroughly so) that without much modification (maybe moreso for Watts) could have been published twenty or thirty years ago, or more, but without feeling dated today (to me, anyway). Indeed, Jo Walton reminds me somewhat of one of my favourite SF writers, Phyllis Gotlieb.

That said, it’s perhaps not surprising that, for me, a book that did not get nominated for either award but that hews much more closely to my own preferences in the genre, The Mercy of Gods, by James SA Corey, would have seemed worthy of nomination. Yes, it’s first in a series; yes, it’s more or less a doorstop (over 400 pages), but it’s far more rigorously SF (to my taste) than any of the nominees I read this rear, it’s grounded in a reënvisioning of the biblical Book of Daniel (I often enjoy SF that echoes older works, as Dan Simmons did with Chaucer, for instance, or Silverberg did with Philoctotes, though not so much so for what Veronica Roth did with Antigone). It’s space opera with high stakes, well-conceived aliens, good adventure, relevant thematic elements, etc. Fundamentally old-fashioned, basically, while also being up-to-date.

Leimar: I’m of two minds concerning this year’s nominees. On one hand, I’m very appreciative of anti-gatekeeping practices, the expansion of what stories are told and who tells them, the breaking of genre boundaries beyond the established [read: antiquated and restrictive] canon, and the overall infusion of new ideas/concepts/experiences [of true novum]. As a queer vaguely-shaped-woman POC individual, I have long been tired of reading the same types of tropy genre-problems plaguing the same type of tropy genre-protagonists. Therefore, whether it be clumsy course-correction on the part of the awards committee or even outright tokenism, I can’t help but feel a small sense of “hey, at least…”.

But on the other hand and precisely because of that, I also feel frustration with the nominees this year (particularly the one I was able to read fully, Nest). We need science fiction stories, not just safe escapist fantasy; we need nuanced, complex, and even uncomfortable and fearless representation; we need writing that isn’t indulgent fanficky MCU/Whedon-snark. I suppose, to echo Dom, my tastes also skew to Leckie, Walton, Jamisin—even TJ Klune, if we’re including easier-read fantasy-leaning fiction, though none of them had SF novels published in 2024. That said, Klune’s Somewhere Beyond the Sea (solid fantasy, 2024) explores complex queerness and the what makes a monster a monster question far more directly and uncompromisingly than Someone You Can Build a Nest In.

James: I think comparing the Hugo nominees to Nebula nominees is helpful in that one is fan awarded and the other is in a sense peer-awarded. And in this year’s comparisons, it seems like there’s a lot of overlap in opinion here that true SF is being pushed out of award discussions for more fantasy or SF-lite works, often with very similar themes: anti-imperialism, representation, anti-capitalist, etc. This is not inherently bad, but it does feel like certain themes need to present to get consideration right now rather than pure literary merit. That makes sense for a fan awarded prize, less so for peer-awarded. There’s a lot more diversity now in the representation of characters and authors (good) but less diversity in style or stories, which I personally don’t believe to be good. It feels like there’s less nuance to many of these nominees, where their central message is very obvious from the forefront and never very subtle. I didn’t feel I got challenged into new thinking much while reading. My personal favorite of 2024 that I felt should have been in every award list, Absolution, by Jeff VanderMeer, was a real challenging read in a good sense. It was by far the most unique read of last year for me, and involved characters who were incredibly complicated and could never been easily categorized as good or bad. Yet it didn’t make it to either of Hugo or Nebula shortlists (it did make the Locus, Dragon, and LA Book prize short lists, and the series it is part of made the Hugo Best Series shortlist).

VanderMeer seemingly shares much of the politics of fandom as a whole, but Absolution didn’t focus on those themes, and instead was a complex story with unreliable narrators that ends inconclusively (much like the rest of the Southern Reach series). It would have stuck out like a sore thumb to these other works which had much more straightforward plots and characters with obvious themes. The best way I can describe the latest nominees is “comfort” fiction, and a big part of that may truly just be a response to the pressures and anxieties many readers are dealing with in the real world right now.

Ian: Just to be clear, my objection to The Terraformers wasn’t on its structure, or even really its style, but rather that it was unbearably poorly written. I do think Virginia is correct: that award nomination committees are now catering, consciously or otherwise, to online communities, and these communities are dominated by Extremely Online people, who almost as a rule lack nuance and will shout down complexity in favor of bumper-sticker logic. These books represent marginalized peoples, so they must be good, is the argument that seems to be being made. I’m absolutely willing to read about marginalized peoples, but I want the books to be complex and nuanced even if they’re quite different from the kind of 80s SF I grew up on. And these… aren’t. I’m not an Extremely Online person and frankly can’t stand them, so it’s understandable that the books they choose as worthy of award nominations aren’t at all to my taste, except Asunder, which still wasn’t really what I’d think of as nomination-worthy. I’ve read both Mercy of Gods and Absolution, and agree that they’re far better than anything here.

The question is, what can we do to re-introduce nuance and complexity, all without (being perceived as) re-whitewashing SF? I’m certainly not going to go onto Goodreads, which I abandoned long ago as hopelessly toxic, or Tik Tok, about which the less said the better, and argue with Extremely Online people about how yes, that book does represent marginalized communities, but it’s also at best mediocre and oversimplified, and fantasy rather than SF. There are so many things I’d rather do, even including my regular job. I don’t know what the answer is, here, but I do wonder to what extent the sort of books that are nominated by Extremely Online people actually sell well. I’ll bet that Mercy of Gods was read by hundreds of thousands more people than any of these nominees—and I think that’s a legitimate concern.

Leimar: And perhaps we’re all doing old man yells at cloud [or insert Principal Skinner’s “no, it’s the children who are wrong”] because we’re not the target audience? That said, I’d argue that being Terminally Online limits and atrophies people’s worldviews, and we should be able to expect award-winning authors to engage in more worldliness(?) than that, and be better read, and better edited, and better structured, right?

Ian: We are the target audience, or at least a target audience. I think that’s the (or a) source of the cognitive dissonance here, that people who have been SF fans for years or decades are not well-represented by these nominations.

Leimar: Fair. I meant it more along the lines of, maybe 20-year-olds are the audience?

Ian: I think I mean like one of several audiences, but right now they’re drowning out everyone else. Better than Sad Puppies, that’s for certain.

James: So I still heavily use Reddit, and the r/PrintSF sub has a lot of obnoxious bro-style bitching about minorities and such in SF, but one thing I think someone pointed out there that is meaningful is that there are so many different awards now, you can almost always find an award that will have winners catered to your interests more. The Hugos and Nebulas are easily the most recognizable, but there are many others that will be more based on actual literary merit.

Ian: The dominant discourse on r/PrintSF has bloody awful taste, that’s for certain. No, Blindsight and Hyperion are not the two best SF books ever written. I don’t even think they’re very good. In fairness to them, though, they’re not so much bitching about minorities in SF as they are overvaluing a kind of dude-centric ideas-over-character SF.

James: Yeah, that’s actually a fairly accurate depiction of the discourse there. I really never participate in the discourse, just lurk and occasionally second a book recommendation.

Ian: Probably the best way to use Reddit.

Again, we want to hear your thoughts on these nominees, on the state of SF, anything you’d care to add. Hit us up at icampbell@gsu.edu.

Binary Classification of Science Fiction: Examining Hard and Soft SF



Binary Classification of Science Fiction: Examining Hard and Soft SF

Enze Shi

Science fiction (SF) is a relatively new literary genre with contributions from many new authors. Due to this, it has lacked a consistent definition amongst readers as compared to other genres like horror and drama. SF emerged from base fiction and is differentiated by its involvement of science and realism. For some, SF is defined as the straightforward combination of science, imagination, and fiction. However, there are also more theoretical approaches. For example, Darko Suvin defines SF as a literary genre whose necessity is the presence and interaction of estrangement and cognition (372). Paul Kincaid stated that “the inability to define science fiction” has been long recognized (409). This definitional ambiguity has created ongoing debate within SF scholarship. This controversy has its benefits; it has helped redefine the boundaries between SF and the other genres, allowing scholars to examine why this genre emerged from conventional fiction.

SF had rapidly grown since the early 19th century. Two centuries of development created a huge catalog in SF. This proliferation not only made this genre more prevalent but also let readers and scholars develop an internal classification: hard and soft SF. In simple words, hard SF adheres to science and reality to a higher degree than soft SF. While the binary classification of SF into hard and soft creates a convenient framework for understanding, it ultimately oversimplifies the genre’s rich complexity. Overemphasizing categorizing hard and soft SF leads to misplaced attention and distorted interpretation in SF criticism. Instead, SF criticism should prioritize its primary purpose: exploring universal questions, challenging readers’ perspectives, and influencing reality. A more meaningful application of the hard and soft classification is through relative comparison; stating a work is “harder” or “softer” than others, rather than assigning absolute labels. This approach acknowledges the interdependent and overlapping nature of this category, allowing for a more comprehensive evolution without forcing a reductive classification onto complex work.

Defining Hard and Soft Science Fiction

Hard and soft SF have subjective and vague guidelines: hard SF adheres more precisely to scientific principles and realism, while soft SF has more imaginative elements. However, these guidelines often overlap, making it possible for a work to qualify as both hard and soft SF simultaneously. Thus, scholars have attempted to define them more accurately. Allen Steele, for instance, defined hard SF as “the form of imaginative literature that uses either established or carefully extrapolated science as its backbone.” (4) Meanwhile, Brave New Words: The Oxford Dictionary of Science Fiction offers two complementary definitions of soft SF; first, as fiction emphasizing the social science and focusing on societal, cultural, or political development rather than natural science and technology; second, as SF where scientific elements serve as the background rather than central focus (Prucher 191). Nevertheless, in practice, many SF narratives still contain elements of both categories, challenging this binary classification.

Dune as a Case Study of Classification Tension

A prime example of the hard and soft debate is Frank Herbert’s Dune (1965), a novel that defies simple categorizations and illustrates the limits of binary classification. Dune can be credibly placed in either category, leading to debate over its hard or soft classification. Examining how scholars justify each side, we can see how such rigid distinctions often fail to rigorously and objectively define SF works.

Many scholars argue that Dune contains strong elements of hard SF. John W. Campbell, the editor of Analog Science Fiction and Fact, where Dune was originally published, specifically referred to it as “hard science-fiction worked out in meticulous detail.” (592–3) In speaking of Villeneuve’s 2021 film adaptation, Burgett argues that it is much harder and more grounded than most other SF films. Their justifications are particularly adapted from Dune’s ecologically grounded world-building and plausible technologies. Frank Herbert’s detailed explanation of Arrakis’s water cycle, sandworms’ biology, and desert climate reflects scientific realism. Gerald Jonas noted that Herbert “so completely worked out the interactions of man and beast and geography and climate,” that Dune became the standard for ecological SF. While some may argue that ecology belongs to the soft sciences, proponents of the hard SF justify its classification using Herbert’s logical consistency from real environmental science. In addition, the technologies in Dune, while not heavily described, also reflect real scientific concepts. Devices like stillsuits that recycle water and ornithopters that mimic bird flight are theoretically possible to create (Kennedy). Thus, Herbert’s attention to scientific possibilities in his setting is a crucial justification. Altogether, these elements provide strong arguments for critics and readers who believe Dune is a valid candidate for hard SF.

On the other hand, many scholars believe that Dune is a soft SF work by definition, not primarily because it lacks scientific detail, but because it focuses more on social, cultural, and psychological exploration. For example, Xu Tengyue explicitly analyzes Villeneuve’s Dune as an example of a “soft science fiction film,” noting that soft SF film “pays more attention to the expression of human values and story lines” rather than elaborate special effects or technical applications (82).  In other words, Dune emphasizes “soft” science (anthropology, sociology, psychology, political science, ecology) over the “hard” sciences like physics (Kennedy). Soft SF deals directly or indirectly with anthropology, ecology, psychology, and sociology (Nicholls). By this criterion, Dune fits the soft SF genre. Moreover, its plot centers on culture (the Fremen society), politics (imperial and feudal power struggles), religion (Messianic prophecy and mythmaking), and psychology (Paul’s mental training and prescient visions). Additionally, some argue that the deliberate suppression of science in Dune makes it soft SF. Herbert does introduce devices such as stillsuits and ornithopters, technologies grounded in plausible engineering. However, his deliberate omission of computers, robots, and artificial intelligence reflects a larger thematic purpose: to emphasize human evolution, religious myth, and political systems over technical advancement. By intentionally downplaying certain advanced technology, he focused on the essence of humanity. These approaches align with soft SF, offering strong arguments on the side of the debate that supports Dune’s soft classification. 

This debate over Dune reveals a deeper issue: hard and soft classification often reflects personal interpretation more than objective analysis. It highlights its fundamental inability to rigidly classify any work of SF. Whether labeled hard or soft SF depends largely on which elements a critic chooses to emphasize. To justify their argument in this debate, the interpreters spend a great deal of time finding and analyzing the scientific connection, which is not the primary focus of SF.

Examining SF’s Focus in Global Contexts: Western and Chinese SF Evolution

Overemphasizing the hard and soft debate often leads critics to hyper-fixate on a work’s scientific accuracy. However, solely integrating science into fiction has never been the primary focus of SF. Instead, its primary focus lies in its potential to address broad social, ethical, and philosophical questions. To understand these deeper focuses, we better step back from rigid classification and examine how SF has developed across different cultural contexts. A comprehensive examination cannot focus solely on Western SF works such as Frankenstein, The Foundation series, and 2001: A Space Odyssey. Although Western SF is fundamental to the genre, there are other major players in the larger world of SF. Chinese SF is one of these significant contributors. Liu Cixin’s novel The Three‑Body Problem (2008; Eng. trans. 2014) and his novella The Wandering Earth (2000; film adaptation 2019) have both achieved international acclaim. Shaped by distinct political, economic, and cultural histories, Western and Chinese SF provide broader and unique insights into the primary focus of SF through a holistic analysis.

Starting with Western SF, it is widely believed that Western SF emerged with Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein (1818), which used scientific curiosity to examine the ethical and moral dilemmas of its time (Ellis 27). In the late 19th century, the genre expanded with Jules Verne’s adventurous voyages and H.G. Wells’s cautionary tales, which both integrated new scientific ideas with speculation, but Verne leaned toward scientific fantasies while Wells leaned toward scientific romances (Ege 93). Entering the early to mid-20th century, the so-called “Golden Age of SF” had authors like Isaac Asimov, Arthur C. Clarke, and Robert A. Heinlein, whose works not only entertained but also reflected contemporary issues and ideas related to scientific progress. Nowadays, SF books and films vary greatly in topics and settings, addressing complex societal, environmental, and technological issues. Its greater flexibility in world-setting and range of topics reaches a larger audience. Throughout these periods, Western SF evolved not merely to speculate on technological advancements, but to reflect contemporary messages and issues.

Besides Western SF, in Raphals’s deep study, Chinese SF development can be generalized into three distinct phases: the utopian phase in the late Qing dynasty; the pedagogical phase in the 1950s; and the speculative phase since 1989 (82). The utopian phase began with the translation of Western literature and the sparking of innovative thought among the populations instead of having captive minds. The scholars proposed that mass translations would help spread advanced Western knowledge into China (82). Additionally, some representative indigenous SF works, for example, Liang Qichao’s Future of New China, commonly involved the prediction of China having a bright future after adopting science (83). The formation of the pedagogical phase aligns with the founding of the People’s Republic of China (1949). Here, SF’s main role was to promote and cement the ideas of Marxism and Maoism, shaping the population’s ideology (Raphal 84). In this phase, SF was integrated into education, which is the most effective approach to control and shape ideology. Lastly, the phase currently ongoing, the speculative phase, began the year of the Tiananmen Square massacre, 1989 (85). The restrictions on speculative literature were eased by the government, allowing a flowering of Chinese SF that directly grappled with the legacy of the Cultural Revolution. This phase answered the rapid technological growth, greater openness, and the evolution of public thought. Across all the phases, Chinese SF has been a mirror of the nation’s ideological shifts and social anxieties. 

SF as a Medium for Message, Not Just Method

Examining the evolution of SF across both Western and Chinese contexts reveals a consistent pattern: SF has always assumed multiple unspoken roles, such as conveying messages, examining dilemmas, and critiquing ideology. While scientific concepts provide the framework, they do not have to be the message itself. Instead, they serve as a platform upon which the deeper messages are built. Thus, SF’s focus is on utilizing scientific concepts as a gateway to explore deeper societal and philosophical questions, often imagined through future worlds. This broader function of SF is what critics overlook when they fixate solely on hard or soft classification.

In the case of Dune, the argument about its classification as hard or soft obscures its deeper literary value. The excessive focus on the debate over its binary identification can overlook the work’s rich exploration of themes like political corruption, religious manipulation, and messianic power. These messages are the primary focus and crucial to its literary value. However, they could not be spotlighted while solely focusing on the narrative’s scientific connection.

When Labels Limit: Cognitive Heuristics and Reader Bias

The debate over Dune is just an example. Similar debates emerge whenever a popular SF work is released, which reflects a broader cognitive tendency to simplify complex information. The frequent use of hard and soft labels in marketing and reviews of SF has led many critics and fans to support keeping and promoting this distinction in SF. They argue that the binary labels encourage more audiences who lack deep knowledge in SF to step into this field. The human brain tends to break down complicated and multifactorial entities or problems into a few numbers of ramifications to generalize and make it easier to understand. When presented with only two clear options, as with the binary classification of hard versus soft SF, our brains can more easily process and understand the information, analogous to the binary 0 and 1 mechanism in computer science. This quick and straightforward determination is also called the one-reason decision-making heuristic. This heuristic shows that by focusing on a single, decisive cue rather than an exhaustive set of details, individuals can achieve surprisingly accurate judgments quickly and with minimal cognitive load. As Todd and Gigerenzer argue, heuristics, some in particular, produce accurate decisions by exploiting the structure of applied information and environment (167). Consequently, using a broad, easily digestible label invites non-experts into the field by applying our natural tendency to reduce complex information into clear categories. 

In fact, the use of heuristics in SF criticism does make SF more accessible and appealing to a broad audience to some degree. However, it not only generates simplicity and popularity but also preconceived notions or bias. In their influential study, Tversky and Kahneman illustrate that people often rely on heuristics, such as the representativeness heuristic, to make judgements, even when they lead to “systematic and predictable errors” (1131). In terms of SF, that means once a reader or viewer approaches a work with a preconceived perspective that it is either hard or soft, they are more likely to unconsciously focus on the elements that confirm their assumption. As a result, they might overlook other significant elements that are against their assumption, leading to an incomplete and biased interpretation.

Thematic Depth and Real-World Influence in SF

In practice, authors generally do not begin the creative process with a determined intention of making a work that strictly adheres to one sub-genre over the other; instead, they weave together various ideas, techniques, and influences that challenge binary categorization. Like all literature, SF is built on complex narratives, themes, and elements, and rarely do all aspects of a SF work align perfectly within the confines of either hard or soft. This reality makes the argument that justifies a SF work being classified as hard or soft problematic, as it tends to selectively extract supporting elements from throughout the book or film. Therefore, when critics or readers rely solely on these binary classifications, they lack an overview of the work’s whole picture. It ultimately compromises the possibility of a holistic, objective review, which then causes bias and distorted interpretation. 

Therefore, rather than sticking with rigid labels, SF criticism should shift toward evaluating the themes, messages, and real-world impact of these works. We can see some of the ideal approaches that have been made while reviewing famous SF works like Isaac Asimov’s Foundation series and Liu Cixin’s The Dark Forest (sequel to The Three-Body Problem). Through their comprehensive analysis, we can see the valuable insights it brings.

Specifically, both have conveyed profound messages and challenged readers’ understanding. For instance, in Isaac Asimov’s Foundation series, science serves as the framework for exploring the rise and fall of civilizations through the emergence of psychohistory, a kind of mathematical sociology. Here, the scientific elements are not the core focus; they are the platform that supports challenging questions about human destiny and social organization. Similarly, Liu Cixin’s The Dark Forest uses complex scientific theories and the vastness of space to showcase humanity’s vulnerability, existential risks, and the consequences of our technological development. Importantly, he proposes a hypothesis among universal civilizations—the Dark Forest hypothesis. In both examples, the quality of science, whether perceived as strong or weak, is subordinate to the larger narrative. Psychohistory and the Dark Forest hypothesis represent two notions in SF theorizing by Asimov and Liu, respectively. Psychohistory is Asimov’s purely fictional mathematical system, while the Dark Forest hypothesis, though dramatized by Liu, reflects real scientific speculation about the Fermi Paradox. However, both authors demonstrate the logical consistency of these concepts within their created, reality-analogous worlds. These theories—one fictional, one speculative—challenge readers’ understanding of society and science and offer provocative predictions about humanity’s future.

Another crucial criterion for SF criticism is examining works’ capacity to indirectly bring influential impacts to reality. Kevin L. Young and Charli Carpenter investigated whether and how popular SF media influence public attitudes toward emerging military technologies, specifically autonomous weapon systems (AWS). Individuals who report higher consumption of SF—measured by the number of iconic killer-robot franchises they have viewed—are significantly more likely to oppose the development and deployment of AWS (573). The direct impact SF has brought into the world is just a mere example of how imaginative narratives can shape reality. 

Conclusion: Toward a More Holistic SF Criticism

If SF criticism consistently centered on the purposes that have been presented above, Foundation, The Dark Forest, and SF’s impact on the public opinion about AWS, then the authors’ creative intentions could be more accurately understood and appreciated. This shift not only reduces misinterpretation caused by the rigid hard and soft classification but also creates a more dynamic and meaningful environment in SF. While the binary classification may serve as a helpful guideline when used for relative comparison, it must not overshadow the SF’s larger literary and philosophical contributions. Encouraging such an evaluative approach would push the authors to produce more thoughtful and thematically rich SF works, which focus well on the primary focus and unspoken rules. It could ultimately push the SF community to grow more receptive to diverse voices and exploration, promoting the genre’s continued evolution.

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Enze Shi is a researcher who focuses on science fiction, translational, and outcomes research. Being an immigrant from China, both Chinese culture and Western culture had a significant influence on his academic and personal growth. Integrating the perspectives and contributions of both Chinese and Western SF allows him to bring notions with novel approaches. Shi is a student of the Texas Academy of Mathematics and Science at the University of North Texas. There, he conducts chemistry research and is involved in Chinese philosophy classes, being active in both STEM and humanities fields.